Applejack: Shame Without Humiliation

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Gabriel LaVedier

Gabriel LaVedier #1 · Aug 12th, 2014 · 5 · 4 ·

"Inability" seems to imply there's something wrong with said status. And that's only so from a highly distorted perspective.

ChakatFirepaw

ChakatFirepaw #2 · Aug 12th, 2014 · 3 · ·

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The implication is not inherent and can be seen as positive:

She's totally willing to simply give in, she has to hold on to the way things should be. Even though giving in would make for a very tempting choice, (being under the control of a minimally corrupted stallion who cares for her).

She is also too strong to simply break and retreat into being an unthinking beast in order to escape.

The Great Derpsby

The Great Derpsby #3 · Aug 13th, 2014 · 1 · ·

What's sad is that this story is slightly less depressing than the Rarity one, who is a red collar.

Or perhaps I am wrong, and the personal betrayal actually makes it worse than feeling generally unwanted and useless...

Gabriel LaVedier

Gabriel LaVedier #4 · Aug 13th, 2014 · 2 · 2 ·

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I think that I was a bit confused by the wording. She needs to retain things so she can return to the way things were. To give in is to admit that things are right. Sensbility would dictate that she have a lot of forms filled out to indicate she is completely obedient but always unavailable.

Stunt Monkey

Stunt Monkey #5 · Aug 13th, 2014 · 4 · 2 ·

This was fucking super hot! I had what I like to call: the elusive fourgasm.
(I came four times)

The Great Derpsby

The Great Derpsby #6 · Aug 13th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Welp, in any case, you could do Cheerilee next! Or perhaps that won't be quite as interesting if you can't include her class because of FimFiction rules. Hmmm.

Oh, how about a day on Cherry Jubilee's farm? You could explore how she betrayed and captured Peachbottom^^

Fireflower

Fireflower #7 · Sep 15th, 2014 · 3 · 1 ·

Please tell me it ends soon...

(edit): Then again I don't mind the AppleMac here...

rylasasin

rylasasin #8 · Oct 24th, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

Reading this one makes me appreciate the canon one all the more.

The Wanderer of Blood

The Wanderer of Blood #9 · Oct 24th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I like the story,but in FoE, Mac is not like 'you don't accept being red, you sleep in the dirt cunt' because he is not under the influence of the Crystal Cock. (The power making the stallions enslave the mares)He knows it's his sister, and even in one pic, he says, 'sorry but I gotta do this AJ' because she's misbehaving. He is basically one of the more gentle stallions, who do not hurt their black collars that badly.

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