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I'm both disgusted and impressed. But mainly the second. I wouldn't call this mindless sex fiction, moreof revenge sex fiction. If that is a category.
Is this sigh that the next chapter of Error or Celestia chapter will come up soon?
This was messed up...i love it!!!
So when it says Rape, does it mean the rape of Sunset? yessssssss.
The end was a little wat inducing though.
It was pretty hot and everything...but the ending just seemed...meh...
I know you were probably trying to do a plot twist, and that is good and all, but it just...came out of nowhere, and it came a little too late in the story. If it had happened half-way through the clop scene, it would had been believable, but right at the end...not so much.
Don't get me wrong, this was a good read...I am just not sold on the ending.
4868050 Well I do plan finally complete the Error H chapter soon: Spoiler alert:
I'll complete two chapters to make up for lost time4868676 Meh, I just thought: Nothing would justify this unless... the guy character got sexually harassed by Sunset in the past.
4868750 Yeah, but I think you should of had Spring revealed why he was raping her in the bum as he was doing it or before, because it seemed like you tacked it on in the end.
But I love the clop. It was very hot.
4868755 Well maybe I will rewrite that part. But only if other people share your concern.
Dayyum,Somebody Bring This Colt Some Water....Because He Is THIRSTYYYYYYYYYYYY,OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Could you put up the source for the cover?
“Well Sunset, that was for tying me up and analy raping me with a strap-on back in High School.”
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>mfw people in the comments be assblasted
And yet you wrote in a rape scene because?
4870414 Because there is a difference between something fictional and fetishy and actually forcing a person in RL into something like this. I simply don't have it in me. Plus, the actual thing feels very wrong to me.
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Oh yeah! And I also thought that it would be a nice dark turn for the story! To get you to feel a strong emotion. And I guess I succeded. This is what writing is all about. Getting people to care.
Meh. Needed proofreading.
4870746 Would you like the job?
4871016 I'm afraid I'm busy lately. But if you write more, try me again in a month.
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Really? hurray
I like it! Springs gets revenge on the bitch!
Payback's a bitch Sunset, maybe next time you won't do something you'll regret.
Sunset had it comin to her. I mean it was a little expected since Sunset Shimmer is such a bitch.
It needs a little proofreading done to it I noticed a few mistakes. But nothing major. :)
Shaame. hahaha
4874157 Wanna volunteer?
Okay, this was absolutely golden. It... Fucking. Yes. Mindless? Yes. Pointless? Yes. Hilarious twist? FUCK YES.
4875731 That's exactly what I was going for!
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>>danail24
Sure I will help ya out.
4878867 Hmmm... second person who noted that. Maybe I could do a small rewrite.
Nice improvement on the ending. Having him reveal to her who he was when she was awake added to the revenge, and made things much more satisfying.
And this utterly ridiculous description of Sunset Shimmer is where I stopped reading in disgust. Not only is your description incredibly silly, childish, and unsexy, but it displays either ignorance of female anatomy or a grotesque and unhealthy fetish on your part.
No woman wants breasts that size. You know why? Because it's unhealthy. F-cups aren't sexy, they're massive, sagging sacks of fat that hang to a woman's hips. A woman with a "perfect hourglass figure" whose breasts are that large is going to SNAP IN HALF because her spine can't support their weight.
So yeah, the second I read that, I tuned out, because there's some serious fail going on there.
hmmm o.O though was waiting for the other story to update, I did enjoy this one a lot ^^ Nice to always see something new :P
4890896 Yu mad bro?
Also, check these pics out:
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They're 36F, they're not too saggy and the women themselves seem to be doing fine.when they walk. Let's face it bro. You're just a hater. If you weren't you'd simply not bother to spew so much hate and move on from this fanfic you don't like. TROLOLOLOLOL!
I loved it all talk about ironic justice.
4890896I read this story as a comedy. It was indeed.
MAN THAT'S HOT :0
Was that Boone from LOST?
5171553 Never watched the series, and I have no idea whatchu talkin' about.
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Boone from LOST - blastr.com/sites/blastr/files/styles/content_panes_media/public/images/Lost_Somerhalder_Boone_0.jpg?itok=6sZhcWcl
5174797 Hhahahahahaahahh! I just used this random image I found on the internet as an example for my Stallion OC's hairdo. Don't read too much into stuff bro.
Oh dang! I have long bangs and DEM BLUE EYES!
Captain! The cock shield can't take much more of this! The eroticism readouts are off the charts!
Wow. Nice twist.
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HAH!
5176126 Why is there a human tag in this fic if the characters are anthro?
Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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Brace for impact