• Member Since 31st Dec, 2012
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Dragonborne Fox

It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.


One pony claiming to do everything, the other longing for what is lost. When they meet, hell breaks loose.


Collab between me and MetaKnight145. Eder's self-insert does not belong to me; I merely used his (self-insert) pony for this one-shot.

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Comments ( 26 )

Hooray for MetaKnight collab! :heart:

So who rapes who?:trixieshiftright:

Needs more glaring grammar errors in his dialogue. He speaks way too coherently.

“I shall obliterate you, nonbeliever!”

Missed a chance for a belieber joke there.

*(Currently, in Tartarus)*
Demon Orc: Looks like meat is back on the menu boys!
Eder:: No wait!- What are yo- AAAAGHGHAAHGYEEEEAAAGGG!- *(gurgle)* *(thud!)*

I really like eder's personality. You should more with it.

Yes. Hell yes. Hell fucking yes.

I eagerly await more stories in the new "destruction of Eder" sub-genre of fanfiction.

Perfection...This is.

4744881 Indeed.
4745123 I would do more glaring grammar jokes if I had the time. It was written in between my driving classes. :unsuresweetie:
4745360 :rainbowlaugh:
4745994 Yes. In fact, I plan on doing more or less the same with other red and black alicorn OC's on Eder's level. Oh god I can imagine Foxy in a crusader uniform...:pinkiecrazy:
4746194 YES.

4746505 Iu gon to continiu dis?

4746601 Yes. All I need is an alicorn story which is shit and I'm golden. Hell, I'm thinking of doing Silver Haze next. :pinkiecrazy:

4746608 Browse "Nightmare Star's Revenge" That's the base of shitty alicorn fics.

4746610 Hey, could you rage review this story? :rainbowwild:

4746655 Umm....no. My brain is not ready for a rage review right now.

This is awesome! :pinkiecrazy:

How this hasn't been deleted yet is beyond me.

4779201 Two words: Self-insert.

Oh, I can only imagine the chaos that would ensue if Eder the cool kid found this.

5051879 He's been permabanned. So far, he's only found out about my RR of his story (because I went and posted it in the comments during his spree.) And, according to ERich935, he has a grudge against this site, so yeah.

5051929 Oh. Nevermind then.

But still, one can always wonder... MUHAHAHAHAHA!

“I shall obliterate you, nonbeliever!”

I swear I thought you are making a JB joke there :pinkiegasp:

5114707 The words are very similar. :pinkiecrazy:

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