Glad to see you're back, Dudeler. Kudos on the early graduation and the internship, and the new chapter. However, I do think it bares mentioning that, while I did enjoy the chapter, I found it rather lackluster, as nothing really happened as far as progression, and it reads rather "flat".

I really hope it works, the infertility thing I mean, hate to see it's a dud.

All right an update. Good luck to both you and Ozzy.

Patient and understanding? Us? I try, but...

Also, GL on the internship.

nice chapter as always looking forward for more

stayclassy

I still think Solar is putting on a ruse to get near Fleur when she's in heat and knock her up.

Things are getting excited. Hope everything turns out alright.

after reading all the posts on this chapter I agree with all but one of them.

I still think Solar is putting on a ruse to get near Fleur when she's in heat and knock her up. Lobo Argost not going to happen solar has not ben near the girls in several years there is no way he would know when they are cycling heat.

Dudeler sir I send you the best wishes as I know how rough life is.
brohoof at you Dudeler

now for this chapter Shiny has come a long way with the help of Fleur and Ozzy she is much more forgiving of her self and every one around her.
Ozzy did right in coming clean about talking with Solar and every thing they talked about.
Fleur now you need to come clean to Ozzy about you having the crush on Lens it is not going to bother Ozzy he knows but it is going to eat you up if you don't tell him.
now as to the infertility spell a spell like this should be well known un less the princess are keeping it under rapes after all in Equestria it is 5 to 1 mars and stallions a spell like this would literary doom Equestria to extinction if it was abused. that is just my POV. do I trust the spall 70% at best. but I would like to see Fleur do some modeling wile pregnant but then I have razed several horses and I think they just look so happy when pregnant they literally glow that is the best way to describe it.

Harts Fire

“So it can differentiate whether a ring for example is made of gold or just painted such a color?”

So no going cheap on the jewelry!

Nice chapter.

Glad to see this updated again. Awesome chapter. Good luck on your internship.

I'm about to freak out, 'cause I can't shake the feeling that Puff and/or Solar are going to do something terrible to Ozzy in an act of vengeance after Solar 'tried reasoning with him' or something psychotic like that. I can't handle it!

Congrats, BTW. I just got out of Highschool, and I know how all that ceremony can get in the way. Good luck in your internship. Don't let it take too much of your time...

'Cause I have to see moar!

I love your stories as always and I cannot wait to see how things play out, but I do want to say something to this story. (This is all my personal opinion and just something I want to say)

The main thing is this: Ozzy should not forgive his brother and Fleur should not forgive Solar. I believe I already explained why Ozzy should not forgive his brother in a previous chapter but after reading Fleur and Shinings reaction, they should never EVER forgive that bastard.

Why? Cause being drunk does not give people "magical new ideas", like randomly wanting to rob a bank or slap a kitten. Those kinds of things are already inside you but your morality keeps you from doing it. Alcohol lowers and sometimes destroys our inhibitions and brings out those things.

In Solars case, he has always been a naturally violent person. For him to stab them, that means he already had that violent tendency inside him. Getting drunk simply allowed him to do so and not feel bad about it at the time. Like I said, alcohol is not a magic drug that gives you new and random ideas and makes you act different, you allow it to change you since you "feel good" and so if someone does something stupid, they are stupid. No "I am a nice person, but I am a mean drunk" BS. If you are a mean drunk, than you are a mean person underneath your social persona.

BAH. Sorry to say something so heavy, but this drunk thought process of mine has been bugging me for a while and it feels good to write about it (and have it be somewhat relevant) then when I read this new chapter, I just had the urge and here we are. Keep up the good work and I will see you in the next chapter!

Something strange is gonna happen. I feel it.

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Me as well, it would certainly answer the question of whether a man can knock a mare up, or vice versa where a woman can get knocked up by a stallion. But, everything is still just sketchy to me...I love how it was pictured as Shining Star recalled when she finally moved on from Puff Tie, and I enjoyed that she didn't beat around the bush with it, she gave it to him straight, so you can pretty much see the problem with Fleur and Solar. Apparently it looks like Solar is really willing to try to rekindle that relationship with Fleur, Fleur is currently dating Ozzy (as well as Shining).

Also the whole 'infertility spell' from some firm definitely needs to have more info on it. It's good that FancyPants is aware of that firm, so it's more likely that it is legit. I just hope that they do their due diligence, for their sakes. It's no good to find that 4 months later Fleur finds out she's got a Equinoid foal inside her. (I think Equinoid is the proper name of the character Thirty-Thirty from that cartoon Bravestarr, basically a anthro horse man....I have very little info on that, so someone familiar with that can correct me if I'm wrong)

what gonna happen next chapter?

Who else remembers in the description of the FIRST CHAPTER how he said he would only write about 10 chapters? Secondly question: Who else is glad he didn't? :)

6079125 Holy crap, I actually completely forgot about that. And now I might end this story with about 5 times the number of chapters as I predicted before, and I've been working on this for almost a year now. Dang, time has really flown.

6079357 It's alright. This one has turned into my favorite next to TheOnlyOneWhoCared's story Candy. And If you need any help, feel free to ask. Thank you for the amazing story man, and keep on keepin on.

6079357 If you want, this story can never end.

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Yeah…and the author, either forgot to tell us that Oz was already struggling to overcome his fear…or he or she doesn't know exactly how traumas work…witch was confirm after that chapter.

Besides the 'lets share a bed shenanigans' that I still keep my foot down that is stretching things a LOT since its like putting a man that just admit he has arachnophobia in a room CRAWLING with them and ask him to sleep on a giant one (yeah its accurate, he openly told them he avoid woman for fear, and just now is trying to correct it so doing that is just murdering him heart attack) facing fears, I get that need to be head on but it also it needs to be gradual and slow, no 160 per hour and into a wall. Well at least that is how I though, everyone deals with their fears differently.

AND I just give up when he just miss how rape trauma works, for staring those things are not things that you can simple shake off, I had the luck of never facing them but rape is a really, really SERIOUS thing, the victim will be extremely on edge, fearing his attacking might return or another will, maybe even a bit paranoid, or even aggressive if someone press them the wrong way, that is why, it needs to be talk and approach carefully, Fleur didn't wait a day to keep asking him to sleep with her, not to mention planning to made a herd and use provocative outfits! Yeah sure, Oz almost got a traumatic experience and is probably still shaking but that is ok, our boobs in his face that made the problem in the first place will solve it. And Oz just shake it off like someone just stole his wallet…witch it wasn't the case.

So yeah, I just couldn't keep up after that, I bet it was and still is a good for you people, specially if you can overlook those kinds of things but I unfortunately can't, so I wish the author luck with his story and say goodbye now that I say my peace. Sorry if I come up strong dude, is just my opinion and everyone is fair to it

6096312 I appreciate your opinion on the story, and I understand your reasoning for not continuing. Frankly, I have trouble understanding human interactions, emotions, and traumas, and believe me, the first draft I had before publishing the rape chapter showed how much I didn't had his reaction in mind. I was glad my team pointed it out to me, but it seems I still have a ways to go to really comprehend human behavior. I'll be sure to keep this in mind for the future, but thanks again for your input.

6096258 lol MILF alert......wait is she a mom.....
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No problem dude, and good luck later own, just an little advices, you can never go wrong with shyness and recoll when something bad happen for 1 or 2 chapter after something bad happen and outgoing, happy and…well like you normally describe him, when something good happen.

And is no problem, is mostly the transition what is difficult to got it right, believe me, when I write something I had to erase and re write it until I get it done

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I'm glad my spoiler post could help in some way.

Okay now that I finally read the chapter, I'm glad that Ozzy went on and told Shiny and Fleur about his meeting with Solar. Though it looks like they may be a hard decision to forgive or not to forgive because they have to live with that choice forever and that also depends on those two present themselves to the heroes.

However, I guess there's going to be one problem with the trial of Mascara, her attorney, I hope they can still get her within the law, because sometimes bad guys can escape it if certain laws and how they're used aren't brought up in time, especially with how evidence could be changed over the course of the trial.

6204104 No, the joke was that he would lose, regardless.

so long without updates

Update pls

So long since an update...

I feel as if whenever I read a story I LOVE!! They just go and stop updating.

6013157 Well, like what? Sabotage the spell so Ozzy is infertile permanently? I'm wondering if it's during the trial that they'll pop up and cause trouble. Get called on as character witnesses in order to destroy the credibility of the defendant... or something like that.
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