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RavensDagger


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Not bad. The punchline drags a bit though, in a good trollclopfic the story only lasts about two or three scentences after the actual subject matter is revealed. There are a couple spelling mistakes there, but otherwise quite good.

WTF MAN?!?!?! YOU JUST GAVE ME A KICK TO THE FACE!!!
This book + My eyes + Twist in the middle = MINDFUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh:

My face at the beginning: :rainbowhuh:
My face at the end: :rainbowlaugh:

Man, if you're going to do a story like this, you really shouldn't give it away in the title.

Also: too late, Twilight x Bookshelf OTP

C'est magnifique!

353398
Excellant, Incroyable, parfait! D'autre mots qui veut dire bon!

Yeah, this was slapped together by me and my editor (Bearycool) in roughtly 45 minutes last night. We were both tired of editing a rather long sad fic that I wrote... This is what happens when you put two tired, creative, ponies on a Docs file, at 2am...

...And then the glue Twilight used on part of it erupted out, splattering a white sticky mess everywhere, some of it dribbling down the lips...

:3 Heehee.

353258 no, Trixiexpinecone OTP

Yeah, we had too much fun with this. :rainbowlaugh:

Anypony wish to suggest a better name?

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"The Romance Shelf"?

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OTP all the ponies!

355237 twidashrarshyjacklestunamactaviscratchbonyrapiderpoovesballgatescootabellebloomtiaraspoonsnistailsxiesmithburnhearthoitypantslisbellhoopscherlineike is your OTP?

Sure, just OTP everything!

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So that's where that meme came from....

So, I figured I'd finally read this before calling it a night.

>Clopfic practice, as well as suspense humour.

Win on the second count.

Incredible fail on the second. Yes, there's a lot of clopfic that revolves around presenting the mechanics of the deed, often with the impression that it's supposed to be so (*eugh*) rough. There are also a lot of HiE stories about somebrony who's life is shit until suddenlyponies. Both are well-justified stereotypes of their genre.

If you really want to write the stuff, you need the elements of good-natured fun, intimacy, showing touch, emotion, and credibility. Or something like that. I recommend analyzing the clop chapter of Fo:E. Especially pay attention to how Pacce describes (or doesn't!) pony squishy bits, and the role of dialog in setting the mood. You're doing it almost completely wrong.

Anyway, back to more SGW before I get too tired and stupid.

I....I thought this was going to be Spike/Twilight........what the BUCK AM I READING!!!!!! Good job...I think......I'm going to go lay down now.

Riz

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Umm...can you explain to me of what did I just read ?

:rainbowhuh:Not the weirdest thing I've read... I think. It's right up there with Pinkie Watches Paint Dry for sure.:pinkiecrazy:

da....fuck?

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