Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Hey! The only people who don't think underhanded schemes are hard work are those who never hatched them! That aside, there are only two things to bring up about this chapter. 1, when Oz said "A little?" it sounded rather awkward, and should be changed to either "little?", "little outburst?" or "a little ouburst?" Take your pick. 2, When you said Fleur looked up to Celestia and her brother, the wording of it gave the impression that she looked up to Celestia and Celestia's brother, not her own, so saying Fancy's name would make it much clearer.
Awesome chapter up
Awesome chap brah! Want moar!!
Please..?
Since you published it then unpublished it, anyone who has email notifications wont get it again, like I didnt. It also doesnt show up in my unread chapters page unless I manually navigated to it.
Honestly, I am not much of a fan of Oprah and Ellen. What they do is great, sure, but their talkshows kinda suck
Oh goddess, I guess I did went a little overboard last night huh | I did go a little overboard last night huh
help of his brother | her brother
Aside from that a fantastic read!
Nice chapter.
4833158 I did not know that. I'll have to remember that for next time then. Thanks.
4832950 Sometimes yeah.
Who is Opra and Ellen? I never heard of those 2
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Well if you live outside of the United States of America, it is understandable why you might not have heard of them. They are two VERY famous talk show hosts here in America. Oprah is so popular, that any book she recommends on her show usually becomes a best seller immediately. She even has her own TV channel. Ellen is famous in somewhat the same way, although she is much more comedic. She is also an out and about lesbian, and her ratings haven't suffered much for it thankfully.
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ahhh! so 2 celebrities that manage to survive fame without become corrupted? and you got it I'm not from USA
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Well kind of yeah. Oprah does advertise products and stuff on her show, but she tends to tackle issues and stories that others dont. Stuff like helping drug addicts and showing their story to the audience. It makes for good ratings, but she genuinely seems like she enjoys helping people.
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That its good and I think I know Ellen isn't she the psychologist on 2 and a half men?
4834410 Nope. You're thinking of Jane Lynch. Ellen Degeneres is not only a talk show host, but she also hosted the Oscars one year if you watch that kind of thing. Oh! And I believe she also voiced Dory from Finding Nemo as well.
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oh! she is the one with the converse shoes short blond hair, and a brought pizza for everyone on the Emmies?
Ellen is the Lesbian and Oprah is the BEEES! meme.
4834911 She does have the short blonde hair, but I'm not sure about the converse and pizza thing. Here's what she looks like.
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she is…and she DID, did you saw the last emmie awards? she totally brought pizza for everyone
4835472 You wear the second monocle over the other eye, according to the meme.
As for the music, I've recognized one of them while looking it up that seemed to fit Fleur's case (especially the title). I Tchaikofski's one of my favorite composers, but I didn't know he made that piece. The second one's really new to me.
I like classical music, I just don't listen to it very often, or know many artists besides Mozart, Beethoven, and Tchaikofsky,
4835530 I don't watch award shows very much, but that sounds awesome. Totally something Ellen would do, and man, the restaurants must have had a field day that night.
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It was pizza and everyone pay for it I'm not kidding Ellen pass around asking for the money and with that they pay for the pizzas
4835616 Very nice.
Gudchapter. Waiting for more. ;)
I give nothing but love for this chapter keep it up and there will be more love were that came from
This is the güd güd
Good honest story of friendship within characters that are usually catagorized as clop-worthy...
You've done what a lot of authors hope to do
Keep up the good work
I am sensing a pattern here... a patern of the human OC always being right about everything and aways saying the right thing. And everypony loves him and trusts him immediately of course. What do we call that... hmmmm... so hard to figure out... Oh yeah, he seems a bit Garry Stuish!
Why didnt you mentiom Bono? He helps pwople too
Why didnt you mentiom Bono? He helps pwople too
Life is funny like that when friendships get as good as theirs. Now I think that Cracked Article is right, the only true way to get so successful in life is to always be kind and respectful to everyone you meet and maybe someday that person will probably help you in ways you can never imagine.
My review for ch 9, take it or leave it.
You need to stop being so preachy with Oz, its grating and no one actually talks like that. People don't go on a disertation on class issues and rich v poor if they are explaining why they feel guilty, they say they feel guilty, give a short reason why, and only if someone else wants to open up a dialog do they talk major issues.
Another thing, don't use extreme discriptive words for every day or just meh occurances. You arnt Speachless when you are asked a question you didn't expect, you're contimplative. You don't cry when you learn someone in generous, you look at them in a better light and think that's nice of them.
I swear, sometimes trying to read those infodumps Oz is so fond of expressing himself with is like trying to swallow a watermellon. It just does not fit through so i skip.
Oprah Winfrey may donate a lot of her money to cherities , but she has done enough bad that I have very little respect for her. Oh that bad I am talking about was the race-baiting during the Zimmerman case for one. Ellen Degeneres on the other hand so far as I know hasn't. Just so you know I loath bigotry in all its forms so that's why I have little respect for Oprah Winfrey
This suddenly came to mind when the spree started...
Speaking of generous people, what about Bill 'Give a couple billion here and there for every charity!' Gates?
Why does everyone forgot bill gates? The dude is a walking charity.
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Or Pewdiepie
ROBOTS IN DISGUISE!!!
Have you forgotten the world's biggest donator?
'Bill Gates donates $10 Billion to vaccine research'
I like the message that you're conveying, but you missed the best of them.
Also those little info dumps of Ozzy's are starting to get annoying. No normal person would speak for that long when they're in a conversation with someone. Just sayin'.
sounds like something that this guy would come up with.
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Even though this comment is over 3 years late, there's also the shit Oprah pulled in 2016 shilling for Hillary like most of the major celebrities were doing.
Is this story ever going to get updated i dont mean to sound pushy but im loving this and hope for more
Immediately killed my mood for the chapter as soon as the whole “Oh god she’s going to make me carry bags!” was being played at all.
Honestly I’ve told women to carry their own bags. They weren’t happy, but the trick is to not give a shit.
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It is an overplayed stereotype, yes. However the kind thing to do is carry a bag or two, instead of acting like a dick.
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Stop degrading women, just because women have less muscle mass than men doesn't mean that you should discriminate against their autonomy for it.