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When Princess Celestia's three most favorite students, her earth-pony adopted son Spike, the half dragon Twilight, and the latest ascended alicorn Light Heart, get in trouble, they are all sent to a mysterious country named MoonRacer.

Will the make friends?
Will they find love?
Or will they stay as they are?
ALONE


Co-Writing with Light Heart101

Art by Shaslan
Full Size Art here

edit: editer is was Miner

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 35 )

Why is the r in MoonRacer capitalized?

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It's how it's name.

like the B in Shia LaBeouf

All I can say is - wow. Definitely feeling bad for Twilight, Spike and Light for how they got bullied, but I can understand that it's important to the plot. So, Twi is a unicorn/dragon hybrid (and Shining is too), Spike is an earth pony who is more magically capable than most and Light is an alicorn with some quite understandable issues of his own. And, I have to say, I AM glad to see those bullies getting their comeuppance and that scene with Twilight's family was pretty sweet stuff.

Anyway, great job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places.

Well, on to the next chapter.

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yes but...
Shining looks more like a unicorn,
and they are try to have him pass as a normal 100% unicorn
they keep, telling the other ponies in Canterlot, that he is jest Twilight's half-brother

Greatly adored this chapter. LOVED the trio's arrival in MoonRacer (as well as Twilight and Light's both having really good reasons they never learned to fly). And Twi's theories concerning such things as illusions and pocket dimensions were understandable under the circumstances. The first meetings with this universe's versions of the rest of the Mane Six (along with several others) were great material.

Pinkie is part-Diamond Dog, Applejack is half-buffalo, Rarity is part-Changeling (though is embarrassed by it, so she LOOKS mostly unicorn), Rainbow Dash is half-griffon and Fluttershy is part-Kirin).

And the chats with Buster, Speed, Bubbly, Sleipinir and the others so far definitely bring up some really intriguing stuff and possibilities.

And, again, the exchanges, characterization and future chapter set-up are all quite well done and I'm DEFINITELY going to be looking forward to more of this.

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p.s. look at the Author's Note:

Loving this story and as someone who has an alternative species MLP universe I’m loving what you’ve done

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Thanks ! :pinkiehappy:

p.s. What do you think of the other Characters ?

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I’m really liking them and liking your choices of the halfbreeds that you chose for the mane 6. I also like the thing with the kings children being named after and being like the children of Loki. I’m surprised you didn’t go with that name for him. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for them.

I’m also interested in seeing how the villains from the show work in this universe. Are they just disgruntled creatures sick of Pony racism. How will MoonRacer deal with people like Discord, Tirek and Chrysalis

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I’m really liking them

Thank you.

liking your choices of the halfbreeds that you chose for the mane 6.

It was easy for R.D.
but not for Fluttershy

I also like the thing with the kings children being named after and being like the children of Loki

I thought it would be fun.

I’m surprised you didn’t go with that name for him.

he is name after my favourite second cousin
p.s. If you want to know how it looks.

Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for them.

You would have to read my other stories.

p.s. books may go by the name of
Birth and Choice
Birth & Choice
Birth n Choice
.

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I’m also interested in seeing how the villains from the show work in this universe.

Oh... you'll see

Are they just disgruntled creatures sick of Pony racism

Bast on the fact that MoonRacer has also some None-pony races ...

Are they just disgruntled creatures sick of Pony racism

that is a good question.

How do the other races feel about Crossbreeds? I can picture some species not also not liking it (eg Dragons, Griffins) but I can picture some being more accepting of them (eg Buffalo, deer, Changelings)

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You would have to read more of the story

Came here based on the Halloween story we're doing. I think it was said somewhere that Kirouac comes from this story (I know he's your character).

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Yes, what Would you like to know about Kirouac

Kirouac: Unicorn/pegasus/dragon

The king of MoonRacer. He helps manage this nation and has recently been attempting to build an alliance with the Equestrian Empire. It has resulted in him having many talks with Celestia, always offering to help with any problems she was having. The two of them got along well, even though a lot of ponies were uncomfortable with the ponies in his nation. He started looking into the idea of having class groups for certain students who could use the extra help. That was when Celestia asked for his help with some of her personal students.

p.s. What do you think of the story ?

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Not sure. Too early for me. I do love the cover art though. So there's that.

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any one have any question ?

like.. about the proto-fusion ritual ?
or anything else ?

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No one. I was wondering if you were planning to update.

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If you mean
When is the Next Chapter

The story is done
Just waiting for my editor to be done

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kings children being named after and being like the children of Loki. I’m surprised you didn’t go with that name for him. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for them.

He is more like Odin

also

Ah, main six / student six hybrids, there's Sparkle/Smolder, Dash/Gallus, Rarity/Ocellus, AJ/Yona (buffalo/yak sub), Spike/Sandbar, and well, Pinkie being Pinkie (replacing Silverstream as Seaquestria hasn't happen yet) and Fluttershy as Zecora (Peaks of Peril yet to come) ...

Dash's ADHD has been shown (Dash is more into show how not tell how) ... [though describing acid reactions as fights could work, as the gases would be the blood given off during the fight!]

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What do you mean ?

p.s. I need an Editor

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Sorry. Forgot that the story was already done. And I'm not that great with editing.

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What was the BackGround O.C. that you wanted to put in ?

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