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Friendships are broken. Worlds are disappearing. Hope is fading. Who can change the fate of Equestria when they themselves are already lost?

When even the Elements of Harmony together are not enough to save Equestria, where will our heroes go for help?

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I'll read this later, after I finish a chapter of my own. I shouldn't be browsing the interwebz while I'm supposed to be writing! :pinkiecrazy:

So its safe to assume were entering a alternate universe here since Luna apparently came back 700 years ago yet the mane 6 and shining armor are still alive or did i miss something..........

My good sir, you managed to do something that not many authors have managed to do.
You sent a shiver down my spine.
When I read that it had left the night darker than before, all of my childhood fantasies about being a keyblade wielder came back to me.
And now my teenage fantasies of being in Equestria have been made twenty percent cooler.
I can only hope that you don't go exactly according to the plot of the games, but rather, make up your own storyline, in which all of the mane six are keyblade wielders.
Because then, you could have them rushing to meet back up in an attempt to converge their powers to stop...Whoever is responsible for opening Kingdom Hearts.
And, you could cover more ground in terms of worlds, and personalized moves/keyblades.
Like, R.D. would be aerial assaults, and Fluttershy would be mostly healing and defense, A.J. would be a tank, Rarity would have...
Twilight would be the magical gauntlet, and Pinkie Pie would be Pinkie Pie.
Anyway, I should stop suggesting ideas. I don't want to seem self-important.
Good luck, and please, just one thing...
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR.
Please...

you put spike in it. thank you

Cannot wait for the keyblade swinging, heartless smashing, magical pony awesomeness. :pinkiehappy:
And like Gylden, just one more thing;
Please give us MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!:flutterrage: :twilightoops: :twilightsheepish:

In all honesty if Sora Donald and Goofy aren't in here i wont continue reading

sorry

Spike's gona get a keyblade I just know it

Why aren't you including Pinkie, AJ, and Dashie? :pinkiesad2:

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It has been 7 years, not seven hundred!:pinkiegasp:
So expect everyone to make an appearance!:pinkiehappy:

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The plan was to ponify it, so I haven't ruled out putting them in as minor characters our hero meets along the way.
Sorry if this isn't what you wanted exactly :pinkiesad2:

543424 lol iv just been hopeful for a Kingdome hearts x over wiht sora but n luck so far

543185

They will definitely make appearances, I will alter the major characters shown several times as the story progresses. I would hate to spoil it for everypony!:moustache:

541587

Great ideas! I reaaally wanted to mirror some of the characters on the original story, but you sure make this sound better :raritystarry:
And expect worlds not from Disney as well, since I can do that:rainbowlaugh:
Welcome to any worlds you guys might want to show up as well, so don't hesitate!

543416 I swear it 700 hundred......... :yay: drugs.

To be fair on the Sora Goofy Donald front they have form changed before into lions so ponies defiently isn't out of the question

After getting all your feedback, it looks like you want the mane six to all have keyblades. :trixieshiftleft:
:trixieshiftright: I thought it would make them too overpowered, but I think I know how to put that in.
Thinking outside the box means I can think inside a chimney!:pinkiehappy:

There are two Disney villains I really want to see in this story. The first one is the character Scroop from Treasure Planet, one of few Disney villains who actually succeeded in killing one of the good guys before being defeated.
The second is an idea I had a few years ago: a beast created by combining the four main Titans from Hercules, the Rock Titan, Ice Titan, Lava Titan, and Tornado Titan. Give it the heads and torso of the Rock Titan, the legs of the Ice Titan, the arms of the Tornado Titan, and a volcano situated on its back to represent the Lava Titan.

543447 Hm... Any worlds...
James Cameron's "Avatar"?
The original "Transformers" television show?
For shits and giggles, the different generations of MLP?
AVENGERS!!???
God of War world?
Super Mario Galaxy-themed world?
Legend of Zelda world?
Star Trek world?
Star Wars world?
Planet of the Apes?
Harry Potter?
LEGO Harry Potter?
Little Big Planet 2 world?
Atlantis: The Lost City?
THE HUNGER GAMES!!??
Uh...
That's all I can come up with in my overworked state.
Muffins! :derpytongue2:

543994

Ah! That was one of the worlds I was going to do! Forgot about the spider psycho though:rainbowderp:

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All good ones! I was thinking more of the classics. Mario will definitely be one, but more like Super 64 than Galaxy:rainbowwild:
:moustache:Atlantis will be a perfect replacement for Little Mermaid too.

545847

Yeah, he's one of the characters I'm shocked wasn't in the real KH games. I mean, come on, he's a ten foot spider monster with claws for hands, that would have been an awesome boss battle.
Also, please tell me when they leave Equestria all six of them will be going. If nothing else, at least let Dashie come along. A KH/MLP crossover would just feel empty without Dashie coming along when they leave Equestria. If you don't have Dashie come with them, I'm gonna unwatch this.

WOW DA INTRO
now i got two kh story to look fowerd to thx man
ps any new keyblade holders or none :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

545847 Hey, why not a Crayola world?
They made a few computer games, and you can play on your name. :rainbowwild:

Lol I just realized: "Twilight, use the square button to dodge!"
Twilight: "Wat?"

"The power of Love shall protect us!"
*gets shot in the knee with an arrow*
"FUUUUUUUUUUU-"

I just took a break after a 6 hour play of the first game... and this is the first fanfiction I see...
:raritydespair:
IT'S FOLLOWING ME :fluttershbad::fluttershbad:

There were a few words missing and some mis-spelt words, but other than that, this is getting epic real fast. :pinkiehappy:
554352 :pinkiegasp: That. Is. AWESOME! :pinkiehappy:

When I read this:
Out through a special door in Canterlot is another world. You and Rarity must send the rest of the
Elements of Harmony to Canterlot, so they may travel through it.
I was like:
FUCK YES! YES, THEY'RE ALL GOING TO BE IN!
Beyond these doors will be somepony with a "key"-- the key to our very survival.
But they won't all have keyblades?
I r sad.
Oh, and thanks for taking my advice! R.D., agility; Fluttershy, healing; Applejack, a total tank; etc., etc.
Also, I mentioned your story in my newest blogpost, so hopefully you'll get a few more views. :pinkiehappy:
Anyway, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:




Or I will eat you! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiecrazy:

558005
Thanks for the shoutout, and it was great a idea too :pinkiehappy:
It says somepony. I didn't say there would only be one :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

554352
:raritystarry:Must..:rainbowhuh: look... :pinkiehappy:away...:yay:

558432 Oh, sweet.
I must've missed that bit.
So, let me get this straight:
They're going through the door to find...
Themselves?
And where is Rarity going? Is she tagging along with Twilight?
Is it basically like: R.D., Fluttershy, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie all take up the role of Sora in a sense, and Rarity and Twilight are Donald and Goofy? And Spike is Pluto (oddly enough)?
In that case, it would be awesome to see how each of them visited different worlds.
And I would love to see what would happen if Twilight visited the world of Hugo.
"Must...Not...Be...TARDY!!!"
(If you don't know, Hugo is a young boy who maintains the clocks in Kings Cross Station [I believe, idk what station it actually takes place in] in a fictional story by the same name. Without him, the clocks would stop.)

554341 First game chronologically, or in released order?
Because if you're talking first game, you're talking BBS (and the obvious prequel to that, I mean come on, it's from the guys who made Final Fantasy, there's obviously going to be a prequel. And a sequel, to explain how Triton knew about the keyblade wielders in KH1.)
Anyway, I've commented enough on this story to make a damn book out of the comments, and I'm definitely flooding iateacrayon's notification inbox.


:trollestia:

558987

I can't say yet :ajsleepy:
All will be clear soon. Or not. :pinkiecrazy:
If I find time to watch the Hugo movie, I'll see what I can do :moustache:
It just means I have to add more chapters soon :fluttershysad:

559277

I might also include The Hunchback of Notre Dame as well, if it hasn't been done in any of the Kingdom Hearts games.

558987 559003 BTW, Hugo is from The Hunchback of Notre Dame.
Just sayin.

Reading this cause Gylden wanted me to...
I'm barely holding on to the plot

559474
Don't worry :twilightoops:
Unknown enemy so far, Princesses missing, mane 6 told to save Equestria by going through magic doors to other worlds of movies and video games :duck:
Most of what you need to know is explained in the next two chapters. :pinkiehappy:
Based on the video game Kingdom Hearts. It is not necessary to have played the game to follow this:trixieshiftleft:
:trixieshiftright: new characters you won't know about are from that game, but I will explain the origins of any that appear in the story.
It is intentionally mysterious in the beginning on who the bad guys are, so somepony who's never heard of the game can enjoy it as well :rainbowderp:

560036
huh:rainbowhuh:
...
...
...
What is Kingdom of Hearts???
pardon my curiousity

561701

You'll find out soon enough, but here's the basic info :pinkiehappy:

I am afraid I will have to unfavourite this. While on paper Spike may seem a good choice for Sora's role, it doesn't really work out, because it is hard to get the image of Spike with a mental age of 6-7 out of our minds. Also, in my mind, Twilight would not be so stupid to give into the darkness like Riku, especially if it would mean abandoning her friends.

While I can see why it might seem like a good idea(hands, not done yet etc...) , it just doesn't click. Sorry.

571832

Valid points, which is why I hope you check the story out in a couple months or so when it's finished, to see how I worked those points into the story. :fluttershysad::fluttershysad:
But I am glad somepony feels this way. I find it more enjoyable and exciting to write this now.

Now I'm perplexed by trying to figure out how you'll work with their individual groups. If you've got Rarity as Kairi and Twilight as Riku, that tells me you probably won't have the actual Sora, Kairi, and Riku in this story; making it an analogue-style crossover instead of the kind of crossover where they meet the characters from the other series.
Aside from that, I can't help but wonder what's gonna be happening with Fluttershy, AJ, Pinkie, and Rainbow while Spike, Rarity and Twilight are playing out the actual plot of KH. Please tell me one of the other four is gonna get a Keyblade; it just wouldn't feel right in my opinion to have Spike get one but not have any of the mane six get one (and no, I don't count the evil Keyblade you're probably going to give Twilight; I mean one that is used for good).

So, wait...
Rainbow Dash is basically going to be Ventus...
Spike is Sora...
Twilight is Rikku...
Fluttershy is...Fuck, I don't know.
Rarity is Aqua...
Applejack is Terra...
And Pinkie Pie is...Roxas? Oh, shit, no no no, nonononnononoonoo.

573076
They will meet, but it's easier to imagine it as if Sora's plot happens alongside this one.

573774
Nice try, but only two were even close. :pinkiehappy:
I've hit that point where anything I say could be a spoiler. :raritycry:

581269
:moustache:He's grown up quite a bit, but that part is open to your own interpretation.
About as big as Celestia.

Did Spike and Rarity do what I think they did? Spike is still a kid but I like to see where this is going.

Still but how much has he grown up. Dragons can be hundreds of years old.

Sweet! And if you think about it, it's pretty obvious why Spike should be the one to wield the Keyblade. He's pretty much the only one who's bipedal, and therefore, the only one of the mane cast who can use it.

I find your lack of Disney villains in that scene disturbing.

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