Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Not a massive amount can be said about this chapter, beyond that it was generally an entertaining read.
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I like... Light but nice start for his day
More is now required!
After reading this chapter, I'm getting the strongest "Rihanna/Bobby Brown" vibe. Something tells me Fluer's ex-coltfriend was something of an asshole...
4770529 I have no idea who Bobby Brown is, and I don't listen (or paid attention to) Rihanna's music, so I don't know what the deal with their relationship was. However, Fleur's ex-coltfriend being an asshole doesn't even cover HALF of who he is, I'll tell you that.
What 4769771 and 4770199 said. I'm certainly enjoying it so far. GIven that I generally don't like anthro stories and don't usually make it more than a chapter or two in, that should tell you something.
4770545 I'm quite flattered. I appreciate you giving something outside of your preferred reads like mine a chance.
Excellent chapter
That sponge bob reference though
Oh this reminds me so much of most talk shows I have seen xD
4770555 The strange part is that the anthro doesn't take away from the story... I would of left mid-chapter 1, but I'm staying till the end for this one!
What the Hell Happened Here?
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somepony tripped
4770736 A lot of things could happen here. I mean there have been some cases where someone got hurt in a mob, in more ways than one.
I have to say, this story is also well out of my comfort zone. I'm not really into romantics, I prefer Fallout: Equestria, and adventure stories. Still I'm amused by the comedic factor and it's enough to keep me interested in the story.
4770539 Actually, I think it was Chris Brown, not Bobby Brown. (Bobby Brown was the wife-beating, coke abusing ex-boyfriend of the late Whitney Houston.) In either case, this dude sounds like a major league asshat.
The maretoria's secret will be shooting will be interesting
4771215 Actually, the appointment with Maretoria's Secret is more like a meeting to discuss what Fleur will need to do for their summer swimsuit catalog. The photo shoot with Mare de Fur however, THAT is going to be interesting.
>Mfw new chapter.
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Yessss!!
(Anyways, nice chapter brah! Keep up the good work!
To which he proceeded to roar like Chewbacca
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The only problem I have is the wait for the next installment. A fun little read this chapter was. (Posted while listening to 'Fleur de Lis' by Evening Star.)
"MY CABBAGES!"
Gotta say, I normally hate anthro fics, but this story is just too good to resist. Not having anthro boobs mentioned every 5 sentences helps too.
Okay, that was an exciting first part of the job and it's not over yet. Though I'm kinda glad the guy seems to be getting into the groove at the end of this. I don't know whether or not it would be bad for him if he tried to promote or help the other humans in Equestria by suggesting that the ponies should allow them to have a fair chance at getting a job, but I do say that Oz managed to handle the situation pretty well. I guess the next part is trying to figure out on how to take notes on the regular parts of the job now.
Also I think I found the only safe for work picture for anthro Fleur even though she is with Fancy I think their body type is the closest to what you described for the anthro ponies in this verse.
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4772960 Eeeeh, I think you got the right idea, but I don't really see Fleur wearing something of that attire. Plus I see Fancy Pants a little more burly in his body frame. Thanks for showing me though.
4772773 I'm glad I wasn't the only one who thought that too!
4771831 That face always get me
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I know it's just that it's the only one with the right body type for her the other one is pretty well done, but she has human feet.
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It's just that I know what you mean that it's hard to find a safe anthro pic about her when the only truly safe ones are when she's a normal pony.
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Lol
4773372 ah lord Zhange Jiao!
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The will of the heavens flows through you, my child! *flails his arms around*
4774388 that picture is adorable
4774487 I know It's amazing how they were able to take Zhang and somehow make him cute.
You can find it by typing "Zhang Jiao" on DeviantArt, if you want to find it. Should be right on the first page.
4774590 Another Disbeliever Converted!!
And Liked and faved! I'm really enjoying these Fleur x Human stories. I need to find more I anxiously await your next chapter!
You know I just realize something. I never read a Fleur fan fic before. I'm glad this one was my first. I'm really enjoying this.
4778615 I'm flattered to be your first. I've never read a Fleur focused story before either, and when I realized how that isn't getting as much attention as others, I quickly came up with something like this. I must say that while I didn't expect my story to get THIS recognized, I'm certainly glad I decided to make such a fic.
PLEASE UPDATE
I LOVE IT ALREADY
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Dude, the link to the image you attempted to show to us is broken......We need a better link.Edit: Never mind, I see the image now. I can actually picture Fleur like this in the story..
4770736 This:
4831384 Glad I'm not the only one who thought this
HI-HO SILVER AWAY!
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4772773 MY EYES!!!
I'm highly surprised that no one made any SpongeBob references about the guy yelling 'AGK! MY LEG!'
I see, you to have been to Comicon San Diego.
how the heck do 63 people dislike this?
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Oh how funny that would be XD or even if he had oz IMAGINE chewies growl/roar