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Garble is tired of being a irresponsible teenage dragon, he seeks the help of spike to try an control his greed. Will Garble be able to make a change? Or be consumed by his own greed. And most importantly, will he accept the magic of friendship?
This is a one shot for the Everfree Northwest Writers Competition
I honestly don't care if I win or not, because I wanted to get this out there.
Enjoy :)
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not bad but should have been made into a longer story a lot of wasted potechal as a one shot
4016770 Well you see it was for a contest and its supposed to be a one shot and between 1000-3000 words.
And I do not plan on making a sequel anytime soon
4016790 well that's a wast of an origanla idea
4016842 yeah we'll to be honest, I just wanted to test the waters with this one and see what others thought of it first.
Love dragons and this story
4017375 thanks
To be a better dragoooooooon! AT THE GALA!
4016842 even if it wasn't a one shot I wouldn't know where to go with this story.
4034257 try having garbel prove he wishes to change. cut out the spike ose gree this you did and also maby a reconnoiter with his old gang
4035387 good idea.
I might revive this story but I want to see how it does. And if I do revive it, it would have to be a sequel because of the contest
4018101
Thisnwas good but could have been longer and had a better reason for why Garble was immune to the gems magic. You earn a like.
4666641 the reason it was short was because it was for a contest. The contest rules stated that it could be no longer than 3000. Otherwise I would have made it longer.
4667125 Ah makes sense.
4667129 yep, oh and congratulations on the feature.
4667210 Thanks!
Nice job :)
4720094 thanks
Some Murphyisms that slipped through, gotta love spell check
very reason( i )was going [ I ]
My name ( ) Garble [ is]
off. Usually I (wold ) [would }
(soon) I reached [caps]
later (rarity) appeared [caps]
front of (Me) [no cap ]
feelings for ( rarity ) [cap}
lines we started (t ) work [to]
speak with (spike0 [cap]
way (spike) has [cap]
Me and (rarity0 [cap]
up to see (rarity0 [cap]
escorting (spike) to [cap]
into the gem (spike) managed [cap]
gem laying under some (ruble) [rubble]
I brushed away the (ruble) [rubble]
"Look (spike,) I just want [cap]
my name is (spike ) [cap]
Names (garble)" I [cap]
Say (garble), [cap]
good story keep going.