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Sweet Berry


"And though she be but little, she is fierce." ~Shakespeare

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This is interesting. I'll see how you go on the rest of them

3864349 thank you... :pinkiehappy: I too can't wait to see where I'm going with this... :applejackconfused: just kidding... I'll be posting another chapter soon. :twilightsmile:

Please note, I don't support rape. Consent is a must, but there's nothing wrong with a little fantasy.

Amen, brother! I can't wait to see where you take this.:pinkiehappy:

3865283 sister* :duck: thank you though, I'm quite excited to have started this fic :twilightsmile:
...I just hope to doesn't seem repetitive when I get to the other ponies...

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Oops! :twilightoops:
Sister. My bad.:twilightblush:

What compelled you to write such a dark story? The "Down With Molestia" crowd would have us believe that men are the only ones who have rape fantasies and women only dream of consensual sex. What is it about pretend ravishment that you find appealing?
:twilightsmile:

3865341 well I think it's the idea of being wanted so badly that the person can't restrain themselves... I've done some research and it's actually fairly common for women to have rape fantasies.

It's not that we want to be raped. We just want to be wanted. And rough is fun :twilightblush:

I'm a bit disturbed with myself for writing this actually... But I love it :pinkiecrazy:

Well, this was certainly interesting.

Don't know what to think of it yet though, in my opinion it's way too short.

I'll admit, I don't normally go for rapefics. Something about this one got me to read it. I blame the phrase chocolate milk cum. Anyway, I enjoy what you got here so far and I'll definitely take a look at what else you put out. I'm always looking for new fics to recommend to others.

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3866097 what would you me to see more of? I know it's too short, but I'm not really sure how to make it longer. :twilightoops:

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There are several theories. I actually mentioned them in a fanfic on this site, believe it or not. But aside from the "being wanted so badly", there's also the "get out of guilt free" card. Women are put under a lot of pressure to be guarded about sexuality, to be "good girls" who aren't supposed to want it unless it's all hearts and flowers and looooove. Ravishment fantasies are a way to imagine experiencing sexual pleasure without having to experience the guilt of being a "bad girl" or "slut" who would voluntarily seek out sex.

Comment posted by Sweet Berry deleted Jan 30th, 2014

3866580 I suppose my wording wasn't exactly what I was try to say, but the other theory you mentioned makes a lot of sense. I grew up with the always be a good girl mindset. It would be interesting to see if that expectation is what spawned my ravishment fantasies. Such fantasies leave me feeling very guilty. "You aren't supposed to want that." I've noticed with it being such a taboo topic, there is not much research done, and you're left wondering, "what's wrong with me?"
It's quite odd, really. I'd like to see more research in the future.

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Just...... More.. Chapters in my opinion need to be either REALLY
good, or have 1.5k words or above! and preferably those two at the same time.

:rainbowhuh: huh is it odd I was expecting there to be a twist with pinkie suddenly biting down?

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I'm glad it did. I will agree with Novablast on chapter length. I feel like there was more that could have gone into this one. But I digress since I'm not a writer myself, I just read far too much fanfiction. :twilightblush:

Well, that is something. I don't know. A bit lackluster on the corruption aspect in my opinion. It would be a bit more interesting if we went more into the head of the victim.

THAT IS, MY NO NO SQUARE! YOU CAN, NOT TOUCH ME, THERE! :rainbowlaugh:

Ain't nobody fucking with the no-no square

4077397 soon :pinkiesad2: ... I'm thinking by the end of this weekend, and maybe the next chapter the following week :twilightblush:

This ought to be good, can't wait for more

I wonder what you have for AJ or Rainbow... :pinkiehappy:

Wait...IT'S CANCELLED!?!?!? WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????????????????????????????????????/

4746756 I have some personal problems and I no longer feel comfortable writing it. I'm trying to find someone to adopt it and if I can't, I might just pick it up again, so keep an eye out :pinkiesad2:

4747406 I hope everything is alright :heart: I love this story

4747419 aww thank you! :twilightsheepish: I do hope to feel comfortable enough to finish it. After all, I shouldn't leave you all with a slight cliff hanger. :unsuresweetie:

4747423 Who is next? And I would adopt it...except I haven't even written my own stories yet LOL

4747440 well, Fluttershy is bound to notice that Rarity is missing when she returns home. Poor, innocent Fluttershy might just happen to stumble on a depraved scene while looking for her friend. Sigh... I had such great plans for that chapter.

4747467 DON'TEND IT *Shakes you* CONTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINUE BEFORE I DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIE!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for being a DQ

4747485 I've been considering continuing.. I'm just really conflicted.

4747495 If it disturbs you that greatly, then the LAST thing you want to do is continue reading

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