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TroubleMaker


Meet my OC: Trouble Maker. Also known as, the Tyrant Pony. His story will be coming soon. If you have any questions for him, he has a Tumblr ask blog.

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Apple Bloom has the perfect prank: trick Diamond Tiara into thinking a spell was put on her to make her Apple Bloom's slave.

"What could possibly go wrong?"

Well, when the prank works...

Everything.

Note: This story was conceived pre "Crusaders of the Lost Mark."

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Comments ( 28 )

awesome story hope you do more of diamond tiara an apple bloom it's funny seeing these two shipped lol

Interesting... I shall take a look.

"What? You hang out with Rainbow Dash long enough, you pick up a few things."

Best line in the entire fic. LMAO, no joke. Have an upvote.

This makes DT 20% cooler. Have a like.

Damn. DT's imagination must be very... uh... impressive.

nice :rainbowlaugh:
unsuspected, but nice. That earns a like from me :pinkiehappy:

The poomf of Scootaloo's wings could be heard throughout the schoolyard.

I started laughing hysterically. Even now I'm grinning ear to ear. I can just see Scootaloo standing there staring at the scene sorta blank faced and drooling slightly, completely unaware of her wingboner. And Silver Spoon's complete lack of a reaction just tickles me pink. I tip my hat to you, good sir/lady.

This is great! Jolly well written and highly amusing. Keep up the estimable work! :pinkiehappy:

I enjoyed the Shakespearean dialogue. And the meta shipping discussion. And everything.

And… to be honest, Diamond×Bloom is a more plausible ship than most. After all, Diamond has long been shown to be unusually obsessed with Apple Bloom beyond what one would expect from a schoolyard bully. Maybe that's just the shipping goggles talking, but it's how I see it.

You know, I like it. Really. I wish there would be more shipping like this.

Heh, this was cute. Not sure if I liked Scootaloo's, Sweetie Belle's, or Silver Spoons respective role best. :pinkiehappy:

My gosh... I did not expect this story to be this well received. :raritystarry: Thank you all!

I haven't read a DiamondBloom/AppleTiara fic like this since the good old Mattricole days. Scoot's epic poomf moment, and that very educative short explanation was hilariously well played.

A new generation of AppleTiara is born. <3

I prefer diamond bloom..has a nice ring to it ü Great story! Have a like :twilightsmile:

Well, as that saying clearly states, all Irish people go to hell.

Lay into me, internets! :moustache:

Okay! That's a funny fanfiction! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
I would try to analyze this story so I can imply new techniques, but this to me was more of a slight distraction from the larger scale stories I'm used to reading. All I can say is, well done! Have a mustache. :moustache:

SHIP IT!:flutterrage:

6628232 *snerk* What, do ya think we're gonna disagree? May you be a half-an-hour in Heaven before the Devil knows you're dead.

*before reading story* Hm. This can only go one way. It begins with a w and ends with a g and rhymes with gong. LET'S READ IT!:trollestia:

*after first paragraph* ... the situation is worse than I could have conceived.

*after everything goes downhill* ... And now I'm rethinking my decisions. And falling flat on the floor with no pillow to catch me oh god help *crash*

Before Diamond Tiara could react, Apple Bloom leaned in and kissed her. It wasn't a long kiss, but long enough for Silver Spoon to be stunned and for the other crusaders to be horrified.

Awww . . . :twilightsmile:

When Silver Spoon recovered from the shock, she noticed that her friend hadn't moved. "Still distracted by her blank flank, huh?" she teased.
"Sh-shut up!"

:rainbowlaugh:

She turned around and stuck her rump in Apple Bloom's face. "Punish me Mistress! My body is ready!"

:pinkiehappy:

"So many new fanfiction ideas..." Silver Spoon began to drool.

:rainbowlaugh:

I think there should an alterative ending like maybe apple bloom accepts diamond tiara as her slave :unsuresweetie:maybe

LOL on the Irish proverb!:rainbowlaugh:

"What? You hang out with Rainbow Dash long enough, you pick up a few things."

This is funnier than it should be... :rainbowlaugh:

Then she ran after Diamond Tiara to once again blast off at the speed of light.

"That doesn't mean you are straight," Scootaloo put in, "since that was years ago and you didn't even know what sex was. It is possible that you're attracted to both stallions and mares, which would make you bisexual, or pansexual depending on how you feel about transgender ponies. Of course, who you fall in love with might be a different story altogether."

Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle stared at their pegasus friend. "What? You hang out with Rainbow Dash long enough, you pick up a few things."

So...Rainbow Dash is the Captain Jack Harkness of MLP then? I can live with that.

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