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SwiperTheFox


This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.

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Finally got FimFiction working on my iPod again :D
Also this is really great so far onto chapter 2

I don't think people realize the beauty of your synopsys...

It's majorly, majorly meta. I laughed at it, because it's so true. People do tend to go 'screw these taboos, I'm writing this anyway' and think everyone's gonna love it. Most of the time though, about 75% of those stories make no sense and are for self-gratification.

Well done on that.

Not gonna lie totally forgot it was Clop.

Also the detail between Clover and soarin is amazing. Secondly GriffionXColgate is something I could get behind if you know what I mean.

" Soarin' is painfully handsome and it's not like you can resist him. "

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Challenge accepted.

Brilliant, particularly where the sex was concerned. As long as the domestic abuse isn't just ignored, I think this is going to be a favorite.

YOU.....YOU ARE A GENIUS:rainbowdetermined2: I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY!!!
and no I am not homosexual (but I am gay as in happy)[is it only me that gets mad when people so "oh your gay?" or "that's so gay". When you so "oh your gay" you should say "oh your homosexual" or "oh, you prefer a same sex relationship?" and "that's so gay". Your saying something is happy so it's "that's so happy" really? It just doesn't make any sence]

very excellent m/m story tracking this gem.

woah griffens and dragons? way to go colgate!

I've revised both of these to get rid of some frustrating errors. I'm feeling really, really good now.

So... to finish it! Soon! :rainbowdetermined2:

BAD NEWS!

I lost around 10% of the story due to some bullsh-t thing while uploading (or something like that, I don't know). I'll have to try and *sighs loudly after many other bursts of anger* rewrite it. I'm positive that it'll be worse than before, since the magic of the moment has well gone. But I hope it's not too bad.

Okay, so I think that my replacement section is about as good, although maybe slightly worse but not too bad-- same kind of ballpark.

Really, really sorry about that! :facehoof:

WIN!! And first comment! Sorry I had to:ajsleepy:

I want to laugh so hard, but at the same time, that mail fraud bit was out of place in the story. The rest of it was perfect, though.

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It is rather silly in tone for an otherwise serious story, but to be honest I felt like this story was already drowning in seriousness and I felt like it was becoming something that I as an author didn't like (odd, but true).

Let me ask you: If I ended this instead right after Clover sat down, defeated, with her big ol' box o' chemicals, then would that be better?

>Let me ask you: If I ended this instead right after Clover sat down, defeated, with her big ol' box o' chemicals, then would that be better?

You know, maybe. But it's not an either or thing, really. I'd RATHER that it got an ending that still fleshed out everything, but remained constant in tone. If every serious story became silly at the end, we'd have some very strange cancer tales. I'm not saying that you can't have the humor, but the large role it played, and the amount of space it took up, and the sheer ridiculousness of it it all jarring and out of place. It's a nice segment, but not one I see working HERE.

This IS a very serious story, one that deals with some emotional real life issues. I just feel that you should have stayed true to the story, and if you felt like writing something more humorous, you should have done that in another story.

528016 eh, it's your story, who are we to judge on how your stories end. Sure we can influence it, but the final decision is up to you.

I-I-I like this. Mainly cause I'm bisexual so I'd do either gender. But this was a cool story. Maybe you should make like a bondage style story with the Mail Demon and Clover. I dunno just a suggestion.

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Tee-hee, sounds like a great idea! :yay:

I choked laughing at the horrible sex puns....

I'm not gay, and I'm enjoying this. And why does this have a teen rating?

I did it, I finally got through one of your stories! :pinkiehappy: No offense, I just haven't been in much of a reading/writing mood just lately, finally got back into the swing of things and got around to reading this first up :raritywink:

Great story, really, really enjoyed it :pinkiehappy: Even if its not my usual fare, I still found myself loving it start to finish. The ending might have been a touch jarring, but hey, it was good to see Clover get what was coming too her. Plus it had me in stitches the entire time :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks! :twilightsmile:

Yeah, it's a very serious beginning but I went for more humor as things went on. I like the ending a lot. Mailer Daemon is best poni.

594170 Haha, no argument from me :rainbowwild:

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Now please read more of my stuff! :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

I need inspiration because I wanted to do a quickie one tonight... or maybe write more for my incomplete stories...

594187 I plan too, don't worry :pinkiesmile: Will provide ideas as I think of them as well.

"I'm sure he's all black with all red hair, maybe even one of those "secret alicorns" everypony gossips about."
YES. Yes he is, alternate universe version of myself! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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I'm totally making fun of alicorn OCs with the Mailer Daemon character.

Happy that you like it. :raritywink:

Well I learn something about this: Don't do mail fraud, face wrath of The Mailer Demon alicorn.

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Well, I wrote it to be enjoyable (hopefully)... so, ah, thanks! :ajsmug:

This is the most passionate clop I've ever read:fluttercry:

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Hehe :rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

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Thanks, I really tried to make this both lustful and super emotional in a sort of touching way; so that you really feel for Soarin'

Glad that you liked it!

Wow, that was better than I thought it'd be. Gotta admit that I wished it hadn't ended there (at least, not before another clop scene with Soarin... :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:)

I fucking love you, you magnificent bastard!! you are my number 5 besst writter here!

I've said it to other authors and i'll say it to you as well, wonderful fic, and ten-thousand mustaches to the one who makes me a Tom x Rocky clopfic

That was... not exactly what I was expecting. This story has really great potential, but it was a bit too short for my tastes. You could have really made it epic if you wanted to. With just a bit more time fleshing out the characters, you could have really developed an interesting dynamic between the main character and Soarin. I also think Soarin is hot, don't know why... but whatever. So yeah, lot of potential here I would like to see more fics with a similar theme.

I think the ban hammer just struck......

Im a straight dude, and I approve this fic!
This is my first male human on stallion fic.

Now if only real mail daemons were this cool:ajsleepy:

You must have a thing for showers.

Ahhh, grammer mistakes from hell!!! Quick kill it with spell check and other typing programs!!
If you don't get it well sucks to be you but here is my two cents as of now---
Amsome story, great character development, HORRIBLE grammer (sorry), but great emotional story. I'd give it an A-. :D
Here's the best grammer error so far-
"You quickly brush your teeth, comb your heart, put on deodorant"
How does one... Comb a heart???

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:the last part was great:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:she got what she was coming to her:eeyup::rainbowdetermined2::trollestia:

459738 Another fetish, another name on the list.
"Reads it over"
Dear god this is longer then the pony porn threads on 4Chan.

"No, no, no," you groan, and you immediately run your hooves

Isn't this HiE?

You feel yourself throbbing even harder within

Ok, just let me get this straight, it's a shemale hybrid between pony and human with both hands and hooves?
Dear gods what am I reading?
Edit: I'm assuming this because of the fact that it's a part of the Female in Equestria group.

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