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SwiperTheFox
This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.
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First... and i agree with him... FUCK GETTING FIXED!!! I WILL BE WHAT I AM!!! *not to mention i am not that violent unless provoked and it takes a lot to make me fight*
what does it mean to be FIXED by that way twilight is acting
I DONT WANNA BE FIXED!!!!!!!!
You know Cheerilee isn't a unicorn right?
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My bad, I wrote it with Twilight w/o Cheerilee but then gave Cheerilee part of Twilight's earlier scenes as well as tacked on Cheerilee later on to interplay in the dialogue. That mushed physical descriptions together and muddled things. Will fix.
481919Okay then, disregard the msg. I sent then.
Erm...
A bit slapdash compared to your other works and I feel with a bit (lot) more polish, this would be perfect.
So many questions...
And then I realize it was merely a frame device to get the anon into bed with Colgate. Confoud these clopfics, they drive me to think.
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I'm glad that you at least liked it overall.
What was it about the details that you found issues with?
481981 How crazy Twi seemed, how shallow the world seemed (pony visa? Wat.) and how short the scene was. Also finding the significant lack of multiple oral sessions on Colgate (without concent on the second and third) disconcerting.
Essentially you must construct aditiona-...er... you must add more sex (oral) and less wat.
Also still waiting for the Twi/Human Twi F/F comfort sex.
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>How crazy Twi seemed
How is she crazy? She's acting like, well, Twilight to me-- getting bogged down in technical details while being socially thick and callous to other people/ponies' feelings (I love Twilight, but she's so often like that). She's also peeved at how so many human males have been popping up in Equestria and causing mayhem, discord, etc.
>how shallow the world seemed (pony visa? Wat.)
It's my mythology for my HiE stories-- they can't stay long, but those who stay become citizens with legal rights. Thus, they get a visa. Now, for this fic, I did want to stress pretty hard that the ponies are sick of humans and they're often negative ways... but I wouldn't see that as 'shallow'. I see it as realistic.
and how short the scene was
It's shorter than my other scenes, usually. I was going for a more "realistic" sex scene where the female partner fails ("pulling a guy" by cumming too fast) and the guy is clueless, not really knowing what to do and thus being too fast. Plus, I felt like making the scene short made more sense for the story (it's about cherry popping / 'fixing' guys more than 'making love to them').
>Also finding the significant lack of multiple oral sessions on Colgate (without concent on the second and third) disconcerting.
See above. Although I'm a little confused here. He did eat her out; he was just fast (going for more of a realistic picture here). What's the problem?
>Also still waiting for the Twi/Human Twi F/F comfort sex.
I really don't think I can do that (or, I guess I can try to write that but I sure wouldn't enjoy it and the story would thus suffer for that fact). f/f really, really is not my thing. I only like f/f most of the time if there's a heavy kink aspect like: threesomes, foursomes, orgies, mother/daughter sex, sister/sister sex, rape, intense bondage, mind control, a girl being 'softened up' by another girl in order to be ready for a guy, and so on. Even then, it's extremely hit or miss.
482055 curse you and your coherant logic....
I shall return in several hours time when it not 4:00am.
I was thinking of some other kind of "fixing". Yeah, you get that thought when you have 4 cats in your house, a few dying to be replaced with another cat... It's not that my family is crazy cat lady type, but just cat loving. So, when I saw "fixing", I thought some terrifying thoughts. Anyways, HOLY SHAT, dat was awesome!
oh.... nevermind i was thinking something more evil... if that is "fixing" SIGN ME UP!!! :P
481910 Yeah, I was just going to say that.
Probably should change that ;D
what they said fix him i thought they meant chopping his....
I liked it... a little too much.
Good job!
I may just be stupid but, why is Colgate soaked?
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Two reasons.
1= She wanted to look sexier. I guess, in my writing universe, wet mane = nudity. Since ponies are already naked, getting wet is their version of human women talking off their clothes.
2= She wanted to have him follow a trail that takes him to her, in Twilight's newly being built bedroom, rather than just do him inside the prison-like cell. Getting wet leaves a clear water trail, and it works well-- easiest thing to do.
481981
Why The fuck is this rated teen?
good story
508471
That was news to me!
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Thanks!
482055
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Cut my nuts off, and I cut your throat.
... Cheerilee isn't a unicorn.
just fix that whole unicorn thing
and this was good
i would like to see it go on
maybe have this "transformation" this take place
you have made me curious
this was... odd. I didn't like the the hostile atmosphere with which the human is welcome in Equestria
I have no idea WHAT the hell is going on. I'm definitely going to need some explanations, here.
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at first i was like fixed? hell no but then in this chapter, fuck yeah!
NOOO!
I DON'T WANNA BE FIXED!
I LOVE MY BALLS, I'M QUITE ATTACHED TO THEM YOU SEE.
Reading about Steven reminded me of Steven Adler, the drummer for Guns N Roses. He was something of a problem child. He even got expelled from kindergarten.
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Hahahahaha... sure.
I don't know where I came up with Steven from. I might have actually been thinking of Steven Colbert, actually.
525718 "Fixed" could mean corrected, and "you" are taking this the wrong way. I.E. making you less violent, as we apparently are wont to do.
I'm pretty sure being indirectly raped would increase my stress level. I wouldn't consent. I don't plan on having sex very often or ever at all, and if I do, it will be in a relationship. And that is rape, as seemingly no human gets to have a choice. If I am wrong, tell me. If it was Big Mac forcing a human woman into sex, giving them no other choice, even if they do end up consenting due to having no other option, would you call it rape? Not everyone wants sex, you know.
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Not to be trolling (genuine question), but... why are you reading a clopfic if you're asexual/anti-sexual? I don't get it.
As for the content, I wanted to make it clear that Colgate seems to really like the "you" and the "you" really likes Colgate as well. I might not have made it clear enough, which was just poor writing on my part.
I didn't want to make it look like the "you" literally had no choice in the matter, and I felt like the whole 'internment' thing was farcical and nonthreatening (Spike even makes this blatant) as well as the questioning thing (again, I feel like the "you" is bemused while slightly annoyed rather than feeling cornered).
I probably should have made it more clear while writing this that the "you" isn't really in danger or anything. That's just a failure on my part there, but I do think that most readers see what I mean.
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It's actually kind of strange to me, as it boils down to "Stick part X into part Y, results in pleasure, possibly child after nine months", but everyone thinks about it all the time. No, this does not mean I think rape is a lesser crime because of it. Yes, it makes me feel like an alien observing everyone else. I mean, look at this! Sexualizing a flower commercial? Why? If you take out everything other than exactly what happens, it's just a woman putting on clothing, saying one or two lines, then a cut to flowers, and the script probably says something similar.
Why do I read these? I don't really know, but mainly to see how many one shots are getting over ten likes per dislike because of sex, where a sword duel or gunfight between two characters would get maybe five likes per dislike or a lower rating, even if the writing is much better. You should see some of the comments I've left on these kinds of fics, where they are (relatively) poorly written and I bash them into oblivion with perfectly valid complaints, and the writers get surprised. You get a good ratio so long as the spelling and grammar are good, and the writing is good enough to cause arousal. I actually wrote over three paragraphs with one of these kinds of stories, with many valid complaints, including them leaving out the exposition (one fifth of the writing process). I got no reply, but that may be because he deleted it (he said he would delete "hate comments"). I never actually checked if it's still there.
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Well, yeah... at its heart, sex is just flesh connecting. What makes the difference is the sense of emotional longing and deep sensual tenderness between two partners (or more) that truly want to become 'one with each other' in mind, heart, body, and soul.
Look, this was not meant as a rape story. I really don't want you to think that I like rape or that I write that stuff. I've already explained what I'm trying to get across here.
It's true that this story is pretty short, but-- well-- the idea was that you're feeling depressed of things and Colgate is sort of 'welcoming you' to Equestria.
If you want something more on the soft and emotional side, check out my Nightmare Date and A Nightly Romance stories.
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1: Yes, sex is a connection. However, I am not attracted to that specific kind of connection, and, because of this, I get the "Part X in part Y" feeling whenever I read about or see sex in a movie. It is a joining, but I do not care for it like most people do. You could compare it to never being hungry, but you have to eat in order to live, so that isn't really a good analogy.
2: I know that this isn't about rape. I was just clarifying so I wouldn't get flamed by others that didn't think that I knew that sex is an intimate thing, whether or not I personally care for it. Doing anything to anyone without their consent is not morally correct, and sex is such an emotional thing to 99% of the population that it is a much worse crime than nearly anything else you can do to someone.
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Look... it's just that I feel sensitive to when people accuse me of writing rape or enjoying rape. That's not my thing. I don't promote it. I feel it kind of insulted when people bring it up.
he should know what being fixed means
What the Fuck is Going on!?!
What the fuck is Happening!?!
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A bit late to the part, by like six months, but all I'm hearing is "I'm asexual, stop offending me by writing smut because in my head it sounds like rape."
these are my testicles. there are many like them, but these are mine!
Just a question... This seems like a sequel of sorts. Is there a previous story that might explain things for me?
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"he needs to be fixed"
ooookaaaay little pony let me stop you right there. in my world "fixed" means neutered so there better be some kind of cultural misunderstanding here or I'm likely to kick some teeth in! lol <------ my response.
You know the pony's behavior is the root cause for humans to take drastic actions that they need to be "fixed" for. You talk about me like I don't have a say in my life? We gone have words.
Pfffffttthahahahahahahaahhahaahahahahaha the fuck did I just read?!?
I find the procedural processes interesting id like to see more of that in stories