Sunset Shimmers has made her return and has one thing in mind, revenge! She will take over all of Equestria, but first she has to deal with the princess and their friends.
just make sure that she is kept away from Dash and AJ
I know it's easier, but somehow I don't think Sunset would be calling Applejack 'AJ'. Has she even heard Applejack called that?
Once the bounds were hidden
Once the bonds were hidden
I don't understand how the horn ring blocked her speaking as well as her magic when Sunset said that was all it would do. But that is 3 down, 3 to go. Let the marshmallow roasting begin!
4725911 She's most likely heard her being called AJ in Equestria High. Also thanks for reminding me about adding that detail, I knew I was forgetting something important
4858767 Yeah, sorry. I've been busy with 4 conventions since July and have had very little time to focus on writing the next chapter. Thankfully my con days are over for now and I can focus on this when I have time, I'll try to get the next chapter done within a week or so.
First few sentences repeat.
4725730 not sure why it did that but I fixed it, thanks
I know it's easier, but somehow I don't think Sunset would be calling Applejack 'AJ'. Has she even heard Applejack called that?
Once the bonds were hidden
I don't understand how the horn ring blocked her speaking as well as her magic when Sunset said that was all it would do. But that is 3 down, 3 to go. Let the marshmallow roasting begin!
4725911 She's most likely heard her being called AJ in Equestria High. Also thanks for reminding me about adding that detail, I knew I was forgetting something important
Nice chapter!
4727607 Thanks Personally, I was super worried that this chapter wouldn't turn good so it makes me glad that you like it
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I'm posh.
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Er, second panel
But uh, I'll start reading this, I love this sort of stuff, should be smashing. Tally ho!
Moar?
4858767 Yeah, sorry. I've been busy with 4 conventions since July and have had very little time to focus on writing the next chapter. Thankfully my con days are over for now and I can focus on this when I have time, I'll try to get the next chapter done within a week or so.
Though I supported this when it first came out, I am somewhat losing interest.
It is not the story, its me. I will still keep this as a fav
Damn it