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That Minnesotan guy who has quickly gone from being a common brony to being an avid reader and editor, primarily for CommissarAJ and the amazing Price of Loyalty writers.


This story is a sequel to The Fears of Yesterday

Disclaimer, just like in the previous two stories, I, in no way, take any credit for this story. It is an approved repost by a user that wishes to remain anonymous.

Scootaloo and Lightning are happily engaged, living the youthful lives of ponies in love. Steel is still adjusting to live with the Dash family, slowly growing closer to his older sister. As nice as life is, new challenges and drama will soon add more than they bargained for.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 54 )

Holy shit, I remember this! One of the first fanfics I read here...

oh shit, its this one that i spent most of my time reading after "The Fears of Yesterday". It kept me wondering if the story was gonna end


Didn't realize this was up. I'll have to re-read the others first. It's good to see these stories again. This series the one that got me started on fanfics.

Please tell me the rest of this will get posted... I love this set of fics. And it will thoroughly piss me off if I cant read the whole bucking thing...

Will this ever be finished?

Well, there's a lot left for me to put up on the site. I've just been... busy. Extremely busy with college and the like. It wasn't finished when the original author left the site, but I may (probably not) finish it up.


This is awesome! I know the original author isn't going to be finishing it, and I know you're busy too. (I get it, we DO all have lives outside of here haha.) But this is really an awesome series, I'm keeping my fingers crossed you choose to finish it at some point. :twilightsmile:


So is the rest of the fic going be be uploaded anytime soon?


are updates for this going to be more frequent now?

Well, for a little while at least. I went through and moved 4 more chapters to FIMFiction, so at least those will be uploaded. Reformatting this is a pain that turned me away for quite a while.



7187978 good to know

This makes me laugh. Know what i mean?

I like it;has ton of humor!:duck:

I loved this so far;DUCK FACE;lots of humor!!!:trixieshiftright::twilightsmile::duck:

OH COME ON!!!!! Cliff hanger!!:ajbemused::twilightangry2::fluttershysad::fluttershbad:

Whooh! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

When will the the next chapter come out?? I NEED TO KNOW!!!


Holy S*** I've been waiting for these chapters for over a year now. Re-Reading this series of stories over and over again. You have no idea how happy it makes me to see some new progress.

Oh F*** That Escalated way faster than I thought... I love it.

Dunn.... Dunn..... DUNNNNNN!!!!!!!!

Keep up with the story it is good


Moar? Good Fic, need moar. :D

I never read the original so I was just wondering if anyone could help me about weather this is the furthest extent of the original story or if there is still more to come?

There is still a fair portion of this story left. I've just kinda fallen behind on editing and reformatting it.


7764739 Thank you, can't wait, this is by far my favorite series!

I guess no one else made it this far lol. I've read all 3 books and every chapter begining to end. #SUPERFAN


2 years, i take its dead?

I wait for years .....
thank you so much for the chapter

Not quite? I've forgotten about this for the most part, but you reminded me about it and I realized that there was actually a chapter ready and waiting to be published. Thanks for that.

Thank you for sticking around and waiting. Hopefully I'll be able to just format and edit the final few chapters of this story before too long. It needs to be posted.


Oh my god! It’s back! Words can’t express how happy I am about this.

Well that's good I will wait for that

I forgot that this series existed


Man, I almost forgot about this fic. It's good to see your still updating it

Will this be updated anytime soon?

"Or she could just give a nice little 'buck you' to everything I know about medicine and wake up right now," Nurse Redheart said with a huff. Immediately upon hearing Kitty's voice, everypony in the room shot to her bedside.

The body is complicated for us humans, there is a great deal of variance for us medically depending on the individual and that variance is likely to be greater in a race that uses magic.

Aaauuuugggghhhh no more CLIFFHANGERS PLZZ

When is the next chapter going to be uploaded

Every creature, simmer down; it was about a year since chapter 15 of this book was updated, and some of us have been waiting fof its conclusion for years. Be patient

Cool an update. Will read later.

Apparently, very soon after you posted this

Oh. My. F***.

I thought this story had gone stagnant. I didn't really expect to see an update.

Good job. Keep up the good work.

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