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Diamond Tiara, with the encouragement of Silver Spoon goes to Ponyville's local pawn shop to do some shopping. There, she finds a mysterious artifact that allows her to see into another pony's mind! Sadly, everything comes crashing down as she learns one pony's deep, dark secret.
Pre-read by: Theo Vellum
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Silver Spoon, you better not let Spike find that, or an explosive nosebleed will occur, probably twice.
I had a lot of fun doing the pre reading for this one, it's actually my first time pre reading. I won't say I did perfect, but it was a pretty good experience and one I wouldn't mind doing for those who asked.
As for the story, it was a lot of fun. I wonder if that sequel will ever come though...
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More please.
...
Excuse me while I go take a cold shower.
Always over the top, but never too far. Scoots was perfectly adorable in this. I hope to see a sequel soon xD
It should be illegal to make one laugh so hard.
Well, pretty much what I expected from you. Thumbs up!
A pin up poster of Rarity in a bikini?
uh Sliver Spoon
Thats is Rarity right now
what
And it will make you look FABULOUS!!!
Um ... kind of hope so.
DT loses 1D6 points of sanity
It was okay. The jokes were amusing but could have used a hair better delivery.
You overuse the word 'strange' a bit, including one point where you say the amulet "strangely looked like a strange eye".
I demand a sequel. Is anyone thinking what I'm thinking?
(Romancey stuff....) 
... I have Elmo's World stuck in my head now.
So much spite for you.
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Spoiler alert.
I wished this could have been multi chapters, finding the thoughts of the residents.
3872260 Thanks for ruining the story, I appreciate it!
Okay,, that was weird. Not in a bad way, but still pretty weird.
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I suppose that's my fault, should have deleted it. Hope you two were still able to enjoy the story regardless, but that reveal was probably the best thing in this story. Again, sorry it was ruined.
3874236 Meh, It's alright. The story was still amazing
That was awesome!
More please
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Soooo sorry. I just couldn't keep it in!
Interesting premise, and I like what you did with it. I'd love to see more from the world you've created here; seeing more ponies use the amulet, particularly the pony who found it at the end of the story, would be quite interesting.
OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
3871606 As the pre reader for this, and one who loves their own abilities at spotting others mistakes, I'm ashamed to say I did not spot that.
I'll ask Matt if we can look over it one more time to see if there's anything else, I want all the stories I do to feel 100% natural and error free. Sorry, once again.
I'd love to see a more serious take on this premise. That said, this was great.
...Sequel?
Pretty please with sugar on top?
I liked it it was funny i just had to laph.
dafuq
NO, THIS IS NOT THE END!!! THIS STORY DEMANDS A SEQUEL!!!!!
(Preferably one where Scootaloo gets the amulet, since the CMC did see DT throw it away, and you did make Scoots have a crazy crush on DT.)
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This turned a very strange corner.
Nice silly little story. A story I wouldn´t mind to get a sequel if you want of course.
Sweetie Belle Derelle's mind:
...
I'm so sorry.
This plot about mind-reading amulet had potential, but you didn't realize it. What a shame.
3881225 You must be new here, Matt is a comedy person, not a plot person. He rarely does any long fics.
Silver Spoon likes a poster of Rarity in a bikini?!
Wow! 
Scootaloo, NO!
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At least his fics are good, no?
Well that was brilliant
Rubber duckie, you're the one
you make bath time so much fun
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I personally find his fics bland and pedantic
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Me and Theo actually had a conversation about this
. Sadly, no sequel is planned, hell, I didn't even think this fic would get so popular 
!
I demand a sequal