[Romance] [Drama] [Comedy] [High School] [Slice of Life]
The Cutie Mark Crusaders are now in high school, and while they've already found their special talents, they are still being tormented by Diamond Tiara, as well as Silver Spoon. After Sweetie Belle notices Silver Spoon's behaviour when Diamond Tiara isn't around, the white mare wants to befriend the bully, much to the disapproval of her friends.
Silver Spoon, on the other hand, solely believes that nopony would befriend another pony without an ulterior motive, making it hard for Sweetie Belle's plans to work.
Chapters (8)
Sweetie Belle is the.... sweetest.
(Pardon the not too terribly punny pun)
This sounds interesting.
Sweet Belle :D Please moar.
Revised some minor grammatical and spelling errors in this chapter. Also, didn't notice a pun here.
Silver Spoon.
"Scoop."
Y'get it? Haha.
BA DUM TSSS.
... No? Okay. :c
I love these sort of stories and I rarely found anything withe cutie mark crusaders and Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks! Admittedly, I was ultimately inspired by numerous Silverbelle fanfics that I decided to write my own. Not exactly sure where I'm going with this, but there'll most likely be mixed shippings. I don't want to spoil anything, so let's just say this'll be a looooong fic.
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Chapter Four, coming right up... kind of. Give me some time. It'll be up soon! :)
I learned to love cliffys after almost a year of fan fiction. But this is my first time with MLP fics so I'm only slightly ticked.
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Well, truth be told, it's not much of a cliffhanger. I made it obvious as to what's going to come next.
But anyway, I'm currently writing the story as we speak. I have a lot of ideas to get out of my head, and I really don't want to forget them. A whole day of writing for me.
1862065 I'm sort of doing the same with my one fanfic but I'm more motivated because I'm leaving for Tahoe tomorrow. Speaking of that, I should be packing... but then again I also should not still be in my pajamas.
Well, I'm excited to see what's next! You sure post better than I do.... (like one chapter, 3 weeks later another chapter, 2 onths later another chapter is my usual.)
Okay, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo are being pretty awful in this chapter.
Other than that it's a good story.
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Haha, thanks. Don't worry, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo will improve and there's also some sort of reasoning behind it too. Plus, their best friend has expressed interest in befriending other ponies, and not only that, but it's Silver Spoon. You gotta know where they're coming from.
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Chapter Four is up. Lots of dialogue in this one. xD
More of Sweetie Belle's perspective in the next chapter too.
Ooooooo her dirty little secret
I just read another silverbelle fiction and loved it. Can't wait for this one to be done. Keep up the awesome work.
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Ooh, did you read The Serenade of Silver Belles or the Cutie Mark Crusaders Camping Trip? xD
/can't remember the titles word for word.
Anyhow, oh gosh, this fic is going to be a long one. This is only the friendship stage. The shipping hasn't even begun yet.
1864866 I read the camping trip one, i also now see that you have a fiction of my most favorite pairing. I just love Twixie fictions. I love this
and this
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Anyhow, yeah, I love Twixie, but my mind has been overcome by Silverbelle ideas, so I'm trying to release as many chapters as possible before returning to the Twixie fics. Rest assured, I'm not going on hiatus with the Twixie stories, just taking care of something else first.
Yeah. The camping fic was really well written, and I love the concept of it as well. Silverbelle is just... a cute pairing. Even the name sounds cute (what a revelation!).
SCOOTS!
SCOOTABELLE?
Ahem, anyway, I'll be updating this again tomorrow. I posted like, three chapters today, and now I'm sort of wiped out (well, it's 1 am here).
From here on out, I'll be expanding on several ponies' back stories, slapping in some dramatic moments, adding more romance (love triangle? Square? Pentagon? Hexagon? Who knows? Oh wait, I do!) and just putting in some slapstick comedy here and there. Like I said, this is going to turn out to be a long fic, so enjoy the ride. :)
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You have a good story here, and I'm willing to go through with it. I'll admit I'd like to see a Scootabelle developing, given the amount of Silver Belle (Or Sweetie Spoon? Damn they match up well...) but will take anything if it's good.
This story is pretty cute and I like the idea of this kind of soap operatic drama. Teen angst is one of my favorite genres, when it comes to reading.
That said, you may want to invest in a thesaurus. You recycle words often, mainly adjectives (ie: "intelligently" and "innocently") and it makes the writing a little clunky.
Other than that, keep up the good work!
This story is pretty cute and I like the idea of this kind of soap operatic drama. Teen angst is one of my favorite genres, when it comes to reading.
That said, you may want to invest in a thesaurus. You recycle words often, mainly adjectives (ie: "intelligently" and "innocently") and it makes the writing a little clunky.
Other than that, keep up the good work!
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Time to look up a thesaurus. xD
Most of the time, when I write my stories, I'm always half asleep (I literally just woke up, and I have a nasty headache, but my best ideas always come to me when I'm tired. That being said, being dead tired affects my choice of vocabulary negatively
)
It's funny because while I'm reading, I absorb so much vocabulary and I understand just about every single word that the author chose to insert, but when I'm writing stories myself, I'm like, absolutely clueless as to what I should do.
Gonna go spend half of my morning looking up synonyms for random words. :3
Thanks for commenting, and glad you're enjoying the story!
I'm Silverbelle, sorry Scoots...
To be honest, Scootaloo is my least favorite crusader. I like Sweetie Belle best, but I don't like her hair style...
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If this is a response to me (I'm on my phone and notifs are iffy sometimes), I know the feeling. For a while, I was keeping a notepad near my bed so I could scribble things down -- Things I later had to decipher because I wrote them in the dark, sans glasses.
I don't know what kind of word processor you use for writing, but in mine, if you highlight and right click a word it offers you synonyms and a thesaurus option. It's superhelpful, because my own large vocabulary often fails me as well.
Silver spoon is a earth pony you know
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I am aware.
Hehehehehehehe....... i luv dis story already....c:
Oh, yeah, like all of the fires that go off at about 0300, 0400, and other morning times. And how someone can explode for no explainable reason.
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Uh, what are you talking about?
>>Ponyzilla
I am just talking about Murphy's Law. As it also states that anything that can go wrong will go wrong at the worst possible time. For example, if my house were to explode at this instance, or if my water heater were to burst out of my house like a missile, then it would be applied to Murphy's Law, like you said. So I was just giving more examples.
Is this... nay, it couldn't be... I think it is... but... dare I hope? Dare I hope? A Silver Belle ringing in the distance? I must find out! Into the abyss I go, for my country!
Loathe,
Your Antagonist
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Didn't notice that but now i can't stop chuckling.
Wait, what?
What's with the sudden influx of readers / likers / favouriters?
2017896 Let's just say I'm a nice guy with an ironic user name. Now give me more story!
Loathe,
Your Antagonist
This is awesome!
I'm surprised that thier's so few Silverbell shippings on this site.
Oh how I love me some rising action
Man, Billy Mays should be selling this thing.
"BUT WAIT, THERE'S MOAR!"
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Yeah, I'm really busy at the moment; however, rest assured, I am still alive and I don't exactly plan on throwing this story away.
What a lovely interlude. When I saw this updated, I was instantly graced with a smile
agh!
you raise my hopes up then dash them in seconds! moar
please
Thanks for the interlude, even if it IS a little on the short side.
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Just wanted you guys to know that I'm still alive. ;P
I like it. Thumbs up and have a fave!
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HA!
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I'm okay with that...
"POSSIBLE SCOOTABELLE?
I THINK SO."
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS SACRED, DON'T FIX WHAT DOESN'T NEED TO BE FIXED...LIKE THIS WONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update: Edited this chapter. The scenario is still the same, but I've changed the wording and such. Enjoy! In the meantime, I will be working on revising my other chapters as well before moving onto writing the next one.
Update: Went ahead and edited this chapter as well. Again, scenario is still the same, but some things were just rewritten. Enjoy.