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Dying. Funny thing, that. It never happens how you expect it.


Spike decides he needs a break from the awkward situation Twilight and Trixie have created at the library. To do so, he opts to spend the night with one of his good friends, Apple Bloom.

This story is a very short, one-shot side-story to Something About Her, taking place the same night as Trixie's first Ponyville performance. It isn't required reading, but it may enhance this story.

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Comments ( 60 )

D'AWWWWW! I love Spikebloom shipping! So adorable!

Instant fav! :moustache::heart::applecry:

I'm more towards the Spikebelle ship, but I will have to admit, really good job. Well written. Like and Fav! :eeyup:

Thank you everyone. I'm really glad you all liked it. :pinkiehappy:

This was short, sweet and cute. I definitely liked how you ended it as well. Most would want more but I honestly prefer this one to end like this.

9 out of 10 for Romance
8 out of 10 for Comedy
10 out of 10 for grammar
10 out of 10 for overall story.
A like your way! :moustache:

3893880 Only an 8/10 for comedy? :fluttershysad: Lol jk. Thanks for the compliments. :pinkiehappy: I think this story has gotten me my best reviews so far. :rainbowderp:

I love Spikebloom story's wish there where more.

But I have to wonder what happen at Sweetebells date?

Sweetiebell date.

Kids mom: I know what you are thanking you little devil child! Your not taking my baby colt away from me!

Random customer next to her: who are you talking too?

Kids mom: "Shhhhh can't you see I'm trying to find a way to save my baby colt from that she-devil over there!"

Random customer: waiter check please!

3894208 Lol. That very well may be another spin-off I do, but it may not be. I put another little hint of SweetieMash in Trixie's Return, which is what started this entire thing.

I wish these dislikers would comment too so I could get an idea of what I need to improve upon. :unsuresweetie:

3896288 I wouldn't worry too much about that. I heard that a lot of dislikes are from people who just don't like the pairing. They don't even read the story. Don't let it get you down, you dd a great job. :pinkiehappy:

3896288 Know the feels, bra. :ajsleepy:


she ran after the purple dragon

Applebloom is chasing the purple dragon...

3898414 Lol. I didn't catch my own drug reference? Shit! Good eye. :rainbowlaugh:

3898511 Thank you for the good story

3898579 Thank you for enjoying it. Lol. I hope you enjoy more of my stories as well. :twilightsmile:

Oh god… the DAWWWWWs….. *dies* :heart:

*dies as well*
(Who will be the next victim?)


*rubs hands together sinisterly* good, GOOD!

Spiek Shipz. Foe Reel Dough.

It was a neat story, but I just feel like the story ended right when it got interesting. A lot of people do this, and it sort of gets annoying after a while.

3902575 I honestly didn't want to venture into clop in this fic, just some harmless, sleepy cuddles.

Actually, I was just thinking about how their relationship develops from this point, and what pitfalls they may or may not run into. :twilightblush:

3902789 Oh. I didn't really think about that because all but one of my stories so far have been in the same universe, so the other stories, from this point on, will have elements of their relationship. It might not be the most popular idea, but i was something different I wanted to do. Not all my stories will be like that, however.

Oh... ok, thats pretty cool!
Now that I know that I'll go check out the other stories. :twilightblush:

3903053 Lol. Love Drunk is seperate. Trixie's Return is the beginning, and this story takes place during chapter 3 and 4 of Something About Her, the sequel to Trixie's Return. It's small now, but I have big plans for this universe. :pinkiehappy:

not bad my friend, not bad

I should be thanking you for the nice little story that clarify the situation.:twilightsmile:

3924782 No, really. Thank you. If you hadn't given me the idea, I probably never would have written this, and it's quickly become my most popular story :pinkiehappy::heart:

Cuteness at it's finest, everypony! Pay CLOSE attention!

Cute and fluffy and just the right amount of puppy love.:heart:

Comment posted by LightningBass94 deleted Mar 4th, 2014

Oh no...SPIKEBLOOM? :ajsleepy: :applecry: :twilightoops: :facehoof: :unsuresweetie: :trixieshiftleft: :rainbowwild:

4109893 Read it before you decide it sucks. :trixieshiftright::rainbowwild:

4110807 Good point, sorry. :fluttershyouch: I'm just not a big fan of Spike, that's all. Sorry. I will read it.

4110807 Okay, I read it and it wasn't bad. Very well written, I just don't like the plot idea. Sorry again, I should keep my rude comments to myself. :derpytongue2:

4110932 You were only a little rude in the first comment, and everything since has been pleasant. I'm perfectly happy that you were capable of enjoying my work, despite disliking the premise of the story and one of the main characters. Thank you.

Fuckin adorable! Glad you didn't have ruin the moment with sex or butt rape, clop is getting kind of old in my opinion.

4163680 Lol. Love isn't about sex, so why include it everywhere? :twilightsmile:

4163708 EXACTLY! I try not to add it in my stories ^^

4163716 I'm not good at clop, and sex has a presence in some of my stories, but not a large one. :eeyup:

4163727 Its fine if you enjoy clop, what I mean to say is it gets more attention than I think it deserves.

4163737 Ah, I see, well you're probably right about that. I didn't mean clop though. Typically my shipfics are kept at a teen rating, and sex is mentioned, and it may even happen, but it's not shown, and it's not something that happens too terribly often.

4163756 Ok, I see where your getting at. Well I'll stop spamming your comment section now, have a good day. :)

4163782 Lol. I don't mind, really. Take care. :twilightsmile:

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