Sunset Shimmers has made her return and has one thing in mind, revenge! She will take over all of Equestria, but first she has to deal with the princess and their friends.
5596314 right yeah i already knew of that image series , i thought that was going to be the case but then 10 chapters in and still no mention of them.....
5596659 also I'll be continuing the Image series as well, hoping that writing small stories for those will help me flesh out what I want more so keep an eye out for them on Derpibooru
It's shucks. Also, Applejack, not Apple Jack. And there's double spacing between each paragraph.
Capitalise her name.
Well, that happened quickly.
stop taking so long to do short chapters dammit
You know, sometime that lesson about accepting offered help isn't always a good lesson. This is an example.
Apple Jack is the male, rule 63 version of Applejack.
I have to be honest, I didn't think I'd like this story but I did, though some of it made me scratch my head a bit
sooo celestia and luna are tagged as characters in this , but have they actually had any involvement in the fic so far?.....
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They're supposed to appear later.
5596314 right yeah i already knew of that image series , i thought that was going to be the case but then 10 chapters in and still no mention of them.....
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Give him time
5596659 Yes they will come in later, sorry about the wait >.<
5596659 also I'll be continuing the Image series as well, hoping that writing small stories for those will help me flesh out what I want more so keep an eye out for them on Derpibooru
5618548 wait you're the artist of those images as well -.o?....
5618649 nope, I just commission different artists for the ideas, all I do is write the short stories that go along with them.
5618704 ok....
What was with the weird spacing?