(A MLP and W.I.T.C.H crossover)
Twilight has been having nightmares of late. Visons of four young mares trapped within the four elements of nature: Earth, Wind, Water, and Fire. The one constant in these nightmares is a voice that tells her to protect the heart. One day, she finds a young mare with the power over lighting, but without a clue to where she comes from. Just a name, Will.
The returns of an old enemy heralds a looming threat and a darkness that will eclipse them all. What is the connection between them, and what is the link between the mare and the visions.
What is the heart of worlds.
Well, this has been interesting.
It felt a bit rushed, everything happend so fast that I actually had to scroll back and read a few sentences again. Then again, I shouldnt read with a sleepy mind at 2315 local time.
Other then that, one hell of an entry. I find myself wanting for more. Why is Will a pony? How did Sunset Shimmer cross the vail? What happend to the others? Whats up with the dreams? Why can Will understand inanimate objects?
So many questions....
4163202 Will can talk to inanimate objectzz, remember? She'zz the heart, zzo she can do that. It was zshown in the comiczz.
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He hasn't watched season 2 just yet, he hasn't watched the part where the girls gain new powers
4163508 Im a bit lacking behind in the canon department. Also I only have the show for reference. I dont know if the comics are still published in my area.
This may sound a bit random, but when I saw the title I thought that this story would be a Kingdom Hearts crossover.
Man, it's been a while since I've delved into anything W.I.T.C.H. related. I agree with LtCWest that it feels a bit rushed, but other than that I really like it. Can't wait to see why Will has lost her memory.
Also, just my takes on what the girls should be:
Will: I agree with pegasus but I would have also agreed with unicorn or even alicorn (leader and holds the heart)
Irma: I like her as a pegasus as well, but also feel unicorn would have been good too.
Taranee: yes unicorn.
Cornelia: unicorn is good but if you have to have all three tribes present than she should defiantly be an earth pony.
HayLin: pegasus. just flat out pegasus. maybe unicorn, but definitely not an earth pony. it just doesn't seem right.
Well, I must say things are moving at quiet a fast pace.
Well, looks like the transformation took a big chunk of Wills memory with it, thankfully its comming back fast. Interesting to see that in Wills flashbacks she sees herself and her friends as ponys, while others appear as humans, this indicates some major mindfuck.
Btw,
The guy this is about is from Season 2?
Also, V, as long as its not Hugo Weaving....
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Yep, IT's Matt, Will's boyfriend. He has a major part in season 2 of the show.
Yeah I love witch and here is what the gardiens should be
Will a alicorn since she's the leader
Cornilea a earth pony since she's earth
Hay Lin a Pegasus since she's wind
Irma a Pegasus since she's water and the pegisies does the weather
Taranee a unicorn
Wow, that's cold Big Mac.
I think the first chapter's title should be spelled "Ambivalence," if I understand what you were going for.
Xehanort, Nerissa, or Maleficent come to mind.
Woah woah woah, a W.I.T.C.H crossover!? Added to read later! I loved that show, and happen to know one of its voice actresses pretty well
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...Wait...WHAT?! That is awesome!
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Yup, the VA for Will is a family member
Anyway, once I have some time and finish the last three chapters of Fallout Equestria, this'll be the next thing on my list
Alchemystudent where is the next chapter come for this story
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In the next few minutes....
6205310 ok
The suplex's are strong with this one.
You know, this needs more views. I'm pretty sure the only reason why it doesn't is that WITCH is relatively obscure for crossover material. That and the unfortunately bad summary. This is excellent.
Wow. Winx(no knowledge), MtG, DnD, and WITCH mechanics in a single crossover without it feeling contrived or shoehorned? Wow. Also, for Pinkie's color affinity Red/Black seems to work best. If you haven't read it, you might like the fic The Implicit Neighs if you like MtG crossovers.
Was that... Megaman? Since when had they been there?
Holy crap, this is turning into Kingdom Hearts with less Disney!
What is W.I.T.C.H? I've never heard of it before, but then again, I'm still a bit new to the site, so me being confused is understandable
6640508 MtG? What the hay is that?!
Hoo boy, this is starting to get interesting!
Heart of the digital world *plays digimon theme song *
I c what you did there
Trixie as Luna's apprentice? Sounds legit
Shit's about to hit the fan!
Battle-Brothers, Spartans prepare for battle!
So is Sunset not going to be appearing again for the rest of the story or...?
Also the fight between Mozenwrath and Twilight felt a bit too one-sided, otherwise great chapter.
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Don't worry, this won't b the last of Sunset. I have plans
Great, it's Prixie!
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I'm the co-author(Hello!) and I'd like to point out, maybe that I didn't make it obvious, but I was trying to imply that Mozenwrath wanted to get beaten. He wanted Twilight to realize that she was killing Sunset so she would be broken enough for him to take her over instead.
This is what happens when you get two writers with completely different headcanons together...
I was very aware of Sturgeon's Law as I read this.
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Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
7021246 A fanfiction writer unaware of Sturgeon's Law?
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Oh, I'm aware of it and that is why I asked. I don't know if I fall into the 90% or 10%
Princess Monoke and Spirited Away references spotted!
Dang, so many feels!
Very nice intro, good work.
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that about sums up how i feel i need more
4163528 i.ytimg.com/vi/4Xz5BgAiccU/maxresdefault.jpg
that about sums up how i feel i need more
4163528 4163528 i.ytimg.com/vi/4Xz5BgAiccU/maxresdefault.jpg
that about sums up how i feel i need more
6679455 it's a good disney cartoon
6100585 Say WHAT?! HOLY FREAKING THRONE!
Will there be a sequel?
7121304 Uh, yeah, what you said.
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A sort of sequel. You'll see.
Splitting them up!? Cheater, you just want to get to Z
I don't know what happened with the video game thing but I loved it