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Fimbulvinter
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I see a very few amount of grammar errors, but this was a decent clopfic.
not sure if gusta
this has 3 things i love,
the end which is fucking amazing,
a good story and build up,
and an incredibly hot gay sex scene.
bravo.
2406815 It is written for a specific audience and not for everyone.
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2407638 Oh dont get me wrong, I love the idea and the story is quite good, but the clop part I dont know Im not really sure about it, cant decide if I like or not that.
2408574 Is it the writing style or the subject matter that you are having trouble with.
2408874 The writing, about the subject i couldnt care less, Im Asexual so it doesnt bothers me, but I just cant seem to "get on it" sorth of speaking, know what I mean?, the story is very good and I hope to see more of this in the future
2409072 What would you suggest I change?
2409338 Me suggest? I cant do that, this is your story, but I can advise, and I discovered my main problem with it, Im actually surprised myself, the problem I find (even though you explained it at the end and in the author notes) is that it kinds of leaves it hanging just like that, for the build up you did for this moment I personaly dont like the "And then they fucked, the end" kind of thing, I know you are gonna continue this in some sort of sequels or as an Epilogue but if you ask me this has the potential to be a little longer story, at least 5 chapters.
With that said I wish you the best of lucks and I hope to read more later, bye!
That ending was hilarious, perfect end to an awesome fic
2409783 Wish more people thought the same.
I know that I am getting some downvotes on the basis that it is graphic gay, and not just because they have an issue with the writing or errors, but it is still disheartening.
*whistles*
Only one day old any you sure have made a huge splash, of better or worse considering the anonymous and unexplained down votes
From the front picture for this fic I was expecting more "girly" Shining...I don't recall seeing fic with feminine Shining (except that one fic where Shining and Cadence get hit by rule 63, however that is totaly different content).
This doesn't deserve downvote since writing and pacing was interesting, but personaly can't upvote, since I can't really gusta two buffed manly stalions going at it.
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when you get really popular the downvotes will be drops in the ocean compared to the upvotes.
Haters gonna hate, don't let it get you down
I dont normally read these types of fics but when i do it needs a good leadup and plot
2414159 And did this have a good lead up and plot?
Well written and a nice story. Up-voted.
2415088 Danke.
That was so romantic, thumbs up!
2416770 Thank you. Glad you liked it.
i can see where this is going
2416824 Well you should. I didn't exactly try to hide where this story was going
right now I'm in the process of writing my own m/m fic and I'm kind of leaning towards putting clop in it. although I have no idea how it is going to come near as detailed and amazing as your second chapter! anyways great story it had the feels proper character developmentand any all that good stuff please keep up the awesome job you're doing!
2424054 Always nice to know people like my work.
If you want a pre reader for your story, send me a message
huh
I must say, I honestly Like how this was done, I find Fanfics more engaging with there is some grammar and wording there. Not that I'm knocking anyone's skill level, I know I'm not the best. Just saying, its hard to really get into a story when its "so and so gets up, so and so then does this" I love the wording that lets your mind visualize the scene, the place, the action. Kudos I say to you, Kudos. Look forward to reading more of your work.
2450342 Thanks for saying so.
My earliest fics were criticised for being too skimpy on the details and I have worked hard to fix that part of my wiriting style.
Not a fan of clop, but the writing in the first part's good and there's something of a background and story behind it, so I'll give it a like.
2484568 Thanks for the like. This is partly the reason I split the two things up into seperate chapters, so if you don't want the sex you can just have the story, or vice versa.
good story as always
Nicely done. I think the very end with Apple Fritter puts a nice cherry on the top of this tasty desert.
HERESY! HERESY! HERESY!!!!!!!!!!!!
2592284 How so exactly?
This was pretty dang adorable
My heart is full of daaawww.
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Wonderful! I couldn't have written it any better. I'm definetly going to favorite this, and thumbs up it. Almost perfectly written my fellow brony. And this is coming from someone who never comments on anything.
>Shining Armour is not going to turn totally gay or bi from this. This was a one time only gift to his friend who was in the closet, with some potential friends with benefits later on. As far as this story is concerned, all canon events in the actual show occur as normal from this point on.
Well you can always... ya know, label this fic as an alternative universe so it doesn't have to be forcefully canon.
4136714 That would be the easy way out.
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The way Shining approached Big Mac was fully fledged there, not showing any signs that he would regret doing this. Plus, saying that he's only straight and not bi (Not gay I understand that) is kinda off chart there. It would make much more sense if he were bi, not just straight so this won't force him to turn gay into straight afterwards, it doesn't work like that.
this is cute and strange
"They just assaulted a Royal Guard, but we're going to ignore it."
Err, right...