Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Oh my god...
Shining..You are my kinda mare..What say we talk about our vengeance plans over at a nice place downtown..
Puff Tie? By coincidence we met up with Mr. Brushstroke at Vogue. He was positively raving about your designs. Let me tell you all about it in his own words...
All aboard the tail tugging train *CHOO CHOO*, one ticket to awkward sexual moans for Shining Star.
Vengeance! Also... ulterior motives from the Pres who seems to be focusing and Oz and Fleur yet ignoring Shining.
Made my day seeing that you updated. More please.
So Ms. Mascara has a craving for humans. And I can't help but wonder what would happen if Fleur walked in on Shinning when Oz is delivering her punishment.
Dear Shining,
I must say your soon to be vegence will be quite delicous. However I wish to add a opinion, to truly make him suffer, you must crush everything that he once held so high, and soon make him a laughing stock in the art world so that whenever he try to make art, he will remember the laughters and soon hid away like the coward he is.
From, A devious Meddler
P.S. Bow chicka wow wow to the you know what!
Still waiting on that threesome.
Moving on, fantastic chapter as always and am looking forward to the next one. Hopefully Oz finally realizes what pulling on Shining's tail does to her, although judging from the author's note that does happen. Maybe Shining would want to return the favor in some manner? I don't know, but still keep up the good work
DMFA! You read DMFA!
Shining is about to take the kid gloves off on that douchebag Puff Tie... I can't wait!
Mascara had a thing for Oz isn't she? I can picture her having a thing for heroes, oh I'm more intrigue in how that will develop
Glad to see that Puff Tie is about to get what's coming to him. Fleur reminiscing about her dates with Shining was kind of hot and seeing Shining have an actual evil laugh made me smile. I hope the next chapter comes soon, both for the clop and to see Shining deliver justice to Puff Tie.
4956124 Very nice, that's correct! Just for that, you get a fresh baked cookie.
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4956210 Yay! Cookie!
This won't end well for Shining if you're the one that's planning for him. I'm sure Brushstroke really wanted him to try harder in his career and I bet after a very scathing riff, he'll end with some tips and tricks to him get better next time at the end of the letter. But I'm also guessing that this could Shining's test of character to see if she can be very professional when giving him this letter.
Come, not came.
4956351 Fixed. Thank you.
Oo
Clop - kill'em!
Oo clop - kill'em!
Good....good....let the vengeance flow through you, Shining. I LOVE this chapter and the story itself is captivating! I love the characters you have developed.
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4956479 What is that? Some kind of chant?
Ok, my brain has been thinking about this story and has realized that this story has one of two ways of going now. Either Shining and Fleur change their minds, along with Ozzy about being in a herd or Ozzy is going to end up with Fleur in the end. The reason I put it like that is that it would be weird for Ozzy to end up with Shining and Fleur get the cold shoulder in the end when the story is titled The Model's Secretary, the cover picture is of Fleur, and the first person Ozzy runs into and saves is Fleur. The setup is for him to at least end up with Fleur or something will really feel off about this story. Although I suspect that there will be hi-jinx along the way and some type of relationship between Ozzy and Shining but in the end, Shining will lose the method of choosing who gets a stallion they both want, Shining finds another stallion, or they somehow both end up with Ozzy. This chapter and the priors makes any herd ending really hard to justify as multiple characters have pointed out their interest in monogamy and both Fleur and Shining refuse to share a stallion.
4956514 just urban gibberish
Don't worry about it XD
Please tell me that we can read Shining's justice?
It would seem that Ms. Mascara has an eye (hyukhyukhyuk) for human flesh.
Woohoo! (Everything)
Ok I need prepare myself with a hot meal and a 6 pack so I read on how Shining goes off on Puff Tie.
I'll admit I originally started reading this for the clop but to be honest now Im perfectly happy just seeing a new chapter.
A nother greate chapter !
Oh boy..... is that Puff gona have a bad day !
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Judging from the image being broken, I think the cookie was eaten by a Mow.
Also, I think I just got a boner over Shining Plotting her Revenge.
4956759 Oo - Kill'em
Oo - Kill'em
Oo
Karma bites hard, does she not? Better get a broom, gonna have to clean up a shattered jerkass on Isle 4.
someone or somePONY has a human fetish
Making some pop corn for the next chapter.
4957343 Actually, that product is on Isle 7. Along with the Disposable Minions and One Dimensional Characters.
I didn’t have before until then | This just sits kind of weird when I read it, I think you might have been able to get away with using just before or until, don't think you needed both.
Another fantastic chapter, looking forward to Puff Tie having his hopes and dreams crushed under the cruel heel of reality!
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Is it just me or does anyone else fell as if poor Oz is gonna be in a shoot?
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Seems that way don't it. Oh dear lord, what will happen when Fleur and Shining catch on?
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Isn't it obvious? they will be trill that Oz is trying to fight over his fear of woman's and will bombarding him with tips for the first date
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Except both Shinning and Fleur want to be with Ozzy. And add to that fact that both girls are basically getting used so Mascara can have a fling with their friend. This is going to end in pain and tears. Especially if Mascara tries to blackmail Ozzy into sleeping with her so Fleur can get the job.
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Dear Ledgion.
My goodness, your cleverness is quite impressive. I eagerly await to see if your prediction holds true.
Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.
Nice!!! I'm really looking forward to more!!
Update! Yay! I was worried...... I look forward to your updates :)
I'm looking forward to what will happen to Puff Tie.
This chapter has so many possibilities and outcomes.
Mascara could of called in Fleur for an interview only because she wanted to meet a human. Maybe she has plans to have a human model, but wanted to have a way to indiscriminately check him over without expressing her opinion on the matter. If she sees potential she can easily say Fleur is hired only if he agrees to work as a model. She can also play the sex/fling with them as well. Fleur would only be hired if he agrees to see Mascara on an intimate basis. There are quite a few of other possibilities with this as well. Even if Mascara is serious with any of these situations playing out or not, she will witness first hand the characters' moral compass issues being expressed. Sort of like a personality test.
Same situation applies to Palette Brushstroke and his supposed outburst. He could easily be setting up a situation where he can see the characters' reaction to the situation and how they handle the task that Shining agreed to do for him.
Quite a brilliant set of tests for Mascara and Brushstroke to put together for the main characters to solve. If they actually were tests that is. But then again, they could just be simple day to day occurrences. I don't think they are just random occurrences though. You just don't just become Equestria's top fashion company without being smart about things. Nor do you become Chief Designer, Vice President and/or President/CEO without some good ability to get and hold those positions.
But then, these are my observations and guesses and hold no true merit to what Dudeler has in store for their story. I can only wait and see what the next chapter reveals for us to read.
I am really enjoying this story. Please keep up the great work Dudeler. Don't let anyone keep you from writing what you like/love doing.
4975775 I kind of teared up while writing it myself to be honest. Sometimes it's tough for me to get characters I created through situations like that.
Shining just won the Karma Lotto, and Puff... did not...
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