DCLzexon
Joined 18th Jun, 2014 ·
Offline
Sequels1
-
DCLzexon · 18k words · 333 33 · 13k views
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- DCLzexon · 18k words · 333 33 · 13k views
- DCLzexon · 9.4k words · 425 24 · 8.8k views
- The Abyss · 6.9k words · 585 47 · 12k views
- DCLzexon · 15k words · 170 17 · 3.9k views
- The Story Man · 9.3k words · 370 41 · 10k views
- Genghis Clop · 3.6k words · 696 24 · 11k views
- Naughty_Ranko · 6.3k words · 508 56 · 16k views
- Yukito · 9.4k words · 696 31 · 28k views
Featured In21
Shipping 💖11,670 stories ·9,742 members
Clopfics11,546 stories ·15,814 members
The Fillyfoolers3,946 stories ·3,488 members
- Organized Shipping (Most Common)2,159 stories ·1,332 members
Twilight is Best Pony6,371 stories ·3,071 members
Twilight Sparkle12,272 stories ·4,753 members
- Twixie!211 stories ·954 members
NSFW3,939 stories ·1,375 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.067 seconds
Total duration
1,005 users online
123,610 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
....Get on with it, then! ;)
Top kek intensifiescdn0.sbnation.com/imported_assets/986269/cool_story_bro.gif
That explains it.
This was quite good, but some areas could have used some work. The act itself was... Damn hot.
~Skeeter The Lurker
4915955 I would have loved to have fleshed this story out over a few chapters, but for smut, half of which is plot, 13k was already majorly pushing it.
4915975
I was talking like it was more... Hmm... Rough?
You could stand to have an editor or two more comb through it and pluck out the stragglers.
As it is as a one shot is perfectly fine, and in fact works best like this.
~Skeeter The Lurker
4915978 If thats the case, then my horrible understanding of the English language is to blame. I had to practically over work my editor as it was.
I will try to go over the fic and make corrections one last time, but as i'm busy digitally painting, dealing with college, and due to just be generally sick of working on this fic after going over it again and again and again, its not on the top of my to do list.
4916013
S'all good. Just a suggestion, anyway.
Still damn ice bit of work.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Lately I've been looking for a Twilight/Trixie angry-sex fic and this one delivered most excellently!
Especially liked the 'Super-Magic-Powered Angry Sex' bit at the end. Getting kinky with the super-powers is always fun :D
On another note, I also really like the bit at the beginning with the rest of the Mane 6 getting ready to skin Trixie alive for hurting Twilight's feelings.
Though, one question:
You mentioned Dash and Flutters are banging, but then who's Pinkie sleeping with?
4916065 Everyone
4916065 you mean besides everyone?
pinkie is fannonly the sexual positive/open poster child.
Even for a horse, 40 inches is a lot. That's bigger than my LEG. The leg is half the length of the body, and I can't imagine Trixie would be nearly as tall as me, so her torso would be even smaller than that. She'd be getting totally run through, like the head would have to come out the other end. That would kill her, magic aside.
4916328 I like to pull the crazy cartoon porn sex card, where all of womens internal organs are hollow to allow for ridiculous sizes. also I never said it fully was 40 inches, she just guessed it was, it could well be smaller (or bigger
) than mentioned.
At the end of the day, im just a sick pervert, writing sick fetishist porn about technicolored ponies
4916074 Fair enough
Though if Pinkie just sleeps around a lot, why is Spike referring to her current bed-mate as a member of their group? And is it weird that I'm focusing so much on this?
On another note, I'm actually intrigued with this whole 'Transpose the events of the series to a Magical Academy of Adventure' setting. Are there any plans to do any more with this setting?
4916440 the possibility of a sequel, or spin off in this universe are real. though if i write another smut one shot, its more likely to be based in a universe, cannon or otherwise, that helps progress the setting of the story. IE the university alternate time line was done as a reason to give Trixie a long standing history with Twilight, as rivalries make for better hate sex in my opinion.
the only constant in my writing if i continue will be BDSM under/over tones, anthro ponies, and probably a controversial/odd focus on the emotional motivations of the characters.
The title alone demands I read it. And the premise bolts me in. Starting riiight- After an hour or two on Fallout.
4916846 honestly, I dont know how to reply to that image response...
what is with all the kismatude porn I've been reading lately, it is odd
This was fucking amazing.
I love the fighting between them I also would have like to see what is going through rarity and Dainbow Dash's head. But still a good story. Although I don't think it was rape. Twilight a Trixie wanted it. Rape is when someone has sex against there will. That reminds me there is a story about rape called shattered by bronyneumo. It's not quiet done but still a good story you should read it. Also I'm curious about the school settings. Is this in equestria girls settings just after high school or is this a new world altogether?
4917057 This is in a new world all together, its pretty much my excuse to give Twilight and Trixie a history outside of the 2 they shared, and that's the only real reason.
its true it isnt TECHNICALLY rape, but until a person says otherwise, it counts. also half of the fun of hate sex is pretending you dont want it, and if you do admit to it, you still fight anyways
4917033 thank you, glad you enjoyed.
4916993 hate sex is good, hate sex is god. don't question it.
4917077 I still suggest you read shattered by bronyneumo good story all about a rape crime.
4917093 maybe, my interest in rape goes as far as role play, pretending you dont like it because it adds a sense of danger or taboo, or just blatantly in my stories case a sense of conflict. actually getting raped and not liking it is a whole nother thing.
4917114 true but it definitely keeps you on your toes this story. You never read the act you read the aftermath and before the crime. Also the trial. Just read it so I can see if someone else on this cite thinks like me I have yet to meet one.
Hundredth like/dislike total! (As a like of course.) Also, you are the artist that created your avatar, right? If so, I really like your art, and finding out that you're a writer...shoot, only more of a reason to follow you!
Just... win.
Only one word can describe this story...
>Rape play
...
..
.
i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/710/374/99e.gif
4917395 I'm more of a artist than a writer, its a bit of a insult to call me one to many of the skilled writers on the site. I'm more of a "story teller" who bumbles around with words until his editor comes along and fixes his horrible grammar.
4917450 I have such a bad habit of alluding to other ships when ever I write a story, as I am a massive shipper.
4917461 As a black man, i approve.
4917543 As it is mine my friend, as it is mine.
*looks at cover photo and introduction*
hmmmm...
me thinks i will like this very much.
images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw3360-1330671248679.gif
derpicdn.net/img/2014/2/10/548709/large.png
4916849 let me make a suggestion : DA DOUBLE F*CK?!
4917792 wing boners are my fave trope from the fannon
4917908 aww, i was hoping to better impress senpai. I still have next time.
4917928 I mean, i could make a sequel where twi double dicks trixie, but i dont think thats what you mean
...
I don't even.
images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/24700000/0_0-penguins-of-madagascar-24753393-1360-748.png
Finally.
you damn sir have awoken the sadist/masochist in me... i'm not sure which of the two since i enjoyed every bit of this. DAMN YOUR WRITING SKILL FOR MAKING THIS TOO ENJOYABLE
there's just too much fetish material thrown into the entire mix of this that i'm hard pressed to point out the parts that i really enjoyed (though twilight going punisher on trixie's backdoor is definitely one of them).
even before i read this, i knew based on the title, cover picture, and premise alone i'm going to like this very much. what surprised me is that now i'm gonna have to remake my top 5 clopfics because of this. that's saying a lot.
leaving a like, fave, and a sub. good job.
i eagerly await the next angry sex you write XD
4916065 Gummy.
4918190 Im totaly writing that in as cannon for my AU during my next fic
4918116 why i thank you for the high praise, dont think im worthy of it, but ile bask in it all the same
4918097 I know right? these two have needed to just shut up and fuck for like, ever, amirite?
4918056 thats okay, because they do even, they do everything even.
4918313
Indeed.
Not my thing, but I'll give you a thumbs up for it anyways. It's pretty good.
This made me LOL. And a few other things I'm not proud of.
4918536 I know that feeling, bro
Attempt at a plot? I'd say you got this one down pat!
If you could make a story explaining the FlutterDash situation, I'd greatly appreciate it!
4918811 I am literally writing that fic up now.
4918536 well you're suppose to fap, its smut after all
4918441 thank you, it means alot when some one who isnt into the fetishized content is willing to give it a try.
4918851 Just because I don't like it doesn't mean I can't appreciate a well-written story.
4918313 BOOM! Hit the nail on the head!
4918851 No...no finger...what're you doing!? Get away from that fave button! No! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Twixie? Yes please!
