All Macdash, Lunatosh, and Spikebelle fans are welcome. All button mash fans will be shot on sight. SWEETIE BELLE IS BEST PONY!!!
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When the mane six go to battle Discord, the CMC's have to stay at the library. After a potion mishap Spike wakes up to see he's a pony. Can him and the fillies find a way to turn him back? Does he even want to be turned back?
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Hmmm... Seems like an interesting Concept! I'll be reading this when I Don't feel as damn tired!
see ya there!!!!
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Your Esteemed Prince of Fire.
~Charming Crescent~
4203867 glad you liked it.
A ponified Spike/Sweetie Belle fic tagged Teen, Sex and Gore?
...I admit, I'm intrigued.
Interesting... but I'm confused.
Does this story take place in an Alternate Universe where Discord wasn't reformed, but Twilight was still coronated?
4204016 yes I suppose I should add the alt universe tag, sorry
good read so far cant wait for more
while i like the spike into pony concept. discord has been reformed. unless it's BEFORE that. say something. also it's incredibly fast and lacks MANY MANY details. it's like watching a a kid in my middle school class attempt writing a novel. and i'm sorry for being harsh. i normally try not to be but people pick on me for it.
4204240 it's an ulterative universe in which discord hasn't been reformed yet. And sorry if it lacks details, I broke my arm so it's painful to write to much. I will try to improve on that in the future. Thanks for the feedback.
This looks like a good story. I hope that you update regularly. Best of luck with future stories.
4204497 thanks
This is getting interesting.
Okay, so you deleted my comments pointing out grammar mistakes in the description, but you haven't fixed the actual mistakes. Why not?
I'm not trying to be mean. Really, I'm not.
But it pains me to see such glaringly obvious mistakes in a story that I might be interested in if not for that.
4205337 I deleted them so that way your buzz kill comments wouldn't ruin the story for those who liked it. And I will not fix it now because I have a buckle fracture in my right hand, so it's hard to type as it is.
Seems like this is going good. just had to read one more time.
I'm not entirely sure what I just read.
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My reaction when I'm not sure what I just read.
4205481 I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy it, I'll try harder next time.
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"I'm not entirely sure what I just read" doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it, it's just I don't know how to react...
4205518 oh well ok,
4205349
You said you want help to improve the story yet deleted comments pointing out grammatical errors?
The story is nice, I like the Spike pony premise even if it does seem a little rushed (why are Big Mac and Granny, Sweetie Belle's parents, and Scootaloo's parents able to watch the CMC like they normally do?). But deleting comments as a "buzzkill" is kinda unethical. There are errors and fixing them is definitely a lower priority than healing your hand (here's wishing you a speedy recovery) but deleting advice seems sort of wrong. There's a good deal of grammatical errors, helps to have reader advice to fix them.
4205629 I deleted them because I believe that what he was saying is correct, however I do believe he could have said it in a less offensive way.
And as for your question about regarding the other adult figures, I will be explaining that in the next chapter. You are a very observant person.thanks for the feedback.
4205650 I wasn't trying to be offensive, and if you felt that way then I apologize. (That doesn't mean I'm going to be nice, but at least I'm trying not to be rude.)
I understand it's hard for you to type with your injury, but can you copy-and-paste? Here's the current description:
and here's what I posted as a quick grammar correction in one of the deleted comments:
4205781 ok I have rewritten the title. I hope it is more to your liking. I know my grammar needs to be my top priority when writing. Ill do my best to improve in the future. Sorry again for my attitude, it's just that writing can get pretty frustrating sometimes.
4205810 yeah its a great start, but like what breaking news said you may need to drag this out a little more, unless you just wanted to make it a kind of oneshot I guess.
4205945 ill be sure to keep that in mind, I wanted to see what you guys thought of the pilot chapter before I went anywhere with this.
4205986 were you looking to make it a large story with long chapters or short chapters; or a shorter story with long chapters or short chapters?
4206009 I was thinking a long story with medium size chapters.
4205650 so about 60,000 to 80,000 before a new story?
4206032 yeah that seems manageable. Although I will have to take some time to plan the rest of the story.
4206048 k I look forward to it
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4206057 just make sure to keep an eye out for it.
Might wanna use
http://jonathanmdful.deviantart.com/art/Coltified-Spike-361190947
that as your Source Link, since that's the source of the image and the google search could break at any moment.
4206154 thanks good sir
Belle needs to be capitalized.
The idea of the story is very nice. It was a pleasure to read it... Thank you for writing it.
4206322 I like it and who cares if there spelling mistakes as long as the story's enjoyable does it really matter
4206322 very well ill change it.
4206967
It's the little mistakes that make a big difference.
4209365 like spelling errors
Hold on.
wat
4209365 I'm sorry the grammar is troubling you, I'm pleased to tell you that grammar will be my top priority from now on. Thanks for the feedback.
4209791 oh my god such a typo, thanks for pointing that out, so sorry
Great chapter!
Very original concept and poor Spike, I hope that he learns how to use unicorn's magic.
Keep up the good work
4210383 thanks
My interest is piqued, I also like that even though we know what the shipping will be, you showed no hints of it in the this first chapter, I look forward to the journey.
Oh and kudos for making it on the popular stories list.
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Oh it doesn't trouble me, don't worry about that. Just making a point.