Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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A couple incorrect words in the latter half of the chapter, but otherwise nothing worth pointing out, gramatically or literarically (that's a word, as of now).
Oh.. god... the laughs.. THE LAUGHS AT THE SECOND MONOCLE! Dear LORD i was in tears. You have been keeping me so entertained good sir! I'm thoroughly enjoying this story thus far!
I really like the way this story updates so quickly. I'm intrigued by the second monocle incident and I found the dancing scenes to be funny because of how awkward Oz felt about Fleur and Shining, especially the later.
4817053 I'm a fast typer. I try to write and edit at a reasonable pace to not keep the readers waiting.
Loved it. Id like to see a Fluer/Shining herd. But this is a Fluer story so you do what you want.
I was sitting here enjoying some Nirvana, when suddenly music links. Nirvana to Classical music is a large leap. Damn you.
4817196 What can I say? I like classical music from time to time.
I feel so bad for him, he's got no idea what he's getting into.
Hmm, I'm kind of curious where you're going with this story. It feels like you have a setup to go three possible ways: Oz and Fleur, Oz and Shiny, or the polyamory route of Oz and Fleur and Shiny.
Hmm, I'm kind of curious where you're going with this story. It feels like you have a setup to go three possible ways: Oz and Fleur, Oz and Shiny, or the polyamory route of Oz and Fleur and Shiny.
Hell yeah, this is awesome! Loving the daily struggles and interactions. I honestly wouldn't care if you never write a clop chapter.
I have to agree with Sir Clonetrooper this is a fantastic story indeed.
.... Bioshock, anyone?.....
Mr. Bubbles, the BOUNCER big daddy.
WOO! INTENTIONAL/UNINTENTIONAL REFERENCE! BE AFRAID!
4817217 I do too. But I was in a Nirvana mood. You screwed me over. It was like excellent guitar and drum work, classical, epic guitar and drum riffs, classical.
I think shining was trying to say 'I will be your best friend and will help you get tail' yeah that its, that its probably what Oz will keep saying on his head
Ya I like these time stamps better. Good stuff, keep it up.
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4817660 Okay, that made me chuckle.
Is it weird that I was listening to "Hooked On A Feeling" by Blue Swede while reading this?
Also call it mares were going to flirt with him but I don't get why did she get so scare of Fleuor?
P.S: Does anyone else wonder how Fancy and Fleur parents look like? or why would they miss their own son party? both of them are more than fine so those must be the parents of the century, so I'm still wonder, where are they?
4817698 1) You never mess with a celebrity unless you want to be a social outcast. 2) I don't know about their parents. Heck, when I made up the story, I came up with the headcanon that Fancy and Fleur were siblings since their relationship was never clarified in the show.
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Yeah and so far Fleur haven't spoke a word she was only there…posing, never leaving Fancy side, it was kind of weird
And yet she became one of the more beloved female cast on the fan base
Oh possibilities, maybe at some point he could meet their parents, and you can go nuts with the idea of how they look and what they do for the living
Boy it will be just hilarious if Fleurs looks come more from her father
4817757 Actually, Fleur only had one line from "Sweet and Elite"
And man what a voice that was.
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Oh my mistake…hey wait a minute I heard that voice before…she is Cheerlie! they had the same voice!
THERE its is! that its perfect! why don't make Cheerlie their mom? IT will be perfect
The stallion's name is Bubbles, wears shades, acts like a tough guy but really he is nice, and all that he needs is to have tattoos on his knuckles that spells out cobra.
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Lillo and Stitch!
Ahh, Piotr Ilich Tchaikovsky and Johann Strauss II...
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You, sir, have a very good taste in music.
4817805 You got that right and we need to have this guy as a cameo somehow
4817844 A good waltz deserves good waltz music.
4817777 ... There's like NO resemblance besides the voice between the girls.
I have a sneaking suspicion that this entire chapter revolved around your fascination with monocles.
4817968 Oh please, it's not just that... There's also the chest pressing in the waltz.
Yes! You put in the second monocle joke!
4818027 Yes, and now that I have fulfilled your request, I'd like you to take out this hell spawn here.
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That bitch's been living for too long.
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It is done.
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For the love of everything I hope this ends up as a harem with Fleur and Shiny. I'd hate to see one being chosen over the other.
spear them herd herd herd
... And now I can't stop picturing Fancy having a 'Nam flashback.
Impeccable taste in symphonies I must say, good choice!
I am seriously seeing oz x shining in this, more than fleur
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And the mane, its kind of similar only invert, besides there are girls that get features from their dad, so she could had earn the voice and mane from Cheerlie and the fur from her had
4819122 But how do we know if she was ever married? I mean ponies usually call her Miss Cheerilee for one reason or another.
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I never really understand that tittle the miss imply she was marry at some point?
and as for your question we don't you can make it up, thanks to the comics (even though I know they are not cannon) we know that Cheerlie lived and study in Canterlot, and because of the photo we know she was a 'fashion' pony in that they judging for how she dress…
oh! another idea, maybe Cheerlie is not exactly their mom but their aunt! and while their parents where busy she took care of Fleur and Fancy and teach them how to appreciate the simple things, like Fancy say at the end of his episode, someone must had teach them about treating others with kindness, and Cheerlie might had being the one that did it
4819214 ... Interesting concept, but then that would mean we would have to lump Shining Armor and Cadance in the same loop, and THEY don't even look that old. I don't know, I would think Cheerilee would be slightly older than Fleur, but not so much to be their aunt or mother. Heck, Cheerilee could be Fleur's and Fancy's senpai in high school for all we know.
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Oh that could work too…I can picture it those 2 scare because its their first day, Cheerlie being there for them, making them relax, teaching them to be nice with other, like some kind of…adoptive cool big sister
All this polygamy and monogamy talk got me thinking. In my opinion, Ozz will have a crush on Fluer, meanwhile, Shining will have a crush on Ozz. The way I see it, either Shining will get her heart broken, or Ozz will become a very lucky guy.
The new cover is great but I think the tail is to far to the left? Maybe just a smidge to the right should do Or it's just my eyes can't see
4819586 Yeah, I probably should have added some shading to make it look clearer, but she's actually twisting from behind. I tried to get the tail as much in line with the spine as possible, but, some things aren't perfect.
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You should really try Google Docs.