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Sweet Berry

"And though she be but little, she is fierce." ~Shakespeare


The Mysterious Vanishing · 8:29pm Feb 24th, 2016

Some things that I have missed in the 27.5 weeks that I did not log in

-391 Unread Chapters in my Favorites
-28 Unread Chapters in my Tracking
- 3 Messages
- 15,367 Feed Notifications
- Many automatically cleared unviewed notifications
-A message from a dear friend from 12 weeks ago which I feel very bad about missing

Long story short- Don't disappear from sites where you have friends and interactions that you will miss.

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What you should know if you're actually going to read what I wrote two days ago · 9:14pm Dec 8th, 2014

I wrote a thing....

So, if you're going to read it, understand that my writing is a little sparse, and i'm going back through and adding details. I'm trying for the emotional side of things. Hopefully it will work. Chapters will be posted when they're written and likely revised until i'm content with them. You'll see [Revising] next to the one that i'm working on, and then when it is complete, you'll see [Completed].

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Update on Discord's New Style · 9:14pm Nov 25th, 2014

I had revoked the submission on Discord's New Style of Hypnotism with the intent to rework it. I know I could write a much better story off of the idea, but that's a lot of to do. As such, when I start writing for it again, the focus point will shift more toward the internal thoughts of the mane six to show more of the hypnotism aspect. The chapters I have already posted will remain, for the most part, the same. I have put the story back up with no changes to how it previously was.

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Writing Sins · 12:35am Oct 28th, 2014

I'm in college, majoring in English (and trumpet performance , but that isn't important right now). There are just certain writing mistakes that drive me absolutely crazy. I understand mistakes, everyone makes them, but I'm losing my mind over here. As such, I've compiled a small list of things that drive me crazy. Feel free to add other irritating mistakes (or yell at me for being a grammar nazi).

-Change of perspective.

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The Tales We Tell · 1:57am Aug 2nd, 2014

It is said that our works of art reflect our emotions. Art, literature, music. All these things that we create reflect who we are.

No one has ever known a great poet who lived a happy life. Great artists suffered horrible fates, never to even see their art become known. To the human mind, beauty comes from the ashes of pain and sorrow.

It is my thought that perhaps we like to hurt. If only a little.

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Creepy Pasta · 7:48pm Jul 25th, 2014

All I've done recently is read and listen to creepy pastas....

The campfire stories of the internet? More like nightmares.

Yup... I don't sleep anymore. Psh, who needs sleep anyway?

Anyways, how about my little pony themed creepy pastas that aren't related to Cupcakes?
Hmmm... This could be great. Or terrifying. Both are equally good.

I'm a little freaked out right now.

......join the creepy pasta cult with me.

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Applejack's Accent · 2:56am Jul 25th, 2014

Well, I have three options:

-don't write things with Applejack
-don't have Applejack speak
-don't give Applejack a written accent

Because southern accents are not in my writing repertoire and it's a problem.

Can there be a group for that? "Southern Accent Writing Tutorial Group"

What are your opinions on writing in Applejack's accent? Any helpful tips?

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"Without her realizing..." · 7:52pm Jul 14th, 2014

I hate when in clop, the author writes something along the lines of:

"Without her realizing, her hand had wandered down her body."

Ummm.... No . Hands don't just wander. You intentionally move them. I get the whole voyeur/ can't look away thing but hands don't just move. Every action is intentional, whether in clop, or regular fiction, even life. Intention is everything.

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The "Read Later" List is Like the Moon · 7:10pm Jun 19th, 2014

"Read Later" is saying "this looks interesting but I don't want to read it right now." It's helpful, and you can find the story again when you're ready.


Later is really like a thousand years and you've banished the story to the read later list. The stars align for only a lucky few stories. Only once in a while do the stories escape and run rampant in your mind.

So basically, the stories become Luna and are stuck on the moon because we banished them.

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What if...? · 2:45am Jun 18th, 2014

What if Celestia lost the battle with Nightmare Moon and was banished?

What if Luna took Twilight under her wing?

What if Luna returned to her "good" form but never released Celestia?

What if Twilight was evil?

What if she was an evil accomplice to Nightmare Moon?

What if all the villains formed an alliance?

just publicly brainstorming... Don't mind me.

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