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This story is a sequel to A Filly's Tale

The forth installment to the series is here!

One by one the elements of harmony were killed by an evil they could not defeat... But when all seemed lost a ray of light appeared in the form of six ponies. Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Sweetie Belle race against time to find the remaining elements of harmony. But they aren't the only ones searching for the remaining elements of harmony. Two ponies are also on the hunt as well...

Will they find the remaining elements in time? Or is Equestria doomed to uncertain death?


This is a direct Sequel to A filly's tale and takes place ten years later after the events of the story.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 32 )

wow this isn't going to be sugary sweet gum drops and rainbows is it, to think those two would be taking out the elements too. good story even if its off to a dark beginning. curious tho will bloom be ok since she is also an element (love) or is she going to suffer the same fate. guess i'll have to wait and see huh.

just what the hell are they? the green magic I'd say changelings but they don't have that kind of power. they have to be even stronger then discord in his god state seeing how quickly and easily they took out the mane 6. even NMM didn't last long in the end. hoping to see those 2 get there flanks kicked soon.


More will be revealed soon. :pinkiehappy:

Poor Twilight :fluttercry: she lost her friends:raritycry:

I wonder what element rosey is going to be. and with the recent spoilers I can't help but notice the eyes in the story's picture and think of the new king (sombre?) any chance he's going to be part of this story or is this going to be some other dark force (like changelings or something?) was nice to have a more up beat tempo this time the first 2 where a bit depressing having to get rid of the former elements of harmony.

Now to watch and wait for more... •_• :pinkiesmile:

... So, are Octavia and Scratch like assassins or something? Is their part in this story going to be huge? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png

And I may or may not have read this already, forgotten to comment, then seen your blog post and gotten so terrified that I came back and made this comment. You know I love you Sia, right? :heart: Right...? Don't hurt me... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png


Octavia and scratch will play a big role in this story yes and one of them will play an even BIGGER role later on...which one you ask? well you'll just have to wait and find out. :twilightsmile:

Also: thank you for commenting! I don't wanna seem like an attention whore but this fic has 8 likes and about ten favs on it i think. I just want to know if people enjoy my work because if they like or fav, I KNOW they read the chapters.


No problem about the comment, I can imagine putting in a lot of work for a fic, and then to not really hear or see any results from it must be frustrating. I must admit, it's a thing I've gotten into the habit of, trying to burn through as many fics per day, and consistantly forgetting to leave comments, faves, thumbs, etc.

I've been a very bad Hydro. rlv.zcache.com/i_have_been_very_naughty_sticker-p217463054996497867envb3_400.jpg

I'm fuzzy on some of the details, but I'm starting to remember everything that happened in the previous stories... the one's that I read at least.... I really need to stop jumping around in these.

“What a monster! Her speed, power, and senses are beyond what our reports could have recorded!” Octavia thought to herself dramatically.



but, since I've already started reading this one...


The Pegasus didn't reply this time but instead disappeared seemingly in a blur and began to strike Scratch from all directions in a cascade of strikes which ended with an uppercut which sent the unicorn flying skyward only for Scootaloo to appear just above her as she was flying towards her, reared her hind hooves up, and bucked her hard which sent the unicorn flying to the ground with a loud impact directly in the middle of Octavia's battle with Applebloom and Sweetie Belle.

Barrage of Lions? (I forget Sasuke's name for it)

The voice replied in an eerie echo voice.

:pinkiegasp: the voice spoke in a voice!!! :trollestia:

“We can't take this sitting down! We have to avenge them!” Scootaloo exclaimed in a determined tone.

Krushnazag: Then stand up

“But how? What can we do?” Sweetie Belle asked curiously.

:facehoof: Just... nevermind


No, that was not the the ref i used at all, where did you get that?

That's the visual ref i used, minus all the flashy magic in it.

1518601 lemme go see if I can find a clip

Only with Sasuke it was just him, not clones. Though, now it does sound more like an omnidirectional thing.... curse you things with omni-

discords alive inside of rosey I just know it. he along with luna and celestia is the only other one to know of that language. it also explains why they wouldn't understand (when she was talking to some one she mentioned they wouldn't understand) got a feeling Nightmare Moon is behind this, not sure how but it just seems to wreak of her doing. too bad chrysalis didn't get to have more time but i'm sure she'll be back after all she represents the element of swiss cheese ^^


Oh so you think it's nightmare moon do you?


Try again!XD

Of course when you do find out who it is, YOU. WILL. SHIT. BRICKS. :rainbowwild:

well i would of guessed chrissy but yeah you killed that idea. nightmare moons the only one I can recall thats black and has friendship issues heh.

oh and if I do crap bricks I'm selling them on craigslist, lil gold paint i'll be rich lol

This is really flippin' awesome.

This is making me think far too much of the battle of Hogwarts.... I LOVE IT ^w^

kinda confusing how some bits are bold while the rest aint.:scootangel:

That would be thanks to google docs importer fucking up again....:twilightangry2::facehoof:

3636936 does that a lot, that's why I just type it out in open office and copy/ paste then L_wolf helps edit it. :scootangel:

been wondering when this was going to be updated. had to read a few chapters back to fully get caught up but it was still a good piece. it was good to hear more about discord and how he came to be what we knew from the original filly's tale was good but a bit vague. this adds so much more to his history.

will this ever be not on hiatus??


No. The filly has no relation to Nightmare Moon

I didn't say that what i meant was Nyx was created from a spell designed to resurrect Nightmare Moon



Really nice work you made. I started reading from Applebloom's secret, then ended up reading " A fillie's tale", which I enjoyed reading a lot, though I found that the end was a bit shortcut, but no problem, itt ended well, I Just couldn't feel the happiness they should've feel when they won.
Back to business, I wanted to ask, when will you finish this story? Because it was a bit too hard from you that you removed the mane six from existence and I won't be very happy if something worse happens to the survivors :/ and I suppose the mane six will never return...
I know it's fiction but the very thought of their defeat (too easy was) is a bit disheartening..
P.s.: sorry for my bad english if you find something strange :D

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