Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Oh, what's this? A new chapter of TMS? Excellent. I do love a good laugh.
*reads the part where Shiny reveals her display of photos and awards that highlights her previous life as a model only to show the turning point in which all of her dreams and aspirations came crashing down in a tragic turn of events, forcing her to live out the rest of her life in a career in which she will never reach the level that she could have attained and most definitely deserved after the cruel hand she was dealt by fate*
That-that's not funny!
Man, you hit a grand slam with this chapter. The feels are real. My favorite chapter yet.
I loved this chapter a lot. Made me feel a little lonely. I needs me some good snuggles right about now. *le sniffle*
Been waiting for this all week! Great chapter, keep up the wonderful work!
Goddammit! Kiss already!
Ozzy Shore: Friend. Confidant. Emotional shoulder to lean on. Living Teddy Bear.
Dude's got SWAG.
That guy's as much of an all around teddy bear as I am. Well, at least I'm a Panda Teddy Bear. Loved this chapter. It really was cute!
Shiny is definitely going to wake up during the night and feel his hardon against her leg or something.
The feels are strong with this one. Good story.
Excellent!
I liked this chapter.
New chapter? New chapter?! NEW CHAPTER?! This pleases me greatly.
Hmm...
Shining will confess, alright. What she won't be expecting is that Ozzy already knew. Ozzy's no fool, after all. He'll then offer up his own confession that he went along with the idea in the hope that he'd eventually provoke her into asking him out. Lo and behold, it worked! Shining, a tad upset that she played into his hands, will promptly kick him again. Considering them even on the matter, Shining will go on to offer Ozzy advice on winning Fleur's heart. Turns out Fleur has a secret of a most terrible nature by Equestrian standards -- she love McDonalds. Whether it's the burgers, the nuggets or the sausage she just can't get enough. Nay, she's loving it! Unfortunately there are no McDonalds currently operating on the Equestrian side of the dimensional border. With few others options at his disposal, Ozzy settles on ordering one of the most expensive take-out dinners in the history of both worlds.
That night Shining, though uninterested in meat, finds herself more and more turned on by the idea of meat-eaters as she contemplates how her friends' date must be going. A bit of introspection, however, leads her to realize that what she's really turned on by isn't the idea of them eating meat but rather the idea of being Ozzy and Fleur's "prey". After several sessions of furious masturbation she admits to herself that she wants to be truly ravished by them; admits to herself that she wants to be truly taken by her best friends and potential lovers with no control over the situation. With nothing better to do (and all masturbated out for the evening) she heads into town for a visit to the local sex shop.
And then the meteor hits. The sex shop. Blows it sky high right in front of her eyes, ruining her plans. Fucking meteors. Think they own the place, just crashing wherever they please all the time like they do.
THIS STORY rules!!!
I LOVE IT!!!
AWESOME!!!
I even cried in the part where Shining opened up to Ozzy.
PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS AWESOME WORK!!!
This chapter just warmed my heart. Just fantastic.
that music they danced to was soft core porn music, i thought it was about to get a little BOW CHICK A WOW WOW
Aw, though just curious....Are they going to be a herd?
Prepare your body.
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I honestly doubt it due to what Ozzy said his opinion on it was earlier, but who can say but the author?
5177663 true.
Hey that was 10% less than a lethal dose!
I stand by my assertion that Shining is the better of the two, though I still wouldn't want to be anywhere near Fleur when she pulls out the puppy dog stare.
5176722 love it
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Wow. Let me just fix that up a bit. You can definitely tell that it was about 5AM when I wrote that. No more 30-hour days for me.
5178092 Pft. Please, I dreamt up some crazier shit than that.
5178194 you dont want to know what i have dreamed up it would keep you awake for hours
NICE MUSIC
Nice chapter. Keep it up.
Did anything big happen this chapter? I found there was way too much dialogue and not enough happening to keep me interested, but I don't want to come into the next chapter where something is going to get sprung on me.
5179109 So, you basically just stopped halfway through and didn't bother to see what's next.
5179135 Exactly. I got bored.
5179274 Then I guess you didn't get to the point where Shining and Ozzy got drunk and finally had hot, sweaty, mind-blowing sex during their date, or you can just read the comments and see for yourself what happened.
Oh god right in the feels
5178532 meh I probably would like to see that to see who is more fucked the hell up
5179436 I'm gonna call your bullshit right there.
5179685 Take it what you will. I will say this, when you read the next chapter without getting through all of the newest one first, you're going to be very confused on how it all went down, especially the beginning when the two are in bed together. Whether there's too much or too little dialogue, a story's a story. Some chapters may have more dialogue than narrative, others are the other way around. It's just how I write. If you're not into that, then I'm sorry you're not pleased, but I'm not going to change anything.
5179705 No offence to you, I just have a hard time concentrating when it's mostly dialogue. I constantly find myself finding other things to do, and when I finally get back to it, I've forgotten half the things that happened earlier in the chapter.
5179719 If reading dialogue's that difficult for ya, then you might not like the next chapter then, because there's going to be plenty of it. While I do think there should be a balance between showing and telling, and I still got ways to go to improve that, to me, whether it's one or the other, the one thing I make sure to put out in my stories are the interactions between my characters. It's one of the main things I believe that gives any kind of story any life or intimacy that the readers can get in on.
I may not know if you have a problem reading more dialogue based stories, but you can definitely be sure there's no way I'm going to make a completely narrated story in the future.
I want...no I need more. I could read this all day, well not all day but you get the point. Overall I thought this chapter was Magnifique. the only thing I have to say is good luck and bring us some more chapter later.
5179756 I see. I'll try and read the next chapter. I just kinda like the more action/verb based parts more than the lines upon lines of dialogue. And stories where there's a lot going on. Gives me something to think about instead of just lines upon lines of text being read to me in my head. Like huge battle scenes! While there's these two facing off, there's archer fire whizzing overhead, and the war cries of ponies and changelings alike, and explosions from magic missiles. One of the reasons I stopped reading Man of War was because it changed from a really great, action packed story to fillies and colts doing things they shouldn't. It's like transferring from The Avengers to a chick flick.
Apparently this makes me a creative person. Who'da thunk?
Also Hyperactive. Don't see why one would think I'm hyperactive.
5179823 Okay, I can understand that, and while there's some dramatic, intense scenes in this story, especially the cloppable material, that I can describe in every bit of detail I can manage, in the end, TMS is still a Slice of Life Romantic story that may not have as much action as what you may have come expecting.
Now if you're looking for action packed stories, though I'm taking hiatus from both of these for now, and I'll be planning a complete rewrite from scratch when I get back to them, Cyan and Lumina and its Bonus Chapters may have the kind of action you're looking for as far as what I can remember what I've written and published. Again, I'm taking a hiatus from them right now, and I'll be doing a rewrite on CaL's story when I get started on it again, but the content here will be more or less the same compared to the revived version. Hopefully these will give you something to keep you busy, and thanks for your personal input.
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No, I mean I dropped about a dozen words and had a few in the incorrect tense.
5179965 Ah. Well I wouldn't really notice anyway.
5179864 I feel like that "Thanks for your personal input" was more of a "Fuck off, ye bloody wankah."
Very nice. (Fleur would like a pact like the one she and Shiny made *chuckling amusedly*) The music was a nice touch as always (Especially 'Endless Love.' I'm surprised you didn't use the Lionel Ritchie version, but I suppose it would've tipped Oz off so...) And why is it parent and children scenes are always so touching?
5180049 Didn't really sound that way from the last comment I posted, but take it what you will I suppose.
5180062 Jokes. But since Borderlands: The Pre Sequel, everytime someone uses "Oz" to shorten Ozzy's name, I can't help but think of the oxygen kits from said game.
wow I'm number one reader and when I was reading when they were like 44 and continued to rise this story was to become very popular
Wow, this is how you end a nice night out with a friend. I can see so many guys screwing this up if they ever "imply" that the girl they're having a sleepover with is going to "confess" or have sex with them. It's very nice that Oz managed to not fall into those trappings and even Shining they were both very friendly with each other and had a good time from simply learning more about each other. Also, I think both Oz and Shining did a good job on handling the "over seasoned?" meatloaf, that was nice.
5179613 agreed.
Love this chapter. Thank You So Much.::
Yeah, for something so basic "first meal" for many people, Meat Loaf is surprisingly hard to get right.
About half I've eaten from different people fall into "Average/Meh!" -Not bad but not all that good either. The rest fall into either very, very good, or very, very bad.
Somepony who's never tasted meat before and cannot taste test various steps in the process, and has an affinity for salt.. I can see where that would go wrong. Sounds like more crushed saltine crackers than normal too...