Time Well Spent

Twilight learns to be thankful for her friends and everything they have done for her since she met them.
Tags are weird, alternate universe is only for part of the story.

Happy Thanksgiving, whether you celebrate it or not, it's nice to remember to be thankful for what we have.

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IvanTheRifleman

IvanTheRifleman #1 · Nov 26th, 2014 · · ·

I see the first part as a bad end, who doesn't?

This is very well written, keep up the good work!

BrenTenkage

BrenTenkage #2 · Nov 26th, 2014 · · ·

So many good feels, thanks for making this ^_^

LiterarySerenity

LiterarySerenity #3 · Nov 26th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Great work! I love how you show the comparison between how Twilight might have turned out (had she stayed cooped up and not opened her heart to friendship), and how things happened in the end. Being grateful for friends and family is a powerful message for Thanksgiving, and you convey that very well.

Happy Thanksgiving (in advance)!

Sweet Berry

Sweet Berry #4 · Nov 26th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Thank you everybody for reading and commenting! ~~Comments are the best part about posting stories here.~~

5315350 Thank you! Happy (early) thanksgiving to you, too! I was hoping this format would help to show the impact that having people who care about you can have. I wasn't sure how well it would work, but it seems it did okay.

5314254 I tried to give you ALL the feels

5314241 Thank you! While I think the first part is not the best end, some could view it as an okay end. While she was lonely and unfulfilled, she did achieve great things and go down in history. The second part is definitely better, though. I just wanted to show how her friends have helped her reach her full potential.

LiterarySerenity