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This story is gold, keep it coming.
5149911 Don't worry, more will be along soon.
very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next
I haven't read it yet, but the synopsis confuses me for two reasons:
The first is how they were able to imprison Malthael. I've played D3 extensively and if an entire planet of humans (and nephalem) and angel intermediaries couldn't, how did ponies?
The second is the inclusion of clop. I do not want to read about Malthael having sex with Twilight Sparkle.
5150252
Well the obvious reason is that he didn't have full control over his powers, thus making him extremely easy to capture. At least, that's what I feel will be the reason.
You get a like and fave from me
There are MANY possibilities here
and I plan on being around to read them 
Only 2 words. MORE please
none can stop death buuut sunset did huh
My only question is why the fuck twilight was at the crystal empire.
5151490 Question do you not like it?
Its so....
I feel like its going to be a truly epic story
..... why can't I have nice ideas 
Keep it up.
While the story itself is original,(haven't seen Mathael being used)I don't think that you should start off the romance this fast.
The fact that Sunset likes him just like that is bizarre at best. Why does she like him? She was originally a pony, so why the sudden love interest for a human? There is alot of explaining to do in the oncoming chapters.
Other then that, kewl story.
All of my yes
Pretty good, but it's advancing a bit fast, though that could just be me seeing as I read WAY to fast and I'm used to being more immersed in the story (As in I get one of those large 400-700 page books from the Library and finish it in about 3-4 days, and that's with school).
Is this going to be like a Nix-Nightmare Moon or a regular one.
5153363 Regular.
You kinda need to see about getting some kind of spacer when changing individual points of view
Being an example, also you need an editor. Nothing really all that bad but it could stand to be gone over
Dun dun duannnnnn
i will keep an eye on this
nice history!
I know ya just updated....... But please have another soon. Pleeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeee
Harem-no-jutsu is a go!
And Malthael has no weaknesses. Only a massive amount of damage will stop him. To bad they don't have a nephalim.
One word MAOR
5151511 weird yah?
Moon, Sunset and Trixie! Talk about an interesting harem.
MAOR!
Not sure how I felt about the whole Sunset and Moon thing...
Seemed kind of out of place and thrown in there.
Other than that, hopefully it doesn't distort the rest of the romance of Sunset and Mal too much! Nice chapter!
5177714 Once you get to know our version of Nightmare Moon, it won't seem that out of place. As for interrupting the romance between Sunset and Mal, I don't think it does, but I'm sure someone will disagree with me about that.
*clap* . . . *clap* . . . *clap*
It's a great story so far, but could you put breaker lines to separate the transitions it makes it easier to see what is said to each new prospective?
To bad we can't favorate individual chapters
This one'd be in that selection for MANY different reasons.
Also, Nightmare Moon, Sunset and Trixie? Lucky bastard
More please or as the Internet puts it MOAR
Is he based death from darksiders 2?
5199361 No, Malthael is from the Diablo series.
Must ... not give ... innnnn
just do it give in
Effin 'ell fine .... ... ... Dawwwwwwwwww
Loving the pure Sunset shipping!
Love.
Ing.
It!
Please don't let this turn into a clichéd harem fic...
This is a pretty good chapter,so good job thunderclap
5200616 Don't just thank me, NewUnitedEmpire wrote just as much of it as I did.
I can say that the clop is pretty much straight forward and well below what I considered good clop writings...
But, I'm here to see how the story progress...
I have a feeling that he will sorta become the sort of king to the dward?
The issue with Prance will soon blow out into all out war.
Maltael?Clop?Colored horses?
Wars... wars everywhere! Malthael's job is going to be tough.
Well it seems a lot of nations don't give a flying "buck" about Equestria's soverienty.
No matter just HOW MUCH the gang needs a REAL wake up call, I hope they send Griffonia a package of plucked and shaved catbird, COD
Also, CHRISSY
5202383 You really don't get the undertones do you?
5202674 Not often but a lot of the time that I do, I ignore them
War!
Oh shit *gulp*
You need an editor though...I see a lot of misspells, grammars problem and some stuff that just doesn't make sense...\
I am not fit for the job obviously.
Heh...
That were wrap up rather neat...
And no, more!