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SwiperTheFox
This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.
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AND FIRST AGAIN LOL!!!
ok sorry about this but ill read this in the morning to better appreciate this. lol too tired to give a shit right now
Wooo! New fic!
good story
Dat story title
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Adorable, to the point, interesting and far too short
Well done, you pulled it off again.
Very nice. Liked the ending, cute.
Nurse Redheartismywaifu? This is relative to my interests!
Lol my iPad auto corrected that in there, and I'm not going to Change it.
It's true anyway, clearly.
"That bitch was hopping and jumping like she was on crack or somethin'." LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed hella hard. Also, why am I reading this instead of studying for finals?
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Why you do that?
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Thanks!
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Isn't it grand?
I took it from the pic (with some modification). I wish I had come up with it.
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I could have made it longer, but it got too late at the night / early in the morning. Shoot, I need to sleep.
But thanks very much for reading and glad that you liked it!
this caught me eye and I've got to say its not that bad +1
'Especially you're, you're--" Her voice goes to a whisper. "You're 'horse meat'."'
'You're'?
'You're'?!
'YOU'RE'?!?
That was a great story. Short and sweet in more ways than one.
Some spelling mistakes and all. But not a detractor.
My infatuation (read: creepy stalker obsession) with Nurse Redheart aside, I really like this. The run-up was funny, the sexy was sexy, and the ending was d'aww. Im not normally one to favorite clop. But this gets my star, for sure.
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Where can you find that "dating sim" that you took the picture from? It looks like the "kitten" games from newgrounds. What is the game called?
By the way, I love your work and you're awesome, this story is no exception. Keep it up! I look forward to reading even more from you.
I read it for the plot. No seriously, the story was good. I skipped over the clop because I try to keep my ponies and my r34 as separate as I can manage, but from the lead up, I could tell it was hot. :| Anyway, I concur with Agarwaen. Have a star. And a thumbs-up from Lyra.
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I just realised who wrote this... not you again XD. Your stuff is always... interesting
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"Her flanks envelop you as you feel her long, flowing tail circling around your body. "
might wanna fix this, mein freund.
but seriously, you've done it. you've earned a sub and a like from me.
please keep up the work, swipes. I look forward to reading much more outta you.
Not normally a fan of human and pony pairings, but this was very good. Thumbs up
NOT a fan of human x pony stories...
But dat' mature filter...
yummy
"It's that he left me for a stallion." She throws her head back. "And for a stallion that three-ways with a human male with him!"
is this one of your fics swiper?
cuz it sounds like something you would write
edit: you keep talking about this transformation
i want to see it happen
you have me all curious
Some spelling mistakes but not a deal breaker. Also, first time I've seen a Human X Nurse Redheart fic.
Tsk tsk tsk, Nurse Redheart. Abusing the doctor-patient relationship like that.
Featured? Way to go Mr. Fox!
That was actually very sweet.
Spelling errors? Yes, but non-detracting
Interesting choice? Yes
Conclusion:
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Usually when you tell someone you have a boner for them they more or less want to beat the sh*t out of you or run away.
This stuff is waaaaaaaaaay too out there for my sanity to handle!
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Usually when you tell someone you have a boner for them they more or less want to beat the sh*t out of you or run away.
If that actually would of happened I would of laughed my ass off.
ok now there HAS to be a sequel to this!
Nnnnniiiiccceeee
Because sex equals love, obviously.
In all seriousness, though, that was pretty cute. And I like the idea of the visiting human not being the only one, and for the whole "HiE" thing to be just another aspect of Equestrian living. Stranger things have happened.
But seriously, not even a day and they're willing to spend the rest of their lives with one another? HAHAHAHA
Nice lead up and payoff, if only it was longer.
There needs to be a sequel.
And a clopfic makes featured......?
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It was written well. But really? clopfic? featured?
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Epic story, bro.
Ooh, Idea!
You open your eyes, and shoot up in your bed. As you look out the window, you whisper to yourself "It was all a dream. It was all a dream."
A rustle comes from the space next to you in the bed. You look over and see her.
Your sunshine.
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Why keep telling a story when the conflict has been resolved?
One thing I didn't like and one mistake:
Human in cartoonized Equestria always seems weird to me.
On the horse meat line, you use "you're" instead of "your". As a second person author, I expected you to not mess that one up
Everything else? Golden. Especially the device to give Redheart a nickname to use for the protagonist.
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Congrats on the feature Swiper, you definitely deserve it on this one. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
OMFG! a clop fic got FEATURED!? *reads*
it's a miracle to find a feminine anything that tolerates your presence.
What exactly are you insinuating?...
"And for a stallion that three-ways with a human male with him!"
Owch...
Ok, definitely not bad, some odd misspellings that looks like a spell checker put in the wrong word but it gets better as you go on. The sex scene was a bit sudden. otherwise it was pretty clop-able (still can't believe it got featured!).
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And now there's TWO featured
Have you ever urinated on someone else for the purposes of your own amusement?
I'm not sure if I should tell the truth, or lie just to see their reactions.
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brb, killing self........ imma hang myself from the chair with the rope.
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I agree with others who said it was fast.
On the other hand it was sweet so that counts for something. Plus you got another pony sex-ed up :p you trying to go through all of 'em?
Finally Nurse Redheart getting some action
Swag.
Erm... yeh. You used the wrong form of Your/You're an awful lot. Other than that you didn't do a bad job with the rest of the story, though I am not a fan of clopfics.
This son of a bitch took my nickname. 'Peaches' is mah name so stay away from it or I'll keel u!!!
553059 Make a new conflict? I've seen it done really well in the past. My Second Life is another HiE fic and is the longest one on this site at over 600k words. It's mostly a series of conflicts as a guy settles down to life in Ponyville. Once one issue gets resolved, another problem occurs where him and some of the others have to try to fix.
I've also seen a lot of fics have a 'story 2' that's a continuation of another story but with a new conflict.