Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Woo! New chapter! And a damn hot one, at that!
So. Ozzy has plans for the trial, eh? Are we talking "Dear Princess Celestia" material or more Double Jeopardy? Or will he just go full Chronicles of Riddick on her? He could introduce the "you keep what you kill" system to Equestria.
Well, except for the changelings. They already operate on that system.
Ozzy... you lucky son of a gun.
Gotta say, I didn't expected Ozzy to meet another of Fleur's friends or that he'd end up in a foursome. That was quite the hot scene you just wrote. Hope to see more of Silk/Shimmy.
Ozzy is such a lucky bastard.
Now you have me wondering is Shimmer may become something more than a passing acquaintance, either a friend or more. Perhaps in this sequel?
She seemed like a nice enough mare.
When 'Mistress Silk' was coming over, I was like "she's gonna be some weird chick who's a massive dominatrix this is gonna all be fetish shit soon, fuck."
But then Shimmy turned up, and I was just like
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Great chapter, dude.
He was worried about a threesome, and yet he was able to bring three mares to satisfaction. I believe we'd call him a natural
AWESOME chapter! That foursome with with Shimmy was really hot I hope they do it with her again. If not in this story, than hopefully a bonus chapter with Shimmy, Ozzy, Fleur, and Shining.
Hell...it's about time...
It was worth the wait...
I just caught up 30 chapters in 7 hours... my eyes hurt.... Also, curse ozzy for having the same birthday as me.
Woow, this chapter was great only 'cause of the clop, and yes, the clop made up for the wait.. barely.
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Answering for Lupus: you misunderstand, Ozzy was worried about doing well in a threesome, but his fears were unfounded 'cause he excelled in the forsome.
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What 6327371 said.
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Let me try to explain. Ozzy felt fine one on one....
With flier and shining both (threesome) he was worried he would just be able to focus on one, and leave the other unsatisfied.
BUT shiny, flier, AND shimmer, (foursome) he excelled in satisfying all three, so his worries were unfounded.
One on one- fine
Threesome- was scared of results.
Foursome- excelled, so threesome fears are gone.
Understand?
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Do you two think I made it more complicated or is it easier to understand? cause I feel the breaks make it easier, but.....my wording may be complicated....
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That's exactly what I said but with more words.
6328865 That's exactly what I meant originally. I suppose that it was my wording that confused you
This is it. The Trial is comming. The time has come.
The Sex scene Was AWESOME!!!
With stories like these. It makes me wish to get out of This planet and go to Equestria and live a happy life with a beautiful marefriend or marefriends like Shining and Fleur.
yep this is a hot chapter. and well worth the wait as this chapter is really super good.
Harts Fire
PS time for a cold shower.
Sequel? I was worried that the story was going to end soon, and you've already got plans for a sequel?! RIGHT ON!
Now I await for it to be revealed that Shimmy has a sister named Shake. But damn, Shimmy's really affectionate isn't she? Kind of makes me wonder if perhaps she won't end up joining the herd? Either that, or she can be extremely personable, even while adhering to her standard of professionalism. Either way could present story opportunities. Personally, I want to see the spell fail and have at least Fleur get pregnant. I'd like for both Fleur and Shining to get pregnant, but until something is done about Shining's infertility, then it'll just remain a pipe dream. Though it would be interesting to see how the fashion and the businesses that Fleur works with might react upon learning that she's now pregnant.
never really liked the character
6337161 seems legit
i hope he ready soon?
Thanks. I think I'll start out my story with a dream sequence of how the main character got to equestria followed by getting the crap scared out of him. Also how do I tag names like you did mine? Still trying to find my way around with this.
6341592 The two arrows on the top right of people's comments allows you to tag people and automatically scroll you down to the message box. Hold down the shift key and you can tag more than one user with each arrow of theirs you click.
This is the first time I felt the characterization was off for this story. Why would Ozzy willing have sex with someone he just met? Even with Fleurs and Shinings approval, I don't get why he would do that. He was so set on about being sure (able) to please the other two while being passionate with them, I can't wrap my mind around him willingly adding another person to the mix. Even more so with someone who may as well be a stranger. He knows her name a tad bit of her past. And before anyone says anything, oral is sex too. Ya put your dick in them, it's typically sex.
Unless I'm mistaken, he's had sex twice before this. He was even scared to do both of the girls at the same time. Everything before this chapter made me believe that Ozzy was apprehensive about sex and it was something entirely new to him. Why is he suddenly banging three women? Where in his previous character would he be okay with that?
I still like the story, and will continue to read, but this just seemed like a low point in it. Hopefully future chapters will be of their usual quality.
Brony on!
An excellent chapter. It's odd with this story. I could do without the clop, but mostly because I think it stands very well on its own without it. The clop is just a bonus in its own way.
6354452 no there is no problem with a women helping a man but omg if your gonna step up to the plat to defend a women i hope that you at least fight as well as the women and before this night he acts like a bitch as well no backbone
Holy crap! Ozzy goes from being a virgin to having sex with 2 different mares a day apart to having a four way. that is impressive. I only have 4 words "YOU LUCKY BUGGER YOU."
6342387 I do agree that this is a little off for Ozzy. But let's assume he got hit with the aphrodisiac when he and shinning had there make out session.
Phew, that was pretty interesting. That was the first time I've read with a story with a foursome happening at the same time. Though I hope the three can keep the spell in check and if they're unsure if it ends sooner rather than later then I think doing it three days before the second week ends could help but I think it's for the best that they trust their best friend with this and just wait for two weeks. Though I think the best way to check things for Ozzy to jerk off during the last few days of the spell to see if it's still the same color before it wears off.
Anyway, the trial part is something I completely forgot and I'm betting that this will be pretty hard if Mascara is fighting back and I guess since he's testifying against her, I hope Ozzy doesn't need to go beyond that and just let his phone card and friends do most of the work. If not then I guess he'll have to be a Dangan Ronpa Protagonist to nail her or something. ^^;
SERIOUSLY! @.@ I finally make it to the most recent chapter! ARGH! I hate it when that happens! I want to binge read more!
So when I first found this story some time in 2014 I believe, I stopped reading at chapter 5. HaVing come across the story again, I had forgotten why I had abandoned it. It took your little rant about why you don't use Facebook to remind me. So this time around I say screw it, let's trudge along and see what happens anyways. Speed up to chapter ten. I tolerated your Facebook rant and even your mIsguided adoration of Oprah, but it's that little blurb about Hummers that has set me off for some reason. So here's some advice. Don't put your personal opinions in stories. It rips the reader from a natural progression in the story so you can give us some unnecessary insight into your real life beliefs.
here's some examples of what you should have written:
"I never got into Facebook"
"I admire philanthropy"
"It's a big carriage"
not necessarily the best literary work but still better at conveying the final goal of your story
I skipped to chapter 38 to see if you had kept on doing this , and no nothing was spoiled, the story literally progressed exactly as I predicted; I didn't see anything so I hope your realized what you were doing, as reading the comments of the few chapters I've read ask shared similar complaints. Let's see how it goes between 10 and there.
6393741 Umm... I appreciate you giving this fic another chance, but I'm not sure what exactly you're trying to convey in your comment. It's not the content, it's just the interpretation, or "voice" behind it. Part of me thinks what you're saying is critical, but helpful, but another part thinks there's some kind of sarcasm behind it.
Please excuse me if I had somehow interpreted it wrong from both guesses and you meant completely something else, but in the future, if you could try not to make any future comments seem hateful or bashing, and perhaps add some advice or feedback on how I could really improve (as I'm always open to read others' opinions to learn and better myself), that would be appreciated. I'm not exactly good at reading between the lines and interpreting others' emotions and feelings sometimes, so I hope I don't sound like I'm asking too much.
Thank you for understanding, and I hope your second read through will be better than when I started this fic.
6408257 i figured that was the case but im just so used to reading it in an accent i do it unintentionally
Been rereading this story again. Such an awesome story.
Literally missed three words, and had no fucking clue what the fuck was going on. My mind is full of wat.
6505723 i think i get what you mean, thanks
Why am i suddenly finding myself almost demanding for Shimmy to be added to the herd?
6588911 precisely
So any updates soon? Been a while now.
I only came to this recently (after having kept it in the dungeon of my Read-Later list) and I have found it enjoyable to read. I am rather curious to see what you do next with this.
6617737 Ah, understandable. I also finished school recently though most of it was for a more practical school than a college based education. Good luck with school!
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This is so well written I can't stop Smiling. Best luck with your studying D.
So good just have to re-read one...more...time
Shimmer Dress seems an interesting character I hope you bring her back.
I would have found it funny if the spell had the opposite effect on humans and made ozzy cum so much that fleur and shiny be inflated by Ozzy's cum
RIP