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Yukito


Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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Hawt.:rainbowwild:

Needs to be more Twiset out there.:twilightsmile: That's not horribly rapey in some way anyway. :applejackconfused:

Is it wrong of me to want to see this continue? Cuz if it is then I don't want to be right.:twilightsmile:

I don't usually like humanized, but this is the exception! Very, VERY hot! I mean damn!

I think... I just found my second favorite ship ever. Why isn't this being continued? You there, writing man (author), another!

HOLY GOD THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!! please man continue this I give you my love:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Huh.
I actually learned a new word from this :rainbowwild:
I first thought that it's official term was "scissoring"

Tasteful clop. Excellent. Good job, Yuki.

Yes, just...yes.

3558344 According to Wikipedia, scissoring is the unofficial term.

Wait. Why the hell does Wikipedia even have a page on Tribadism?

I don't think I read Twilight taking off her panties. She keeps them on during mastrubating but ther are off when they undress

This by far is THE BEST POSSIBLE HUMANIZED CLOP FIC I have EVER read!! And with the number of smutty stories I've read even before MLP, that's saying something,. This was just so well done, everything from the descriptions to the characterizations of Twilight and Sunset, it was just amazing. I love how it was Sunset who didn't realize her feelings for Twilight, but was the one to slip up by saying that she loves her, while Twilight seems to have already realized her feelings, but was just too scared with what Sunset's reaction might be to ever confess openly. Also you won Teh Internetz with an heart-achingly/explodingly DAWWWW worthy Twilight, even in a clopfic. Anyway, enough story analyzing. I just gotta say again how amazing this was and how unbelievably hot too.

Fave and upvote!!

Okay...

1. That was hot. Well-written. And hot. Did I mention hot?

2. For me, I kinda do see it as canon. ;)

3. Dude, you gotta do a sequel. Perhaps one where they run into EQG Trixie and have sexy fun times with her? :duck:

3562083 because it has a page on everything even the things you don't want to know

This. Was. Amazing!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Oh so that's what it's called. I liked this, it was good

That was very good, actually felt like possible in the real world! Good job and could I be a son of a bitch and ask you for a sequel, maybe their upcoming date?

I don't even like clopfics, but HOLY SHIT!!!! that was hot.:heart:

100% hot.
100% cute.

...You broke math with this delightful story.

I'm definitely going to read the main fic now, thanks.

3722785 a sequel involving EGQ Trixie? What do you think Daniel Bryan?
http://m.youtube.com/index?&desktop_uri=%2F#/watch?v=FJbmB9k2Y88

‘Chemistry is a blast!’, ‘Biology for life!’, and ‘Physics is in motion!’

:rainbowlaugh:

I need to see this blossom more.. and the rection the others have about them going out.

D'aww, this was sexdorable :twilightsmile:

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Are you crazy? dou you want to see the world burn or something? because with this a lot of places will be spontaneously on fire by such intense hottness!

5407124 How is that a bad thing here, though? :trollestia:

5409946 I consider the spontaneous death of hundreds of people and burning houses as a bad thing. They would die happy but... you know... blazing fires arent too comfortable when you are inside them xD

‘Chemistry is a blast!’, ‘Biology for life!’, and ‘Physics is in motion!’, to name just a few.

It's sad really. All the good chemistry jokes argon.

5414715 thats why you should ony make them PERIODCALLY.

We need more chapters please Q_Q, also, I liked the attitude of Velvet :D

5689260 mothers know everything :rainbowderp:

For the lovemaking.

That was Hot. And Twilight Velvet is now an Awesome Mom... Continue?:fluttercry:

Hot with a good story to boot!! (SQUEE!!)

I am not exactly sure what to make of this, but what I am sure of is...I have a boner (again:rainbowwild:), and this is going straight in my Pleasure folder.

That was a pretty good story. Sunset and Twilight are so cute together.

5551217 5414715 Ehh, if the joke dies, we could always barium.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
0:32_8/13/2015

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That's too noble of you guys.

6424100 Personally, I don't give a Francium for those Boron people who hate humor and puns.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
15:35_9/14/2015

I knew she would've heard! Great clopfic.... but I'm not sure if I should favorite this...... :applejackconfused:

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You call it a Pleasure folder? I just call it 'Why do I enjoy?'.

First time in a while that I've read a clop story without cock in it. This was fantastic! :heart:

Lol mom found out but the scream of names and the moans. .lol :rainbowlaugh: great story man.

We know her name is Sunset Shimmer. You can just refer to her as Sunset & we will still know who you mean.

WORTH IT FOR THAT ENDING!!! :pinkiehappy: I usually like stories with a lot more mental explanation rather than physical but the end made it all worth it. I was hoping something like that would happen and you did not disappoint! I thought it would though because Sunset just kept being so tender rather than for science purposes. Also the end with Twi screaming yesyesyesyes was too good!
Wonderful. :twilightsmile:

I don't care who disagrees, but those science jokes were hilarious.:rainbowlaugh:

Velvet is and awesome mom. She has to be the best.:twilightsmile:

What the hell this is the most amazing story ever it was extremely intimate and funny and a perfect combo of the both luv it so much

 ‘Chemistry is a blast!’

That should only happen if you screw up really badly, or you're working with trinitrotoluene or similar.
Most chemical reactions shouldn't deflagrate in the stereotypical manner often seen.

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