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Sweet Berry


"And though she be but little, she is fierce." ~Shakespeare

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  • 425 weeks
    The Mysterious Vanishing

    Some things that I have missed in the 27.5 weeks that I did not log in

    -391 Unread Chapters in my Favorites
    -28 Unread Chapters in my Tracking
    - 3 Messages
    - 15,367 Feed Notifications
    - Many automatically cleared unviewed notifications
    -A message from a dear friend from 12 weeks ago which I feel very bad about missing

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  • 490 weeks
    Update on Discord's New Style

    I had revoked the submission on Discord's New Style of Hypnotism with the intent to rework it. I know I could write a much better story off of the idea, but that's a lot of to do. As such, when I start writing for it again, the focus point will shift more toward the internal thoughts of the mane six to show more of the hypnotism aspect. The chapters I have already posted will remain, for the

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  • 494 weeks
    Writing Sins

    I'm in college, majoring in English (and trumpet performance , but that isn't important right now). There are just certain writing mistakes that drive me absolutely crazy. I understand mistakes, everyone makes them, but I'm losing my mind over here. As such, I've compiled a small list of things that drive me crazy. Feel free to add other irritating mistakes (or yell at me for being a grammar

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  • 506 weeks
    The Tales We Tell

    It is said that our works of art reflect our emotions. Art, literature, music. All these things that we create reflect who we are.

    No one has ever known a great poet who lived a happy life. Great artists suffered horrible fates, never to even see their art become known. To the human mind, beauty comes from the ashes of pain and sorrow.

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Jul
14th
2014

"Without her realizing..." · 7:52pm Jul 14th, 2014

I hate when in clop, the author writes something along the lines of:

"Without her realizing, her hand had wandered down her body."

Ummm.... No . Hands don't just wander. You intentionally move them. I get the whole voyeur/ can't look away thing but hands don't just move. Every action is intentional, whether in clop, or regular fiction, even life. Intention is everything.

But whatever. Write whatever you want. That's just my opinion. I have a lot of opinions on clop but whatever. To each their own.

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Comments ( 1 )

I agree that it's a strange way to describe it.

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