Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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I'm looking forward to the 'show and tell' later on...
Huh. Mares are really forward. Makes me shudder to think what might happen when Fleur and Shining are in heat.
Awesome chapter as usual. Still waiting for the chapter where he ruts one or both of them silly.
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I'm envisioning a "I'll show you mine if you show me yours" and "can I touch it?" scenario
I enjoyed seeing Oz be uncomfortable with Bubbles and his conversation at the spa with Fleur. I'm really going to enjoy the scene where Oz shows his stuff to Fleur and Shining.
So Ozzy is a believer in manscaping. I can dig it. (no-homo)
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5022981 i can't wait!!!!!!
It's either showing his balls, or finding about about his nightmare...However I'm betting that last scene was about his hair balls and him cutting it, that or something else.
On the next one
Being above the average stallion will certianly give Fleur and Shiny something to talk about later on.
I check my emails everyday waiting for the update notification for this fic.
I find it hard to believe that stallions have small dicks. But whatevs...
Thanks for another good chapter! Such a great way to
procrastinate on homeworkpass the time.you know I've always imagined fleur with a french/prench accent.
Um... Maybe i'm just not social enough, but... Is it really that normal to just agree to show each other your danger zones? That just seemed a little too casual and forward, especially considering Ozzy's inexperience.
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Comparing body size, it can make sense. A horse is big down there, yes, but it's body is much larger. Though I have to agree, that seems a bit far-fetched, too.
5023157 Manscaping?
5023547 Didn't he use his razor to shave his 'body hair'? The ending of the last chapter gave that impression.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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Well I feel like since ponies in this universe share similar physical traits (body frame wise) with humans, stallions' erections can be somewhat the same as human males as well. Plus, it just doesn't make sense that the majority of stallions would walk around public with such large packages in their pants, even if their flaccid state is different compared to human guys'.
Also to something to take note, I may have put down' Ozzy's size bigger than the average stallion's, but that doesn't mean they're smaller than humans in general. There's a good chance he's bigger in an average human's as well. He just hasn't been around enough naked guys or bothered about looking it up to see for himself how he compares with them.
5023553 Oooh, MANscaping, I get it now.
To answer your question, how much I've implied on that here, and what I'm posting in next chapter, I think it should give you enough hints on what he's doing.
5023604 Heh, After all, Fleur did say she wanted to see his penis.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5023609 we all know what he is going to do to relieve stress
yup you all know what happens next...
that's right he's gonna shave.
sshhhaving the pewbs
I can't help but wonder if the girls will end up walking in on Ozzy just as he's finishing up....
As for the size thing, it does make a lot of sense.
Alright, time for some manscaping!
Hmm... ... Rob Schneider shows up to beg Shining to take him back, revealing what is perhaps the most tragic portion of her past. That's when we find out the real reason why Shining and Fleur swore off polygamy. Shining rebuffs him, proclaiming her love for Oz. In a last ditch effort Fleur does the same. Rob Schneider looks at the mares, gives Oz a long, appraising stare and announces with a grin in the young man's direction that he's not averse to sharing if they aren't. Then Luna knocks down the door, intent to fight for the love of her longtime Hollywood crush. In the confusion, Celestia sneaks in, kidnaps Oz and puts him to work in the castle kitchen as her private baker.
And then the meteor hits.
Dear Dudeler.
You have no idea how much hell of a week I've had, but to come home to see this fic updated, oooh it's like a hot shower baby. Anyways, let's get started, shall we?
Ok easy there boy easy there, sure they're at a spa but that doesn't mean there's a threat of him getting a happy en-
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Oh, and who's this handsome hunk of a stallion sitting next to our Flure? Why it's none other then-
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This was a pretty good chapter all in all, and I really enjoyed learning about Bubbles, and the advice given by Pinky. Although ending the chapter on Oz manscaping and the promise of the girls getting a look at his manhood leaves me with some...mixed feelings.
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
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You fool!*Back hands him from across the INTERNET* Every time someone asks him to bring on the clop, that beautiful bastard denies it to us for another chapter!
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That first pic made me laugh so hard my jaw popped! Now all I can hear in my head is "Danger! Danger! Danger, Will Robertson!" on an infinite loop.
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You had me at beautiful bastard.
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Also, Ozzy unfortunately doesn't know enough about spas to figure out what a 'happy ending' is.
Finally with the clop,
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5024414 Actually mares in this universe have the areola and nipples like human females, they just have the fur around them. I'm pretty sure I had that clarified in... Chapter 5 or 6 when I introduced naked Fleur during Ozzy's first day as her secretary.
Fun fact about horses: they're one of the few species where the males don't have nipples. It's totally legit, I think I remember mice not having them too. So with that in mind, anthro stallions in this universe don't have nipples. Otherwise all the attention on Ozzy's wouldn't be as funny.
Oz could give Fleur and Shining something to think about with what he's going to show them.
What's he doing in the bathroom? Oh, I know now. He wants to shave his pubes before showing off his junk, right?
5025293 Thanks! Ode to Joy was the first thing that came to mind when I got the idea, so I thought why not? Plus I just love me some classical music, and I'm always looking for new pieces for me to buy and own in the future.
As for Handel's Messiah, I actually had to look it up since I didn't know what that was. I have to say, there's a lot to go for in here looking at the first few videos, and even if I thought about it, I'm not sure if I could make the time to find which part fits the best for that scene.
Another excellent chapter! I'm glad to see this update regular and I look forward to the next chapter with earnest! Though I do wonder where the romancing will begin? Honestly I prefer the romance to build up over time instead of the "love at first sight" thing all the time that I've noticed and no real connection between the characters to make them seem like they genuinely love each other... and there's far too many of those romance fics around and I'm glad to see this one not fall into that category.
So far Shining Star is my favorite character in this fic and though it's nice to see OCs and the Anthro Ponies, we have yet to see other humans aside from Ozzy seeing as he's not the very first human to arrive in Equestria but only among the first settlers to come over. I wonder where the other humans are at? It might be nice if Oz did have a few acquaintances in the past that he was friendly with and pop up to say hello to him and a nod to the fact there are other humans in Equestria. So far, Ozzy seems like the only one and I know you mentioned the others we don't physical see them in this story. Though for story-reference there really isn't a need to introduce them, maybe just have Oz notice a human or two in a small group of ponies chatting with each other down the streets.
Anywho about the ending... Ozzy was going to do...? Is that why he didn't want to show off his "family jewels" to the others in the Spa? And though Bubbles was there it didn't seem like you mentioned whether or not he had a "forest" down there as well like humans so I'm guessing Anthro Stallions lack it in this universe. I never thought I would discuss this... sort of thing... in my entire life.
Regardless... I look forward to the next chapter! Please update soon when you can!
I wonder if Fleur will tell Shining that Oz went to do some private business and both of them were thinking that he was masturbating but he really wasn't. I hope Fleur doesn't get in trouble on her trip to the stores, because it would be disappointing to hear her get kidnapped after saying she can handle herself in a fight. I think something like that happening will be a bit too much for this story although, I'm betting what's really going to happen is Shining discussing her findings with Oz before Fleur returns or have a tense conversation with him about his Spa day.
5027032 Ozzy's just not used to being naked in public places, especially with so many mares in the same room.
5028921 I'm guessing you're into younger girls/mares? I just felt like with Ozzy at the age of 23, and especially with the amount of knowledge the girls have, them being 2-3 years older than him (soon to be 1-2 once his birthday comes around in a few months in the story's timeline) seems like a reasonable age gap. If I wanted Shining to be older, Fleur would have to be as well since they basically graduated from the same class in high school.
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With the mares in the spa, its 'cop' a feel, not 'cup' a feel.
5025381 Just a matter of taste I suppose. BTW, if you get someone who (like me) makes a comment on a chapter, it doesn't show up in the notifications page unless it's made on the same chapter. (I've tested this and know it to be true. What you do with this info is up to you.)
5029859 Huh, I did not know that. I'll have to keep that in mind. Thanks.
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I would feel the same too... I'm not comfortable going in my birthday suit around other people, males or females otherwise. I like my privacy.
Seeing his luck so far, I hope Shining doesn't walk in unannounced and he castrates himself by accident.
I'm laid up in my bed, unable to move because I fucked up my back, but this chapter has made me feel loads better. I think I laughed halfway through it. I was a little puzzled when Oz thought it would be 'fair' to show them his junk, but hey, why the hell not! I'm game.
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Can't wait for the next chapter!
Of course Bubbles is a softy. My guess is you can't get a wife as cool as Toffee without having something of a lax side. I'm getting an odd vibe from Mascara (I got it when I read about her, but didn't bother commenting until now). Won't even dignify the shaving bit with a comment (however, if either of the girls say something along the lines of 'cute,' I am giving the ultimate facepalm)
5040981 Cute like how his package is?
5040989 Yes. (I'm almost certain some girls tease guys like that all the time)
5041007 Maybe, but you gotta wonder whether shaved is better than a bush in terms of appearance and/or preference.
5041028 In reference to preference (Heh, rhyme), girls are people too (much to our everlasting dismay). .
5041042 Not sure if it's a dismay, but if it means anything, we're probably as much as people to them as they are you
5041061 I'll concede that issue. And on that note: media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m52fq7reCb1r3zat8.gif
I've been following this since the beginning and made the grave mistake of not just adding it to my favorites since then
Great read. When will a new chapter be posted? I enjoy the development of Fleur and Shining and it is fun imagining them trapping their little human friend for some fun when heat season rolls around. Can't wait.