Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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I hope this guy isn't like Pickle's brother from Metalocalypse. Some nasty smoocher who scams and screws everyone over...
you made us wait for this, and you did not disappoint. i can't wait for ozzy to meet mr.stabby bastard. not sure if it would be good or bad but i think it's a long time coming
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My god that refrince do
I feared It was his brother, what a relief.
Well, the wait for the chapter was worth it, I can't wait to see how akward the situation will be between Ozzy and our new challenger ;)
the new chapter is loaded with all kinds of information to say the lest.
the girls make up with ozzy's female friend from earth fleur's is making plans to knock ozzy's socked off at some point.
and if you ever wonder just how popular this story is Dudeler I was watching the counter wile I was reading and at one point it hit 33 readers.
I see one problem with this chapter and it is a huge problem.
it ended we the readers want more..
Harts Fire
PS just looked counter is now at 39
Next chapter, Ozzy does something reckless.
I want him around all the time!
Hahaha! Let the pervert hour being!
up date this chapter is on the top ten story list right now.
I'm seriously enjoying the story. I'm so happy that this updated that I'm bursting with euphoria. I'd squee but I'd have to turn in my man card and I want to hang onto that.
That said, I'm with the other commenters that thought that it was Robert coming for a visit, don't know why, since it was previously stated that he (Robert) still had 22 years remaining of jail time. That said, in my honest opinion, I think its time for a confrontation with Solar. You keep teasing us with the characters mentioning about seeing him and then with this chapter's nightmare. This, (should, or when it happens) will have been a very long time in coming.
That said, I'm torn regarding Solar. One part of me wants to see him redeemed and put the others' minds at peace. But the other part wants him to view himself as the injured party and continue to seek vengeance against Fleur for the wrongs which he perceives had been done to him. I kind of want to see him with the same knife (or a similar one) that he stabbed Shining with, as it would add psychological impact in addition to the physical harm that it could be capable of.
What have you done to me!? I'm getting ideas in my head for your story and excited over this story in particular. Well back to waiting for another enjoyable and excellent chapter.
Peace,
AuthorGenesis
Do I have this feelig shits about to happen?
Shit...fan...
that is all I have to say...
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Turn in your man card for squeezing? No...holding it in means you must turn it in...
Why?
REAL MEN SHOW THEIR FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!
That's why...now...turn in your man card...
wow at first I thought it was ozzy's bro but nooo it nun the less is stile a cliff hanger
Jude Wesley be like
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Combine him with this and several other several other men like them and you have Wesley
I know someone like Jude, and with that I'm looking exceedingly to the next chappy.
...THAT was Ozzy's old roommate?! Oh, yeah. Shiny's gonna LOVE this guy. Ozzy's gonna be...I'm going to use ambivalent about it. Fleur's gonna be the only wild card here. Only question remains is if it's such a B*&^% to get in Equestria, what brought Jude there?
Oh jeez!
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Well, no criminal history or drug use seems to have been two of the main things that can bar someone from being able to take the portal. This dude, besides being a spazz seems like he's... I don't know. If his worrying his hitting on Fleur and Shining would get Ozzy fired, I'm pretty sure he'd probably have something similar to a heart attack if he tried to steal a candy bar from a convenience store, or a polar pop which normally cost less than a $1, let alone doing any kind of serious crime.
well, here's a good "pain in the ass" character who will embarrass Ozzy at any occasion ...
It almost feels like the two previous nights never happened.
God must exist somewhere, because ever since Jude was mentioned in passing, I've been dying to have him show up and rain on Ozzy's perfect(ish) parade. Let the EMBARASSMENT AND GOOFY SHENANIGANS BEGIN!!!!
5584378 That was the exact man I thought of when I heard of Bubbles
Oh dear god.... you mean we got a blonde man who hits on ladies.... I feel like Sanji just entered the picture now
Wait.... what would he do to all the mares he sees? Or even Claire? Hell what would OZZY do when he finds him here?!
The anticipation and cliff hangs are going to be the end of me, keep it up!
Nice. This is a great new chapter I the story. It's turning out b-e-a-utiful by the way.
Blond hair.
Bad romantic attempts.
I know who this guy is.
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Why do I have a feeling something horrible is going to happen?
I dunno, I guess I'm just being paranoid.
OR MAYBE!
Actually, nevermind.
Jude Wesley reminds me a lot of Larry Butz, and that's awesome.
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Might have been better to lay claim they don't know Oz and sending this guy to Claires address for giggles. Because I can tell he will be trouble.
after taking 3 days to read 36 chapters, I find this to be a very enticing story that keeps me drawn to it, with interesting characters that I want to know more about (or beat the shit out of in Solar's and less so for Puff Tie's cases), an incredible level of feels and although there is clop within the story, it is not the main focus and is written in as a bonus scene which could be ignored
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and shall await for more chapters
I would also like to congratulate you and express my hatred towards you because of chapter 22
for it was chapter 22 that, for the first time since I joined Fimfiction, I ACTUALLY cried because the feels were far too strong
so congratulations on being the first to make me cry and fuck you for making me cry
ermergerd NEW CHARACTER! Can't wait!
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Well, considering how many mares seem to have an... exotic appetite, it wouldn't be too hard for him to find a marefriend, or at least a bed buddy... if they don't try molesting him first.
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....YES!!!!! Dude is now Johnny B to me.
Oooh I like this! May I use this book title in my main pony tale later? I think one or more may drop hints to a former human... :)
5691997 Sure. Just keep in mind I just made the title up, so there may not be such a book existing irl.
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I was sure it was made up anyway, so no problem.
Have to ask, does anyone else feel like there should be more stories based in this Universe?
I know there's plenty of Anthro-pony stories with humans that have crossed over to Equestria some how, but I really like the foundation that Dudeler has set for this world. Portals between world, cooperation between Equis and Earth to prevent dangerous elements for crossing over. Trade of magic and techonology between worlds. Procedures allowing immigration between worlds.
Are there any other stories based on this universe? Somewhat like all the spinoffs of Fallout: Equestria, or the Conversion Bureau, or the Vognerverse.
I'd really like to read more stories about human beings immigrating to Equis or of anthro-ponies immigrating to Earth. Does anyone else share this opinion?
5703010 Find an author named Sketchy Changeling. The immigration between worlds idea was pretty much inspired by his stories. There's also I think what's called the Ingress series, but the ponies are all feral. That's really all the stories I can think of.
5703271 Thanks, I'll be sure to check them out.
5703010 Check half of the crap done by sir hat....fucker does enough stuff that he's got /something/ to fit the bill.
5710394 Wow, 91 stories, he has written a lot. Going through the summaries with the human tag I found a few that might be what I'm looking for but can't know till I've read a little bit.
Thanks for pointing it out. Anything by Sir Hat that you'd recommend?
5710528 I'll be honest with ya sweet cheeks,I ain't read half of what that bugger puts out.Too many words,too little time.Basically all of what I've seen was atleast fairly good,though,so take your pick of what sounds interesting....Oh!
And as a challenge,Take a sip of an alcoholic beverage (Or some form of whatever,should that not be your thing/you're too young) whenever he does a ...
5703010 Read the story My Overbearing Aunt
5711949 Does a what? Does a WHAT? I don't drink, but I still want to know what the challenge is.
Wait did you mean the ellipse(...)? Is that the challenge?
5711957 I intend to. I came across it before but I haven't had a chance to start. Still glad to hear that it's a recommendation. Is the sides story also worthwhile?
5713406 This side story isn't made by the same author, but I like it all the same.
My Overbearing Aunt: The Nightmare Gambit
5713392 Yep,Name wasn't coming to mind,but take a drink of /something/ every time he does a ... , Trust me,you'll be suprised.
Well Fleur you thought about Oz having some guy friends and now he showed up. At first I thought this guy was his brother reformed, but I forgot that they know what he looks like so they would've recognized him immediately. I gotta say when he hit on the girls with that display of his I immediately saw him as Larry Butz from the Ace Attorney series, I don't know why but I just see him like that. I also gotta say that Jude must've watch too many Anime shows to think hitting on girls like that would've worked. I wonder if he'll be a good match for Claire.... nah.
5711957 I've started reading MObA, not that far in but I do like it. For the setup, I like that it explains that the introduction between Equus and Earth is the intended result of Celestia creating a spell to make contact with other worlds. However, I think I prefer Dudeler's setup more for TMS. While there's no explanation for the portals between Equus and Earth, I like that it's still in the early stages of interaction.
In MObA it skips ahead nearly twenty where pony/human interaction has fully developed and the idea of relationships between the species is already a thing. It's just Marcus and his friends that the story focuses on.
But TMS is only about six, seven months after first contact and Ozzy in one of the first immigrants to Equus. They're still learning about each others culture having only books and pamphlets to learn from before first hand experience. It includes problems like is human/pony relationships acceptable, is pregnancy an issue, and how to deal with problems of harassment. It's not just Ozzy's relationships that's developing, because Ozzy and friends are examples of how both culture are developing with each other at this early stage.
I first asked for suggestions, I wonder what life was like for other humans like Ozzy who have moved to Equus as well as life for ponies who have moved to Earth. I can hardly wait for Dudeler's story to reach Ozzy/Fleur/Shining Stars trip to Earth and maybe see how pony immigrants have to adjust to Earth life.