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With her crown stolen, Princess Twilight Sparkle must retrieve it by entering a magic mirror, that acts as a gateway to another world. Along with Spike, she ends up in the Kung Fu Panda universe! Little does she realize that her path will cross with the Dragon Warrior, the Furious Five, alternate versions of her Ponyville friends, and an unexpected ally, as they all must find a way to save both worlds from a great threat.
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Still better, than EG movie.
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Oh yeah, at least 20% More Awesomeness.
So what animals do you imagine the alternate versions of the remaining mane 6 [and any other mlp characters] are going to be?
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Pinkie Pie - Chow Chow, squirrel, mouse
Rarity - Cat, swan
Rainbow Dash - Sparrow, eagle, colibri(?)
AJ - Horse, cow(?)
Fluttershy - Cat, bunny, colibri(?)
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Well those are some interesting choices [some of them are correct, but I'll let you figure out which ones].
Very good. Looking forward to more :)
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Thanks. Looking forward to more too.
So what animals do you imagine the remaining mane 6 will be?
3886439 Rarity is def a swan / goose, haha
AJ could be a horse
Fluttershy could be a crane because they're so graceful (plus you could ship her with Crane :D)
Pinkie Pie could be a hare or whatever they are in China, cas she bounces around so much and, well, she's Pinkie xD
Rainbow Dash could be an eagle or something, whatever's fast and vicious >:D
Tbh I don't know much about Chinese animals sooo... lol
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Once again, more interesting guesses [some that I had considered using too before].
wow that's pretty unique. nice concept and chapter
vinyl and octavia?
not bad
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Thanks. Since this is technically combining Kung Fu Panda and Equestria Girls, I had to create a sort of middle ground for the setting, so that we have a place within the KFP universe that is inhabited by the alternate versions of [most of] the characters from MLP:FiM. Plus, it's awesome thinking of Celestia and Luna as Kung Fu Masters [with a back story and everything].
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Correct!
I was originally going to make them foxes [vixens], but then changed my mind when I realized a fox would be more fitting for somepony else [I'll let you figure out who].
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Thanks. Hope you look forward to the next chapter.
LOL, funny, now that we have that done. Next chapter!
The fuq? Vinyl and Octavia?
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LOL. Too obvious? Perhaps I should have gone for an actual Translation of her name eh?
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You were expecting Lyra and Bonbon maybe? Lol.
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
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Interest combination of the two media. I can definitely see awesome promise in it, especially since I like both movies. This is going to be a fun story to keep track of. And, so far, you're doing a great job.
C&C:
You might want to do something about those wall-of-texts, though. In the literature world, they are one of a few most evil sins to the readers, since they have been known to created headaches.as one tried their hardest to hold that much info in without becoming lost to its all-powerful madness. And, beware of compound words, since they seems to tripped many authors here. For example, in this chapter, you used 'near by', when it should have been 'nearby'.
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Thank you. I'm surprised there hasn't been that many crossover fanfics of the two franchises [the only memorable one being that infamous fanfic where Lord Shen and Fluttershy switch bodies (and the story ends right then and there)].
So, what would you suggest I do about those wall-of-texts?
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Curious...I haven't seen that fanfic before. What is its name?
As for the wall-of-texts, the best thing to do is to break them into separate paragraphs, using the 3-5 sentences rule. When a paragraph either goes beyond 5 sentences, or get too big, that would be the ideal time to break it into separate paragraphs. On rare occasions, it would be okay to have up to 6 sentences, but it is best not to go that far unless you know that the paragraph will be small in size.
Truth Be Told; I watched Kung Fu Panda (The Movie) and It was Awesome!!
My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic/MLP: Equestria Girls are Awesome too, Because I'm a Brony!!!
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It's called 'What the Pegasus Wrought' by Strange Dandy. I don't know if it's on FIMFiction, but I do know it's on FanFiction.net. It's the only other MLP-KFP crossover fanfic on there besides mine [which is kinda sad].
Thanks. I figured that's what I needed to do. I guess I should try and fix that with my current chapters then? Also, would you be interested in proof-reading future chapters for me [I have no one doing it right now, and unfortunately I don't have MS Word on the computer I'm using]?
3887234 I believe so, if you ask me.
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Awesome!
I hope you get the chance to see Kung Fu Panda 2 [and the upcoming Kung Fu Panda 3 in 2015].
Yeah, MLP:FiM is Great. As for Equestria Girls...Meh, it has a fair amount of 'yays'
and 'neighs' 
in it. And if the rumors be true about there being an Equestria Girls 2, I seriously hope they managed to fix all of the problems the first one had [in the mean time, I'll just try and fix some of them by writing this fanfic, 
lol].
3893190 Cool, Oh and uh...Po and Tigress are My Favorite Kung Fu Panda Characters while Twilight Sparkle is My Most Favorite MLP:FIM Pony/Character!!!
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Then I'm confident you are going to love this fanfic.
Also, how would you like the idea of Kung Fu Panda being re-told/re-enacted by characters from MLP:FiM [as a sorta Spoof/parody/homage thing]?
3893244 Ummm... I don't know, but I'll look up to it if I can.
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Hmmm, well, I may have just gotten another story to stock-piled on my 'read later' collection. Thank.
As for being your proof-reader for future chapters...sadly, I can't. It isn't that I don't want to do it, but rather I have so many projects on my back as it is. However, I believe I can help you with the three you got done right now. I'm not sure when I will get them done, though, since I'll be working on my other projects as well, but you don't have to worry about dealing with them yourself. And, maybe once some of my work loads get done being taking care of, I might do more.
Sun-Shan Shi-Ma-Er??? ...Yup, thats Sunset Shimmer alright!
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Timon: "But with POWER!"
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You're welcome.
Okay, thanks anyway.
Okay... this is interestimg indeed. The personalities so far are spot on, the way you've translated the "MLP prior events" to the Kung-Fu Verse (trust me, it's gonna pick up) was very creative and it was actually very funny.
However... The prologue was kind of lazy in the beginning. What I mean is that you jump into the conflict right away, instead of making the setting and re-introducing the characters. It might seem pointless seeing as this is fanfiction, but jumping into action without any build up is just... underwhelming.
I'm telling you this because this story... this story could be really awesome, IDK if it is since I've only read the prologue
, so the prologue as it is right now is very underwhelming. I'd recommend you to expand a little before the point wher Der- I mean Dezhi land-crashes, just so the story could improve.
HSXI- May the Power protect you.
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Thank you very much.
(and what do you mean by "it's gonna pick up"?)
I had a lot of fun doing that, and always imagined what it would be like if Celestia and Luna were kung fu masters in the KFP universe [especially the battle between Celestia and Nightmare Moon- most likely a cross of what they showed in the Season 4 premier and the epic fight scene between Shifu and Tai Lung].
Yeaaaah.
Sorry about that, and thanks for noticing it. I wasn't sure at the time if I wanted to make a prologue involving the main cast from the Kung Fu Panda universe, or just go straight to Chapter 1 (with Twi and Spike). And yeah you're right; I figured most of my readers would be KFP fans anyways, so re-introducing them ( I felt at the time) would slow me down from writing the actual things I wanted to introduce. So I kinda rushed with the prologue, having Dezhi 
literally drop from the sky almost right at the beginning.
So you're saying that I should maybe take a few steps back to add more to the prolouge [even though this fanfic is already posted on three sites] before I continue any further? I guess that makes sense (though if I were to write this story entirely before posting it, and had the time, I would have written all the climatic/exciting stuff first and then work my way around with the intro and ending..that's just kinda how my mind works).
And once again, you're right! This story [in my mind at the moment] IS really awesome. Now it's a matter of turning mental sounds/voices and images (like a movie) into sentences and paragraphs.
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You're welcome (and I meant that you created a MLP alternate universe! A 'Kung-Fu Verse', if you will. That might pick up into something popular with the right conditions
And again, it's just a recomendation, about adding a little more before the problems arrived. Whatever works with your creative process. It's your call anyway.
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Okay thanks. That's what I thought you meant [just needed to ask to be sure]. So, would this fanfic fit the site's 'Alternate Universe' genre (I was going to add it originally)? Anyways, yeah, I think if I do it right (I already am putting a lot of thought in world-building/ character developing) this universe could become very popular. Strange thing; to me, the Land of Harmony is suppose to be a part of the KFP universe, but on it's own [since this is the main setting of the fanfic], it feels more like an assimilated universe of the two franchises, as well as an alternate 'Kung Fu' verse of MLP. I sure do hope to reveal more of this new universe, and the characters who inhabit it, in the next chapters [when I get them done].
Alright then, I'll see what I can do.
I guess that because the couterparts of each pony also exists in this world, having too many of them could affect the fabric of reality in some way or somehow endanger one of the two by the precense of the other. I hypothetised the latter since in the movie we don't hear anything about the Sunset Shimmer that was born in the human world, but it is clear that each pony character has their human counterpart. So my theory is: Equestria!Sunset made contact with Earth!Sunset and either Earth!Sunset stopped existing or both Sunsets became one single being.
Also, I'm having a really hard time imagining she-wolves in the KFP style, and cats for that matter.
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, let's just say my fanfic will be presenting us the opportunity to delve more into this question (another reason this fanfic will be So Awesome
). Do you know if there are any other MLP/EG fanfics taking on the subject too? 
If you do, let me know.
Great to see that you're taking notice and so much thought over that particular sentence.
Those are very interesting theories and hypothesis you have brought up, some of which I kind of agree with. While hopefully not giving too much away here
LOL.
Especially if the she-wolves are alternate versions of Octavia and Vinyl Scratch (I guess I have my own unique mental designs for them). 
Yeah, I guess when you put it that way, it would be hard to imagine she-wolves [or maybe cats] in the design style that's portrayed in KFP.
Really loving the story so far, keep up the good work!
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Thanks, and I will.
GOOD JOB Honeytongue, Awesome Job, Oh and By the way here is a List Of My Favorite Kung Fu Panda and MLP: FIM Characters:
Kung Fu Panda Characters:
1.) Master Tigress The Tiger
2.) Po The Panda
My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic:
01.) Twilight Sparkle/Princess Twilight Sparkle
02.) Pinkie Pie (Pinkamena Diane Pie)
03.) Rainbow Dash
04.) Princess Luna
05.) Shenanigans (Who's just like Pinkie Pie, Created By: Xain-Russell, Fanmade)
06.) Aqua Jet (Who's just like Applejack and Rainbow Dash, Created By: Xain-Russell, Fanmade)
07.) Big Macintosh (Big Mac)
08.) Princess Molestia (Princess Celestia, Basically her Darkside or her Sexuel Side/Twin, Fanmade)
09.) Lyra Heartstrings
10.) Trixie Lulamoon
11.) Shining Armor
12.) Flash Sentry
13.) Queen Chrysalis
Sorry If you see never seen before names, there Fanmade, so Ignore them.
Thank you, if you liked it.
like
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Thank you so very much.
And that's a very interesting list.
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Awesome.
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Actually, Shenanigans and Aqua Jet were created by The Fiery Joker (Joshscorcher) in his story: Recasted, where they do serve as Pinkie's and Applejack's replacements. What Xain did with the characters was to draw them so that they didn't look like your regular OC pictures.
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You are gonna hate me for this, but I have to point out something that can't be ignored. There's something about your narration style that just isn't right; I can't really put my finger on it, but let's take for example Feiwuni's (is that chinese?) flashback:
1) You don't need to add two adjectives, specially if the two mean nearly the same.
2) In the previous sentence is already stated that she can't seem to get any attention, no need to re-state it.
3) Isn't the portal to Equestria behind the turtle-shaped rock?
4) There's no way she could know of what the crown was made after touching it for half a second... with her head.
5) This description isn't needed since that's the normal reaction after being clobbered in the head.
6) You could reduce this sentence by saying "I picked it up to have a closer look. Keep in mind that this her retelling of what happened, so it is in the past tense, no need for so many descriptions.
7) "I knew"? I don't think she would be that certain for something she just find and had never seen before. Either drop it or change 'knew' for 'guessed' or 'though'.
I'm really sorry for doing this, but I can't just keep quiet. Also, I don't think cats in the KF-Verse would meow so frequently and Wouldn't elephants have stubby fingers like the rhinos?
I will stop before I get a little farther. My best advice: look for an editor to help you with the narration; Here's a group that could help you with that: Overly Extensive Editors. Just follow the submission directions and they will help you find an editor for your story.
Good luck, and sorry
3924844 Yeah, thats basically who I ment, and yes he (The Fiery Joker [Joshscorcher]) has a DeviantART accout and so do I.
3922861 Your Welcome!
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Hmmm....You certainly have given me quite a lot to look and mull through. I'll see what I can do about most of what you pointed out. Except #3. I was going to have Spike and Twilight discuss that in the next chapter [unless you think it should be placed on this one].
Thanks, I will go see if I can get an editor [I've already realized I probably need one].
Also about cats meow, I just wanted to put in something besides "Twilight said" or Twilight replied".
Hmmm, I guess you're right about the elephant 'hand' thing.
And yes, Feiwuni is Chinese, for Fluttershy. Fei-Wu [ the characters for 'Fly' + 'Dance'] means 'Flutter' or 'Dance in the Breeze', and Ni for 'Shy'.