HOLY SHIT THE LAST TIME I WAS ON HERE THEY WOULDN'T LET ME CHANGE MY FREAKING BIO!!!!!!!!!!! anyways I am a big classic lit fan, I like fifa/battlefield 1. ps- don't forget to have a good time :)
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When Spike and Sweetie Belle go to Canterlot to meet her parents, Spike gets an unpleasant surprise when he meets them. But when they return to Ponyville, what happens when there is bad communication but a lot of care? Well, not very good things.
First story, open to criticism.
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Oh, shit, Well, that's not going to go over well with sweetie belle
Um, we already saw Sweetie Belle's parents and their names are Magnum and Pearl.
4012403 oh yeah, thats right, I saw belle and thought of them, Who could they be then?
4012403 sorry, did not know that. I'll edit it.
SpikeBelle is always good in my opinion
Well well talk about a interesting cliffhanger to end on. You have caught my interest and i can't wait to see what happens next.
If any of you are in the group "spikebelle", you can get a sneak peek of the conflict/plot of this story in one of my posts.
well shit...
Spike has his work cut out for him
isn't Sweeties and Rarity's parents names Magnum and Pearl?
img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111117223949/mlp/images/b/ba/Rarity_with_her_family_S2E5.png
4012531 THE ONE EPISODE I NEVER WATCHED IS COMING BACK TO HAUNT ME
4012547
lol
About time we got another Spikebelle! I'm liking this story thus far
"Know what would be interesting, if sweetie belle turned herself into a dragon and spike had twilight turn him into a pony"
I have a feeling it'll be something like this
4012552 I did update the names, it shows it when I open the story. But something else I just realized, the parents are going to be SUPER O.O.C. if they were in an episode
4012566
could just say its A.U (Alternate Universe) or maybe they recently had a bad experience with mixed race couples?
I see a small resemblance to the series I'm doing, where Sweetie Belle and Rarity's parents do not like Spike. I took that story down to work on it more.
Here's the link. Not calling you a copy cat. I personally like the idea of her parents not liking Spike.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9888346/1/First-Date
Anyway, Loved it. Keep writing. Like and Fav.
This is so imperfect. It's horrible. Many many mistakes. Needs a lot more work. A bit of misspelling. It's so..........I I.....................I love it :D. I was kidding -3-. But there is one mistake:
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say wat? Try switching your words up a bit. Nice work :) Loving this story 
Congrats on your first published story, and good choice on the pairing :)
Well, just watched the episode with her parents, AND IN THE FIVE SECONDS OF DIALOGUE HER FATHER JUST HAD TO HAVE A CANADIAN ACCENT... JUST GREAT
has potential. will fallow.
4012684 Lol.
THIS GUNNA BE GOOOOOOOODDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write on my compatriot, and Write well!!!!!!
11/10, Approved!!!!
Oh shit this is not going to end well.
Guys, got three more days of nothing, and I should have another chapter out tonight. Expect... stuff.
OMG THIS SUCKED LOLOLOL
Kidding...I haven't even read it yet. I just wanted to do what you said not to
Aaaaanyway, this seems good. Seeing as i have 300+ stories in my read later section (I have no life...) I should probably just stick this along with them to, well...read later. Probably when it has more chapters and I won't be left at a cliff hanger.
4013249 I was just waiting for someone to comment *OMG THIS SUCKED LOLOLOL"
Nice job with the first chapter! But I noticed a typo,
"He then was too slow to cover his ears, as rarity Screeched in excitement ans blasted his ear drums out." You typed 'ans' instead of 'and'.
I wish you luck on the rest of the story!
4013341 my laptop broke, so now I get to write the rest of this on my tablet. Alot harder.
4013395
Ahhhhhhh, I follow ya.
I rate this story so far with 15/12 moustaches (on my phone so i cant really give u the moustaches yet)
you haven't watched the GGG episode, have you?
4013885 ggg?
4013904 Grand Galloping Galla... the one where Blueblood courts Rarity without acknowledging or doing anything for her in any way (other than use her as a shield)
4013925 Yep. Read the authors note please.
4013930 sorry, I read on the html version because the regular version gets kinda
fumessed up on my computer...I love spikebelle
Good chapter tho, but your wording needs some serious help if you want this to be really good and much much better!!!!!
4016539 just read through it again and saw " she met in magic school a little while back in magic school" my English teacher would punch me if he read this
4018019
Have you preferred a proofreader or even an editor?
4018204 no, never thought it was necessary, but now I keep finding mistakes after I publish chapters
4018361
Yeeaaahhh
We both have almost the same idea for the parents. No worries on the wait. I was in track at one time. I know how busy the meets can be. Good luck with everything.
4041544 did you write a story with parents, or is that what you thought they would be like?
4041565 It was a story. I'm thinking about rewriting it and making it better before putting it back on this site. I took it down some time ago. I did put the link in an earlier comment. You can take a look and see how I did it. I'm adding more details to mine to make it better. Anyways, keep up the great work on this story. I have to agree with an earlier comment about one turning themselves into the opposite species. Good Luck.
4041565 Just didn't have much detail to it.
scale back Huh?
now, if he were to have assaulted Spike, would it have been considered a hate crime or an act of treason?
because he was informed and acknowledged that Spike was royalty and was not posing any threat again him, and would have injured him because of his unwilling, natural-born traits
This looks like a job for Spike the Voice of Reason.
TOO BAD FOR SWEETIE AND SPIKE!!!!!
Things will ONLY begin to get much, much worse from here, AND I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!
Voice of reason powers, ROCKTIVATE!!!!!!
I am hoping Spike kicks her racist dad's ass till he has talon marks inside his ass
Come on Spike cheer up Sweetie with that "silver tongue" of yours lol. (Take that anyway you want.)
4041684 A hateful act of treason maybe?
You know you're a sorry excuse for a dad when you get bitch slapped by your own daughter.