Sunset Shimmers has made her return and has one thing in mind, revenge! She will take over all of Equestria, but first she has to deal with the princess and their friends.
Also, you don't have to write the damn accent. Just imagine how she'd word things, and write that; people imagine the voice as long as it sounds like something she would say.
Is that it? Where's the screams from Rarity's forced orgasms? Or her muffled ones from when she gets too loud and has to be gagged? I must admit, the seeming lack of clop in this clop story is starting to bug me.
You spelled your main character's name wrong.
4919316 Did I?
I don't see it
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You wrote Sunset Shimmers, when it's actually Sunset Shimmer. =P
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... but you spelled it wrong EVERYWHERE!
But to be fair no one told you.
Also, you don't have to write the damn accent. Just imagine how she'd word things, and write that; people imagine the voice as long as it sounds like something she would say.
Is that it? Where's the screams from Rarity's forced orgasms? Or her muffled ones from when she gets too loud and has to be gagged? I must admit, the seeming lack of clop in this clop story is starting to bug me.
4919775 I think you'll find someone did tell him.
4921548 Forced orgasms. Also, as I've mentioned in the past, I've never considered this a clop story, just a story with sex scenes in it.
4951101 sorry to hear about that, thanks for sticking around though![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
4952972 YES! Someone finally recognized it!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
4960549 huh, it un-faved, well i faved it again
Thrusted.
I must have missed that when I proofread this chapter.