Sunset Shimmers has made her return and has one thing in mind, revenge! She will take over all of Equestria, but first she has to deal with the princess and their friends.
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she hadn’t planned off
she hadn’t planned on
lot of Stallions were
lot of stallions were
And she'll soon be joined by Dash for... training. Heh... I thought that's who she was. She certainly has a unique look... especially in the 'tea house' comic.
You know, okay, guards and Pinkie are under heavy magic, like Imperio from HP, but looks like Fluttershy and Cadance are not(not entirely?) - so what makes them unable to run to Sparkle's library and ask for help? If they cannot run, just wait for Derpy's or somepony other's next visit and give a note asking for help - to say a word to Twilight for example. Sunset's biggest (and only) advantage is that nopony knows abouth her. This is even more strange as she put the Crystal Empire town to an orgy for a time - and noone was to pass a word to Canterlot. Highly doubt she casts such a spell on everypony, and who can remember the train driver, for example? Just pass a word, and Sunset is defeated once more.
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Welcome to the department of redundancy department. Try;
has a limited time period
she hadn’t planned on
lot of stallions were
And she'll soon be joined by Dash for... training. Heh... I thought that's who she was. She certainly has a unique look... especially in the 'tea house' comic.
Nice chapter!
Wonderful chapter,
Keep 'em coming!
Nice chapter, though I wish Cadence's discipline would be in more detail
You know, okay, guards and Pinkie are under heavy magic, like Imperio from HP, but looks like Fluttershy and Cadance are not(not entirely?) - so what makes them unable to run to Sparkle's library and ask for help? If they cannot run, just wait for Derpy's or somepony other's next visit and give a note asking for help - to say a word to Twilight for example. Sunset's biggest (and only) advantage is that nopony knows abouth her. This is even more strange as she put the Crystal Empire town to an orgy for a time - and noone was to pass a word to Canterlot. Highly doubt she casts such a spell on everypony, and who can remember the train driver, for example? Just pass a word, and Sunset is defeated once more.