Sunset Shimmers has made her return and has one thing in mind, revenge! She will take over all of Equestria, but first she has to deal with the princess and their friends.
I hope Sunset gets bad Karma out of this story. Sure I can see the sexual appeal to this but I hope to find a happy ending... Where Sunset is the slave to Cadence And Shining Armor in the end of this story.
4014398 I have thought about the ending and I can assure you that it's a happy one. Not saying for whom though, but a happy ending non the less :3 thanks for reading
4016248 *Sunset’s horn began to glow once more and Cadance closed her eyes, expected Sunset to harm her, however she felt the gag lift out of her mouth.*
4000410 Changes have been made to chapter one to make the transaction seem smoother, thanks for mentioning that :3
Keep up the good work. I hope the next chapter is longer.
4013313 Thanks ^^ Not sure if I'll be making the chapters any longer though as I'm liking the flow of the story in short chapters.
4013432 lol, must of missed that Thanks for pointing it out
I hope Sunset gets bad Karma out of this story. Sure I can see the sexual appeal to this but I hope to find a happy ending... Where Sunset is the slave to Cadence And Shining Armor in the end of this story.
4014398 I have thought about the ending and I can assure you that it's a happy one. Not saying for whom though, but a happy ending non the less :3 thanks for reading
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Just tell me the happy won't be for SS and I'll be reading this more.
4016248 *Sunset’s horn began to glow once more and Cadance closed her eyes, expected Sunset to harm her, however she felt the gag lift out of her mouth.*
4016310 Sorry, not saying Though I was also planning on writing alternate endings, that way everyone can get an ending they enjoy :3
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Oh grand...
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Sunset Shimmer
Sunet?
'princesses.'
You know, I can't fault her plan. If everypony is too busy fucking, they won't be able to stop her.
I'm surprised that no one here has mentioned the fact that Cadance used a DBZ "Solar Flare" on Sunset...