Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy!
Moar! We need moar!
Great chapter :)
Things are warming up!
Awesome chapter! I'm getting jealous of Ozzy though. Good lord it sounds like she has a nice ass!
Saw the update this afternoon and was excited. This is an awesome story. Well paced and heart felt.
This was all I could hear as Shining remarked about Ozzy groping her ass.
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Nice chapter. This kind of thing helps the characters have more definition and substance. Good work.
They're having lunch at midnight?!
Might want to change that to a.m.
Poor Ozzy he doesn't know he's being stalked by hungry predators.
5198121 Goddammit that's another big detail that none of us noticed Fixed.
I love how you keep looping details to events earlier in the story. It makes a re-read well worth it.
Two Sexy Anthro Pony's. One Timid Human
Yep. He's screwed, but in a good way.
5198121 Why not sounds like fun
5198255 I don't think I could have put it any better.
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5198153 Happens to anyone. No biggie.
5198257 As somebody who used to work graveyard shifts, lunch at midnight isn't a foreign concept to me.
Oh Shining, that's just assuming he's not an oblivious idiot. I forsee much frustration in their future
Shining is such an adorable mare when she's with Oz.
I love how Shiny being more honest with Ozzy. And by the detail of her ass and now I want tap that. keep it up and wish you luck on midterm
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That butchering of the English language made me want to stab something.
5200261 Fleur's character on this story is somewhat like that of the "just turned 21 and now it's happy party time" to me. It's cute and quite predictable. That being said, it was obvious text lingo like that would come from her.
Awesome chapter!
Can't wait till it gets to actual clop parts
Oh boy, this is going to be a long ride. I can already FELL the frustration in Shiny and Fleur's faces when Ozzy is not falling up to their flirting.
love the chap can't wait for the next
5198346 you and me both
Dont get wrong what im going to say:
Oz pisses me off. A lot.
I love this fic, but i hate the protagonist. He is so kind, friendly, gentle. Maybe is my Cynical view in life speaking, but no one should be able to be like that after all the shit he have been through.
He is like a Gary Stu...kinda.
PS: Sorry for my shitty grammar, im not a native speaker. And i repeat: I still love this fic.
“Alright, see ya, Shining,” Ozzy bid before he grabbed his sack
wait what
5203063 The sack he brought along to carry his change of clothes and bathroom essentials for the night?
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I know what you mean. The thing is, despite what some people might say, normal people cannot form polygamous relationships without comparing/favoring each other. Even if the relationship was completely consensual and all, it would very quickly devolve into a contest and/or a purely sexual thing. That is why Ozzy is such an nice air headed guy - he has to be for relationship to be plausible. And if the 3-way relationship is going to continue, he has to remain that way. You'll also notice just how ridiculously open and honest their conversations are; not that this is a bad thing, but normal people would not become this friendly with each other this quickly. Again, this is necessary for the story, to give more plausibility to their rather unrealistic relationship dynamics.
Like you said though, it is still a pretty good story, better than most.
5202529 There are people who get crap dumped on them, yet come out of the other side good people.
Not to mention that can also be used to describe Lero of Xenophilia fame.
Famous last words. Also loved the texting back and forth. (That was friggin hilarious )
5202529 5203306 Or it could be that because of his past making him a humble person and the 'magic of friendship' that flows through Equestria like it's a river That in turn he's becoming a much nicer person than he should be. I mean there's been several moments where he's second guessed himself and his emotions and says the following line 'What's getting into me?' to which I quote from a MLP Parody thing I saw once upon a blue moon ago.
'That's The Magic of Friendship BIYATCH!'
Hmm...
The evening will start off well enough. Dinner, a movie -- your standard fare. Things will take a sharp turn, however, when Ozzy gets up to relieve himself and returns to find Fleur decked out in black latex with a whip in her hands, a ball gag at her hooves and a devilish glint in her eyes. Understandably enough, Ozzy will do what most of us probably would in his position. That is to say that he'll shriek like a banshee and run for all he's worth. Fleeing the room, he'll slam & lock the door behind him and breathe a sigh of relief... only to then notice Fancy in front him wearing nothing but a pair of leather chaps and a matching vest, smacking a riding crop against his palm and wearing a grin to chill the soul. As Ozzy's poor mind begins to shut down, the click of a key turning & creak of a door opening will be audible behind him.
And then the meteor hits.
I need more I don't know how I can live with out this story
5204491 DAFUQ?
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What? He asked.
5204491 ME GUSTA
And then they all fucked. The end.
5216903 FIIIIIIIIISH!
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5215993 That's it, that's the story guys! Bye! Have a great time!
5215993 DUDE, spoilers!
Uh, Shiny? I don't think that's a good idea.
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You know sleep groping is actually a thing.