Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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The bonus chapter sounds fine, particularly the beach thing so Fleur and Shining can see more if oz's nipples. Also, it was nice to see Shining and Fleur reveal more of their past and improve their friendship thanks to Toffee.
More back story and side tidbuts would be nice to expand the story.
I bet Oz is going to wake up again with Fleur on one side and Shiny on the other again. They should just get in Fleurs big bed and have a good nights sleep every night.
Well…its interesting, although I'm fearing Ozzy might had a nightmare and push Fleur away, when he feel a woman close to him…hey its traumatic, and this time he is unaware, he could wake up scare very easily and is too soon.
As for the bonus story I was actually asking myself something, I get that he was lonely but he REALLY never had a true friend? not even the neighbored kids? I was wondering how would it be a bonus story with just Oz, that some human friend come to visit him, and make him realized he DID had a friend, and spend some time together.
Or some of the companies he talk about respond and now he need to clear the little mess with them and let them know he has a job now.
Or even one more risky Discord appear to talk with some of the first humans to see if they are fun and enjoy a bit of chaos.
What I'm saying is…Oz other than the mascara incident and the first ep he is ALWAYS with some of the mares, let him had some alone time, what do you think?
Bonus chapter sounds nice and (I can't belive I didn't see it earlier) Bubbles has a cutie mark with a Cobra. Lelo and Stitch reference.
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There should be a twist. Ozzie should find someone else to date, but have her be a gold digger or someone with separation issues (Someone who needs to be with their girlfriend, or boyfriend 100% of the time). Then have Fleur and shinning attempt to get rid of her.
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Holy crap I just got that reference
Odd, my Favorite List didn't update to let me know you updated your story with the new chapter. Very strange, had to look at feed to see what was new. Anyway a nice chapter and I like to see that Fleur and Shining are warming up to the idea of a Herd, though Ozzy is the last one to warm up to that idea considering he's more on a monogamous relationship instead of a polygamous one.
Hopefully that will change, I like to see Oz with Fleur and Shining together.
I like the bonus chapter chapter idea! Go for it! ^_^
Well until next time!
yay for bonus chapters!!
More! Want more of everything!
It would also be nice to see all three attend one of those charity events at some point. Perhaps outside of Canterlot, so they could see how a herd can actually be a good thing.
Come hoping for clop, stay for the D'awwws.
Seriously, those three just need to shag and get it over with.
I hope Toffee and Bubbles are successful in trying for their first foal and I will give them the highest regards when that happens. (bonus chapter!!!).
It really would help improve the karma of their entire group significantly, and it's nice that Shining and Fleur have seemed to not only rekindle that friendship between them, but it looks like it is enhanced, and it is indirectly thanks to Ozzy. Personally I hope that they do actually try to attempt a herd, or at the very least a double-dating situation with the same stallion (the stallion being Ozzy the human), provided that he has recovered and became comfortable being around others, especially mares.
.......Oh Ozzy, you poor poor fool.
I'm happy with more.
Another good chapter ! Keep up the good work !
Regarding the Bonus Chapter of the trio taking a trip to the beach and Bubbles and Toffee's vacation in Manehattan I say goo for it !
The best story's are thous that develop the sidecar's as well. It makes the story fell real.
That nightmare has me thinking ... 3 separate individual's having the same nightmare ?
Perhaps the guard's in the dream were real as well ? ( A possible future event ?) Hmm ... I will keep an eye's on you !
Tell more about that second monocle if its not a problem
I prefer calling it Bitaly.
Please don't let them form a herd. Just don't.
5105111 Let the author do what they want
Edit: Sorry reading that makes me seem like I'm being aggressive. I just don't like it when other people ask an author to write a story in a specific way. If you commissioned a story from an author I can understand it but if you're trying to tell someone how to write their story I get annoyed.
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I guess I came off the wrong way. Off course, he can write his story however he pleases. I just wanted to state my preference for future development.
5105289 That's why I edited mine. I know other people's preferences may not line up with the author's but ya gotta let him do his thing with the story. Some people just don't seem to understand it
5105111 I gotta admit, you're probably the first person I've seen so far who don't want the characters to form a herd in the end.
5105537 Would you? Would you be in a relationship with multiple people at the same time? I know I wouldn't...
Why the hell wasn't I notified of the new chapter? What has Knighty done this time?
Hmm...
Celestia, in her desire to learn more of human culture, has been watching a consider amount of TV. She's taken a particular interest in crime dramas. To this end, she's hired several of the actors from Law & Order to make her court a little more "lively". Unfortunately this led to a less-than-unexpected bit of guard brutality on the part of Christopher Meloni (Stabler) when Mascara choose to shoot her mouth off during questioning. Worse, Luna has recently discovered Ace Attorney and has taken it upon herself to represent Ozzy (to be fair, blue is her color). With Sam Waterston (McCoy) representing Mascara, this promises to be the trail of the age. The darkest secrets of everyone involved will be drug, screaming, into the light. Even Luna's. Even Celestia's. In time the whole affair will lead to its own Law & Order made-for-TV movie titled Law & Order: Law & Order-ception and a spinoff series on the budding new Equestrian TV networks.
Or at least it would have, but then the meteor hits.
Sounds good to me. Any chance to see Fleur and Shining in skimpy outfits -- and more importantly, to see Ozzy seeing Fleur and Shining in skimpy outfits -- is worth pursuing in my book.
Izzy has to show his junk at some point in time. I don't think the girls are willing to wait long anyway. Want to see Ozzy's reaction when he sees his coworker and boss in bikinis (if Shining wears one). Wonder what the comparison between Ozzy's junk and a normal stallion's junk is in this story. Will he be small or will he be oversized and making them drool. That is all. And that is the way the cookie crumbles.
what kind of hi-jinks could happen because of news on his near rape
maybe, JUST maybe Oz should just fuck them right in the pussy?
The model's secretary has a new chapter?
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Sorry to butt in, but yours is an understandable perspective. Many societies value monogamous relationships much more than polygamous ones, and there are a lot of misconceptions about how a poly relationship would work. However, if done right, like many are, they are just as wonderful and fulfilling as a monogamous relationship.
Many people feel uncomfortable with the fact that their partner is with another person emotionally and possibly physically, but trust is what makes a poly relationship work, like any relationship. All 3(or more) people confide and trust that they would tell each other of any feelings of awkwardness, loneliness or any other sorts of relationship problems; and everyone in the group helps the rest through their problems as well, like any good relationship. Trust and the ability to confide in one another is the key to any relationship, monogamous or not.
5106659 get this dude/dudet a cookie, MIND BLOWN
5105706 sorry to butt in, however, quick question, why do you have a problem with polygamy? I mean is it because it "isn't natural?" Sorry, but in reality it is far more natural than monogamy is, humans are social creatures likened to dogs or cats which are polygamous, rather than birds which are monogamous. Or is it some other reason?
I feel that this is something many of your readers (including myself) would enjoy. I say, work on my fine friend! And my your speed and talent, not diminish!
I don't think Oz would be okay with the herd idea yet especially when he gets better. But it seems like a lot of stuff is happening in the next few days that the story probably can't just time skip to the trial now at the moment. Maybe the events in the next chapter will determine how fast the trial they'll get too and especially with how well he should get better. Also, I hope that psychiatrist won't try to push Oz into the relationship with the girls during his appointments. Actually I wonder if most psychiatrists prefer to be recommended that way, as I think most people do not want to go to one unless they've been recommended to see a specific one by a good friend rather than go to one randomly.
A beach trip... That's how you know this shit's 'bout to get real
I say do BOTH!!! Trip to the beach AND Bubbles gettin it on with Toffee! Haha! xD
5107480 why not 2 cookies
YES YES YEEEES
5108234 I'm well aware of the fact that humans were originally polygamous, but personally I'm just a romantic kind of guy, and I don't think I could ever love two people at the same time.
5110435 and you think there could not be romance between three or more people? Sorry to say but it is possible, heck even likely, but that goes on to personal choice
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The only reason I wouldn't like this story to feature a herd is simply, because A: It's rarely well done, and I don't want to see this story do a shift in quality and B: It would be more enjoyable to read the drama of Oz figuring out whom he truly loves etc. t would be more interesting than just saying, "Just go for both". BUT, all of this is just my opinion, and everyone is completely entitled to their own.
5109934 give him/her the whole damn jar i LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5111430 5109934 5107480 I just want to be sure, but are you referring to give the cookies to 5106659 , or me?
5111077 true there would be more drama, but personally I do not like that much drama
5111907 i would say both keep it up this story is fucking awesome i have a awesome story i just quit on it was featured like twice before i stopped and i didn't have the time to fix issues
5111907 you, your story and the idea of branch chapters. (i only mean that if giving a cookie to you is a good thing. if it is i give you the whole jar. if it isn't a good thing i smash that jar.)
Beach sounds like a fun idea, though I'm curious where it would fall in the timeline. Also, yay herds!
Beach. Also I know that Ozzy may view to be mono, I just want to point out a selfish request. Please oh please! Let them be a herd! I don't want them to be force to chose one, and I want them to be all together! Okay Im done with that request, anyway good job of the chapter.
Hmm... I'm torn on the relationship dilemma, I must say.
On the one hand, I have no qualms over them forming a herd.
On the other hand, I A) ship Ozzy and Shining, yet have some trouble seeing him with Fleur for some reason (possibly due to the fact that Shining is more my kind of girl) and B) I recall in an earlier chapter the author specifically saying a herd wouldn't be happening in the end, and the idea that he would go back on that rubs me the wrong way (I could also just be misremembering this.)
In anycase, it's not up to me what happens, so I'll just sit back and enjoy now.
Considering the quality with which you are approaching this story, anything you wish to add is likely to be both accepted and rather encouraged.
In other words, just do it already.
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He does it? Maybe?........Hopefully?....