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This story is a sequel to Nightmare Moon Returns

Rainbow Dash Follows Scootaloo home one day and soon finds out that Scootaloo has been guarding a secret...Action and adventure begin to ensue as a certain group of ponies set their sights on Scootaloo and plan to use her as the catalyst to revive the god of chaos and disharmony...DISCORD


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Comments ( 146 )


It's rated that way solely for the fact that there is a single explicit scene in the story. if not for that this would be related teen. :ajbemused:

I was hoping for blood and gore. :fluttercry:



Just read on, you'll get your action and all that later in the story...:rainbowwild:

Dude, half the flashbacks are missing, and I imagine that is why I'm so fucking confused, I've been enjoying this story, so could you fix this chapter maybe?

:rainbowdetermined2:Sounds like it's time for a triple chainsaw bypass.


O.o! Holy shit! i didn't see that...you can thank the "super WIP" google docs importer for that...:facehoof: i fixed it now though i think.:twilightsheepish:

Damn you, Discord! *Initiating face pounding of Discord* Arrrrghhh! You motherrrrfuuuuckerrrr!!!

"SHINTEN TENSEI!" as soon as Pain said that, Discord was blown away at a breakneck speed and ended up crashing into a brick wall and breaking his neck. Discord was finally dead.

I refuse this story of Discord's past (because humans can't be destroyed no matter what), he is a part of the Q Continuum and that's that.

Quite alright.
Now, tis time to continue reading!:pinkiehappy:

357406 Star Trek, the character that the voice actor for Discord plays in Star Trek has the exact same powers as Discord.
Q = Discord's human form in fanon


I know THAT.
I don't get the triple chainsaw bypass thing.

359185 Gears of War, main assault rifle is the Lancer Assault Rifle with a chainsaw attachment. The Chainsaw bypass thing happens when you are inside the body of a giant rockworm that the Locust worship as a god, you find it's three hearts and saw through all it's arteries and then saw your way out of it's body, nearly drowning in blood.


I lol'd.

Is it just me or are there more grammar mistakes in this chapter?

I am... so confused....
Sweetie Belle is part of Pinkie Pie?
Trixie is Nightmare Moon?
Ursa major?
Twilight is Luna's daughter/ and alicorn...
Applebloom? I'm not sure i want to know...
Rarity died?
A sonic flutter-boom?
Luna is.... trapped? dead?
What the heck happened?


Bucking h*ll... you seriously fixed it?
I'm still so confused... are things going to be explained more clearly?
I am not a clever pony... and my brain is starting to hurt... :derpyderp1:
So many things wrong at once and no full explanation as to how they happened or why...
Maybe they all get explained in the next chapter?
or.... more fictions? :derpyderp2:


To be honest it's not shocking your confused.:derpytongue2: this is the third installment in the story series. the second was "the secret to mah success" the first is still unfinished which is why i was hesitant to upload it here but i think i will. Look for the story"Nightmare Moon returns" as i'll be uploading it very soon

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This story is so awesome :rainbowkiss: and i love the music cues you chose, they tie in great with the story. Especially love the Rarity "fight" scene (if you want to call it that).


That would have been... great to know :rainbowwild:
Maybe a little blurb on that in the description? I dunnno


haha! sorry! :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh: I have also been working on a prequel to this story series as well and i'm thinking of uploading here as well^^


lol, its fine. :pinkiesmile:
But I'll be darned if I don't hate reading a story backwards! :derpytongue2:

I just read "The Secret of Mah Success" but not the other stories and know im gonna fricking have to read them to know what the fuck is happening
Ps: you just put the word Paradox in an insane new level, congratulaions you are in muy top 10 fav autors have all my internets and my applejacks:
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Thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed them!^^

Fluttershy is a BEAST!!!!:flutterrage:

Fluttershy: "Tree powers activate!"

Noooo!!! I finally caught up and now i have to wait. :fluttercry:
Hurry,... If that's ok with you.

i know that some how that scootaloo will come back to her normal seft
*fingers crossed*

btw awsome story

i missed the first story then, a info in the discription would have been nice

this is really confusing, the first story is the unfinished one posted last.
AHHH my Head

this story is soo fucking awsome :D continuing now

is there going to be more chapters? btw this fiction was the best i read soo far


Yes, there will be, but for now i am going to be working on the latest episode of our abridged series soon.:raritywink:

my defeats were just setbacks.


DON'T YOU DARE HURT FLUTTERSHY!! NOOOOOOO!!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage:

Also, quick note, Gilda isn't a hippogriff, she's a griffon.

Other than that, if Fluttershy is harmed, flutterrage will consume us all!

"WHO ELSE WANTS SOME" that made me laugh so much

um...wow you really went all out on the sexscene details didnt you, this is the first fic iv read that has

God damn mother fucking cliffhangers :twilightangry2:

please tell me this will be finished soon and please save fluttershy...she is best pony and lets face it she cant die from such a puny attack if she can go ape shitt like that and send a 2 story creature flying across the room with a single punch,i mean seriously.


Consider this: If Discord was powerful enough to knock Fluttershy off IN THAT STATE. Then i thought that would display the sheer amount of power he holds.

yes but this is fluttershy we are talking here, the pony with the greatest iron will of all and nothing,not even death itself can keep her down when her friends need her...nothing with keep her from her friends

FLUTTERSHY!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

Awesome Chapter as always!

But Im confused, is the sweetie ressurection part of the next chapter of "Nightmare Moon Returns" ?
A lot of it feels like there is some backstory missing. Did I miss a 4th story?

Scootaloo didn't even practice as much as Rainbow and she can already do the Rainboom from a single demonstration? That's some bs.


Filly dash didn't practice either yet she did it.:raritywink:


it's a plot device i put plan on using in nightmare moon returns when i pick it up again. so don't worry, you'll get the full picture so to speak when i begin it again.

I'm guessing you got your inspiration from "Past Sins" here... seeing all the references in this story :twilightsmile:

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