Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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I think Oz is going to end up being stabbed or something. Or maybe kidnapped I dunno.
5065838 a word? Well no harm than
Really hoped this would be the chapter where Oz showed off the goods :c
He show loyal and commitment. Still I'm glad he dodge a bullet there. Let's hope things will calm down before then next storm.
This story is best story
Wow! I kinda admit I saw something like this coming, don;t get me wrong I still loved it and it's beautifully written. Couldn't have done it better myself and I can't wait for more.
Poor Ozzy. I knew that bitch was going to do something like this.
Hmm... there
Dang it! I walk away for five minutes and forget what I'm going to say. Le mie scuse.
Just got home, and was greeted to this lovely chapter! The day's been good.
I really like the twist on having the man being sexually assaulted in this story; and Ozzy was sooo right in his actions that it's going to be interesting to see where things lead from here on. And perhaps we might finally see a certain Princess make a guest appearance in your tale?????
I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW THAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!
I knew it was all a scam!
At least Oz's... *cough* you know... was saved.
Thank you for not making a joke out of rape.
hmmm do not know why but something says he knows who have their first or that's what I see
Ho shit what fucking slut
5065951 Oh no, I take rape VERY seriously. It's why I don't even attempt at making such fictions, or even drawings about it.
5066010 And that's why I say thank you . Too many write it as a joke.
Well shit, I was looking forward to the show and tell.
By this point, if Oz doesn't end up with both shining and Fleur I don't know what Im going to do.
(I'm not trying to say what you should do with the story, but I'm a sucker for humans learning the process of herding. Like xenophilia and what not. Not to mention ALL THE CLOP SCENES!)
DAMN i guess i do need to smack a bitch
I imagine he will focus even more on his training maybe investigating if he can purchase a special anti magic ring or something, I mean he feel powerless, trauma like those are try to deal, and treat with training, and a more determined mind to be stronger, he better be careful not to loss his heart in the process
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*Using his powers of demonic pastry, CD stretches his his unholy arms through the Internet and grabs the porn requesting fool by his shirt collar.* Do you want to know what happens when someone questions Dudler about the clop.* He says in a hushed slightly demented tone, bringing his lips closer to his victims ears.* HE DELAYS IT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER AND MAKES EVERYONE SUFFER!
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Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
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Can't say I didn't see that coming, but nicely executed all the same.
Still looking forward to Oz having his nightmare confrontation with Luna, probably what I'm looking forward to the most right now.
Poor Ozzy.
Glad to see another update on this chapter! Though I had a feeling things were going to go this way with Mascara, but not to THAT extreme. Honestly I would be in the same shoes as Ozzy if that were to happen to me, I would be freaking out and not sure what to do and being bribe like that... very tough choice and I think in real life that could happen (and has happen if I'm not aware) and would be very hard to choice your option.
I don't know if I would react to being nearly-rape like Ozzy did with his breakdown, I probably be a shaking and panicking a bit still, but I think you did an alright job on the situation and how Fleur calmed him down. Though I bet Shining is feeling more guilty about this, having Ozzy go there that to make sure the whole "interview" was legit or not, over kicking him in the chest.
After a shocking experience like that I don't know if he'll keep his word about showing him to the girls in "all his glory" but he seems to be a committed and loyal friend who takes his promises seriously. Though it's possible Shining will use the "get even card" from this morning to help Ozzy and heal his emotional scars from that... something both will be happy about.
Looking forward to the next chapter post-haste!
PS: I hope I'm not overstepping my borders here, but is it OK if I... have your character Shining Star appear in my story, Love Troubles Corona? It's just that, I REALLY like Shining Star as she's an awesome OC you made and I found her tsundere-like personality very adorable. Though my story is more light-hearted than your story here, more mature, so her and Fleur will be different in my tale and they'll be more open about Herds though only if the stallion is truly caring to all the mares. I feel like making a drawing of Shining as she's my favorite. Hoping for Oz and her to get together!
However this is your OC and I wouldn't use her unless I had your permission. Whether you like me or not, I won't let it affect me as I will continue to write my story to the best of my abilities. I will credit you if you do, as it is your OC and not mine.
And I hope you enjoy my story when you do!
...It is times like this where I believe a person would consider acquiring a self-defence weapon....be it a knife,gun or can of mace...Or hell,even a mace.
I know this is weird but in a way I actually like the switched roles that male and females are going threw in this story. Freaken Oz almost gets raped! I mean holy pink donkey shit, where is this kind of stuff in the other stories that people write? Cool part is that it fits, everything in this story actually adds up. If our world was run the same way you can bet your life that this shit would happen. Very well done Dudeler.
LOVE IT!
WOW.... I had a feeling something bad was gonna happen..... poor ozzy
I DEMAND PUNISHMENT CHAPTERor a normal chappy cause you know fics good
Big win for Fleur, Bubbles and Shining pulling off the big damn heroes moment.
Great job Xiao ge (look it up in a Chinese dictionary.) This was a great addition to the story! It added more emotional depth and had a great all or nothing scenario. I, as always, am looking forward to your next installment and I know I will not be disappointed. Your writing is getting better and better and I feel great to see the advancement.
I fucking knew it!!!!!!!!
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Right? so much drama, intrigue and a plot thick enough to make you want more.
Best author!
I wonder if what Oz has been through will make Shining reconsider her general opinion on stallions. You know, cuz' apparently mares are no better.
I knew from the start that this were going to happen, whe she requested oz to be ALONE was enough proof, still good chap
I suspect the surprise is a knife. To Ozzy's Torso.
5067267 ....Calm down there mister Civil Protection officer 42412....We don't need another ravenholm incident.
Yes miseryborn this is best other ever
COOL
5066691 I find it interesting that you want to use my OC for your story. The only things I worry about is how big of a role Shining Star will play in your story, and if she and Fleur will become a big part of the story you're making. There's also how much you'd change Shining's personality to suit your needs in your story.
5065945 your pic tells a different story
First of all, DAMN! That was a dramatic and very good chapter.
And secondly, there is only one way this can get worse.
Solar Flare.
I get this feeling that Solar was with Mascara until she dumped him and he came back to begin stalking Fleur.
Good thing Shining was suspicious of Mascara from the start though I wonder why she didn't warn Oz about her? Would his change in attitude towards her make her suspicious about him if he knew? I'm really sad that this has happened to Oz like that and I really like how you gave the right amount of fear for Oz in this situation. Especially how scary an anthro unicorn can be in that scene, though should Oz be there in court when they try to put her in jail?
5066699 With ponies like Mascara around, the mace would be lovely to have. Preferably with an attached chainsaw, you know for those extra bad ponies the ones who deserve chainsaw to the face.
Hmm... Colonel Mustard in the library with a small, angry Chrysalis on a stick. A sort of awkward magic pistol. An awkward magic pistol that, uh, screams obscenities at the wielder. An elaborate failsafe set up by Mascara in case her plans fell through. They'll never see it coming and the police will be left baffled. I mean what kind of evidence short of video footage would lead to the conclusion "death by Chrysalis-on-a-stick"? It's the perfect murder.
And then the meteor hits.
Additional:
Holy crap! I'm semi-psychic!
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That sounds like a great idea. I agree. But most likely, if they were, it would be for political/moral support reasons. A small group of aliens enters your world and whats the first thing that happens to one of them? First he's out of a job and home, get's beaten up twice and recently nearly raped. One would think that one of the princesses would show up and make some sort of morality speech like "We don't condone this." or "We're sorry that he's having a tough time, please don't think we're all like this, we'll provide some moral support." or something to that effect. Maybe. Just that it's bad publicity that a visiting alien (Ozzy Shore) is having a tough time.
I was right bout mascara, always have been.
Poor Ozzy, still I'm not sure if they'll get her for rape.
Kudos on the new milestone! 1000 comments!
Anyway, man, this chapter was quite an ordeal. Especially for Ozzy. I was terrified alongside him.
Hmm... he was already having nightmares. They're probably just going to get worse now. And the impression I got was that Luna can't enter his dreams until he opens up to Fleur and Shining. Yeah, he'd better tell them soon.