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This series is hot. X3
Man, this and the pictures... So Hot! Although it does, much like Fall of Equestria, give me a Social Justice Warrior Angry Boner, it just makes it all the more fun to clop to.
And here I was, about to point out the lack of a "Sex" tag for a mature story. You may want to get that tacked on there, it'll get you a lot more readers.
3999264 got it tagged now, thanks for pointing that out :3
3998725 hehehe, glad to know that my commissions have found some fans.
You need to break up your writing into morediscreet paragraphs, Right now every idea kind of runs into the next one without stopping. I really couldn't get past that at all, and it threw me off of the story, and I even lsot interest in the end. Downvote for low quality.
I hope you get better as you write, treat this story as more an exercise than a possible "good story." Don't expect even "good" erotica at the start. Just try to get a good story and characterization first. Worry about more specialized content later.
Interesting read hehe.... and nice profile pic
That's got be like the most embarrassing thing ever
4000833 Thank you :3 The profile pic is actually part of a later scene for the story.
4003704 ooooh, interesting
4000410 Changes have been made to chapter one to make the transaction seem smoother, thanks for mentioning that :3
Keep up the good work. I hope the next chapter is longer.
4013313 Thanks ^^ Not sure if I'll be making the chapters any longer though as I'm liking the flow of the story in short chapters.
4013432 lol, must of missed that Thanks for pointing it out
I hope Sunset gets bad Karma out of this story. Sure I can see the sexual appeal to this but I hope to find a happy ending... Where Sunset is the slave to Cadence And Shining Armor in the end of this story.
4014398 I have thought about the ending and I can assure you that it's a happy one. Not saying for whom though, but a happy ending non the less :3 thanks for reading
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Just tell me the happy won't be for SS and I'll be reading this more.
4016248 *Sunset’s horn began to glow once more and Cadance closed her eyes, expected Sunset to harm her, however she felt the gag lift out of her mouth.*
4016310 Sorry, not saying Though I was also planning on writing alternate endings, that way everyone can get an ending they enjoy :3
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Oh grand...
Fave+Story Watch+Person(Pony?) watch
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Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens in chapter 4.
This is not going to end well.
Kind of just... glossed over how she took over the kingdom. And I had hoped that her "training" would have been onscreen rather than skipped.
As much as the story focuses on Cadence being a slut and SS being the mistress...
The blunders Cadence is making may be a subtle warning about the problem...
Also, I want that Shining Armor saves the day ending or SS reverse Role in the end ending.
Is there going to be more details in Flash being used as a slave to corrupt others?
4044429 There was going to be some focus on a chapter I was writing about Shining Armor's return but decided it was a bit of a waste since he doesn't play a big role in the story, though I might finish it if people want.
4044709 Glad to see you noticed that small warning from Cadance She might be turning into a slut but there is still some resistance within her you'll just have to wait and see if Sunset straightens her out or if it all falls apart.
4047431 Nah, Flash is just there mainly for filler and won't play a major role in the story.
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Just get SS to fail already
Shining is Missing from the story for too long, I wanna see Shining be the hero or that everything fixes itself once more.
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There is so much more planned for this story. I should know... Anyway, don't be prepared to see Shining.
If I say more, too many spoilers...
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Okay then...
Need larger chapter
4073497 probably not going to happen.
Chapters are chapters... if we have 100 of them and still get somewhere it doesn't matter to me!
4093633 My thoughts exactly
Well that ketter made me belive that really was from discorf but when candance appeared it was a trap
Still wish a bit more would happen in these chapters :/ Oh well
4094488 Glad to know I played the Discord part well
sooo at what point did sunset know that kind of information about fluttershy to make a set up like that?.....
4148590 Cadance spilled the beans somewhere in between chapters
4150047 ...and she knows that hoooow?.....
4150053 Cadance learned about their friendship during her visit to Ponyville where she and Twilight were tricked into taking care of Discord
4152300 not about the friendship , about such very specific personality details , which she didn't because we had full screen time of their time in ponyvile.....
4152346 Ah, okay, misread the question This story would take place about five years after the events of Equestria Girls. Which is more than enough time for Cadance to get to know Twilight's friends more
4157216 ok gotcha....
has it ever occurred to anyone the 30 moons= a month in equestrian time not 3 years
4172632 A moon refers to a complete lunar cycle from Full moon to new moon back to full moon . So 30 Moons is roughly 30 months. More specifically, From full moon to full moon is 27.3 days. So 27.3 days/moon x 30 moons = 819 days or around 2.5 years.
4173216 not in Equis
Interesting.