Hey, everypony. I'm a young writer. I'm not the most talented, but I'm getting there. I would like anybody to help me out by being my editor and/or co-writer. Any and all help is appreciated.
The Mad Queen took everything from Broken Heart; Her husband, her kingdom, even her name. Convinced His Love is a lie, she goes to Him, and denounces His Truth.
The past should not be forgotten, note should it blind us to what the future may hold. With the new change in statuesque between ponies and their new channeling neighbors, the past may be the answer to help set an understanding.
The heartwarming story about a young couple's first time together. Well, the mare is actually a disguised changeling princess preparing to gain enough love to enact her plans to take over large parts of Equestria. That might be important.
I am Nox, the strongest Xelor, or Time mage alive. Or rather, I became him. Like him, I lost my family, but unlike him THEY weren't taken from me, I was taken from them. I will find my home or I'll make a new one and change this world.
Woah dude. First of all, it's a credit to you that a hetero guy like me read that gay rape section all the way through. Second of all, nice job with the rest of it too, very well written. Lastly, that ending, woooah!
3181451 Thank you. And, if you don't mind, could you pass this around? I would like to get more feedback so I could learn how to improve and see what people want to read. Any help is very much appreciated.
3189784 yeah sure thing. If you're into grimdark you might like my story My Little Princess. No sex but it's dark. Ill do a little share for share if you like!
Ending: Oh shit. Someone plz continue this, I'm not a good writer.
Woah dude. First of all, it's a credit to you that a hetero guy like me read that gay rape section all the way through. Second of all, nice job with the rest of it too, very well written. Lastly, that ending, woooah!
Very nicely done
3181451 Thank you. And, if you don't mind, could you pass this around? I would like to get more feedback so I could learn how to improve and see what people want to read. Any help is very much appreciated.
3189784 yeah sure thing. If you're into grimdark you might like my story My Little Princess. No sex but it's dark. Ill do a little share for share if you like!
3190323 Thank you. I may check it out sometime.
This is quite the story. One of these days we should colaborate