Sunset Shimmers has made her return and has one thing in mind, revenge! She will take over all of Equestria, but first she has to deal with the princess and their friends.
I mean AU and anthro are spot on but the romance tag, even for the fucked up kind, sticks out more than the strap-on Pinkie is wearing. You could be planning for a future romance of some sort and that's why you put it on and that's understandable.
Would suggest adding a dark tag even if you keep the romance tag.
asked told?
To insert means to put something in. Placed would be better here.
Getting better with the scenes, but stills needs more description. (For me, anyway.)
4354948 Meant to say actually, not asked and I'll try to describe the scenes better, still new at this
Plot twist! In comes Pinkamena Diane Pie!
By the way, I have my computer back. I can proofread again.
......what's with the tags?
I mean AU and anthro are spot on but the romance tag, even for the fucked up kind, sticks out more than the strap-on Pinkie is wearing. You could be planning for a future romance of some sort and that's why you put it on and that's understandable.
Would suggest adding a dark tag even if you keep the romance tag.