DCLzexon
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Yes, yes, and hell fucking yes.
~Skeeter The Lurker
*reads description*
*sees other stories*
This ought to be good.
Wow. Now this is something else.
And awesome too 
Ye gods, this is well written character interaction.
5233188 same here
I donāt even want to speak about the incident with the leaf blower and the turtle again
I can imagine what happened
don't involve violence...ā
...Or pranksā¦ā
...Or sexual acts.ā
that leaves nothing but passive aggressive
āWell, your first response to anything that annoys you is to hit it with your cello case.ā Lyra said.
āYour second response is often to set it on fire.ā BonBon added as well.
responses to things that annoy me:
diplomacy
ignoring
Going Dan on them:
violence
fire
Yelling at the sky
Trottingham dictionary get angry at you and start talking.ā Lyra giggled.
I have the same problem
āThank you for your quite elegant way of summarizing it, Lyra.ā I growled.
āItās what I do.ā She said, kicking back in her chair.
my ability in a nut shell
let the war begin
Lyra:...
Bonbon: ...
L: DAYUM!
B: ...
L: DAT was some hot sex right there!
B: ...
L: you okay there Bonbon?
B: I wanna go home now
L: but... but... what if there's an encore?
B: (walks away)
L: video camera, don't fail me
And the trend of DCLzexon writing the best clop on this site continues. Bloody hell.
5232662 oh yes indeed
5234603 Lyra was a utter joy to write, She was only a few traits away from being a utter self insert.
5232662
I see you haven't disappeared completely :P
5236070
Well, duh.
Also, had a hunch you'd pass by this one as well.
~Skeeter The Lurker
You REALLY know how to heat up a fic don't you?
5236070 i hope both you and skeeter enjoyed the fic.
delicious <3
though there are still a ton of little spelling errors left
from the 3rd chapter i think...somehow a few words went to get coffee
5236448 great, seems there was a mix up with the edited version and the draft versions. I am greatly annoyed, as i curretly have limited net access and cannot fix this right away.
thank you for pointing out the error
5234671 i have to half agrre with you. this is amazing. i dont want to call it second best, but it barely holds a candle to 'angry, passionate hate sex'. thats a clopfic that'll get you off just fom reading it. go. read it. now. you will not regret it. and for the writer of this fic, your talents are not inferior by any means. that's sooooo not what im saying. this just isn't as brutal as i like my clop. i enjoyed this fic thoroughly, though it was more more from an amused point of view. i apologize if ive caused you to feel any offense, please know that it was not my intention. it was the content that made a difference, not the way they were written' and i would be ashamed if i did not tell praise of your writing skill. bravo.
5238251 This comment confuses me due to the fact that I am the writer of angry passionate hate sex
but I'm always happy for praise, a shame this couldn't meet your standards.
The bonds of sun bro ship grow stronger!
Does tavi remind anyone else of the ice queen of the Normandy miranda?
5238267 shit i didn't even realize you were the same writer! i guess that explains why i enjoyed the writing in this one so much... my bad on that one. i. am. so embarrased. i odten forget that most of the writers on here are so much more talented than i am, and are capable of spitting out jewels like this one mulitple times. sorry about the mix up. and i always give praise where it's due. its just my thing.
5238251
DCLzexon rules!
What did you think I meant by "trend"?
5234603 I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say
5241394 people say that when I get pissed I start polysyllabic words like "(midnight), when you get pissefd off at someone, I have to go get my note pad and a dictionary"
Turtle + leafblower = turtle projectile launched by a make-shift air cannon
no sex/ pranking/ violence leaves you with nothing fun to do
responses to things that annoy me:
diplomacy
ignoring
Going Dan on them:
violence
fire
Yelling at the sky
self-explanatory
This... this was beautiful.
I loved every line, every little bit of dialogue and character interaction. I loved the way you wrote Octavia, and lyra. And Bon-bon. And Vinyl. Did I mention I love this story?
Also, hot damn this was hot! And this relationship is just so messed up it has to last forever.
And it's marked as incomplete?
It did feel as though it could end here, but I eagerly await more.
Oh this is going to be glorious!
Oh this is getting good!
That is a very good idea Vinyl. One you're going to regret giving Octavia. We won't though.
5232662
My reaction exactly.
I feel like I need a cigarette just from reading this one. I mean DAMN that was crazy.
hmm, i don't think i like this. it feels really rapey. the last two chapters and about half of this one have been giving the impression that Octavia legitimately hates Vinyl and that Vinyl is just an asshole.
in "Angry, Passionate, Hate Sex", there was a greater emphasis that underneath everything, Twilight and Trixie really did want to be together and cared about each other, and that their affection towards each other went beyond physical attraction. i don't get that feeling here.
I wonder if that forced masturbation refers to the third chapter, because if it does, it should be forced fingering, since at no point, Vinyll is forcing Tavia to pleasure herself.
I see no fifth chapter. I require a fifth chapter for this masterpiece!
I'm spilt. This fic is actually pretty complete as it is. It leaves eveything to the dirty imaginations of the reader. And with the basics you have given... is it hot in here or is it just me?
But on the other hand... I want to read more. If you feel (and you are justified to do so of course ) that the final chapter don't live up to the standards, why not mark this as complete and publish the last chapter as a sort of sequel?
And another thing, did you actually start writing the Rarijack story or were you just planning it?
5643806 I did start writing it, but i ran out of steam at that point and started not liking it.
5654233 You are still working on this right?
I am sold for that alone
I was interested in this when I read its description. So I kept in on my "Read Later" and just finished reading it today.
You've got me infatuated. This thing is INCREDIBLE
To begin with, this is my kink, so that helps. I have no idea who's position I'd rather be in, Octavia's or Vinyl's, but never has a clop fic made me wish to be a part of it as much as this one has. Next, you weren't kidding when you said "clop with a plot". You've fleshed out Vinyl and Octavia (inside and out) so well that their interaction feels natural, and the sequence of events is entirely believable. And finally, I came here to comment because I thought I'd just read the thing in its entirety. Then I saw that "Incomplete" tag... Never before have I been so looking forward to an author writing more clop.
You've got a follower in me. If all your stuff is this good (or even close), I'm completely sold.
AIPĀ§
P.S.: You wanted an editor, yes? I'd be happy to oblige. If it means more wonderful writings from you, absolutely.
This is a good story, well written, but not my cup of tea. Too abusive, too cold; I'm not into dom/sub/BDSM, so I won't be reading anymore. However, I certainly won't be down voting it or anything, and I hope you keep writing, even if it is stuff like this, as I know this is a lot of people's fetish and I think you write it well. Cheers to you, mate.
Just fucking amazing, truth be told I don't know what exactly what my kink is but this has been the best thing I've ever read
......Goddamn it all i love this too much. I need a break from spank/sex fics.
Or not. Google, here i come, dont let me down!
GOD DAMN IT I WANT MORE!
I am so sad this never ended...
I don't usually read incomplete stories, but this one was absolutely worth it.
It has almost been a decade since this story was last updated
I declare it officially dead
May it rest in peace