"Without her realizing..." · 7:52pm Jul 14th, 2014
I hate when in clop, the author writes something along the lines of:
"Without her realizing, her hand had wandered down her body."
Ummm.... No . Hands don't just wander. You intentionally move them. I get the whole voyeur/ can't look away thing but hands don't just move. Every action is intentional, whether in clop, or regular fiction, even life. Intention is everything.
But whatever. Write whatever you want. That's just my opinion. I have a lot of opinions on clop but whatever. To each their own.
I agree that it's a strange way to describe it.